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[The young lady who is soft on the outside and strong on the inside VS the noble and cold-blooded capital boss]
[Second male lead + male protagonist chasing his wife in the crematorium]
When Yu Xi was ten years old, she was taken home by her biological parents and became the fiancée specially trained for Lu Chengyu.
Be dignified and never make mistakes.
But before the wedding, Lawrence Lu fell in love with Cinderella.
"Qiao Yan is still a student and cannot bear the stigma of miscarriage. You bear it!"
The proud and confident Master Lu was sure that Yu Xi would obey.
After all, no one would want a woman with Lawrence Lu's exclusive label all over her body.
Until the press conference, the female boss Yu Xi appeared with her boyfriend on her arm.
Everyone was shocked.
He Lanzhou? The eldest son of the He family? Capital boss? That unattainable, unattainable man?
Lu Chengyu lost control and fell to his knees with jealousy: "Baby, you still love me, right?"
The man looked down with contempt and indifference:
""Neither my patience nor her are prepared for you. Try harassing her again. "
Turning around, the dignified and cold-hearted man turned into a clingy big dog in an instant.
"Wife... Can you call me husband in front of him? "
"Yeah, hubby. "
Reader comments
A treasure was discovered. The whole story is complete and non-delayed. The rhythm is tight and there are slaps in the face. The heroine is sober and self-reliant. She blooms in suffering, knows how to use strength to fight, and is highly intelligent. Each item tickled my quirks. Bad guys are rewarded, and it has the potential to make a hit short drama.
Disadvantages: There are many details that can be added to the story. Most of the time, the author chooses to mention it in one stroke or simply describe it. Although the ending is sweet, it may be because the data is not very good, so the author chooses to sketch the ending, which is a bit hasty. But despite its flaws, I still like this book very much.
My humble opinion:
The abuse of the heroine is too shallow and plain compared to the harm suffered by the heroine herself. It can be seen from the content that the heroine was actually abused very much by her parents. Starting when she was 10 years old, the heroine's father committed domestic violence behaviors such as whipping, locking her in a dark room, and controlling the heroine in order to break her wings. There was a control group of little girls, and all kinds of abuse elements were put together, but it may be because the writing is weak (or it may be that the author does not want to spend time writing about the abuse of girls), so the abuse part did not make me cry (generally, when I read abuse stories, I can't help but shed tears when I see the heroine being hurt).
Secondly, the ending and the male protagonist need more interactive descriptions. The relationship with the male protagonist is very sweet and interesting. I really like watching the relationship between them. But it only ends with a few chapters, which is a pity. One is a heroine who does not believe that he will love the heroine, and the other is a heroine who has been hurt for the first half of her life and is waiting to be healed. This is actually a very interesting collision combination. There are two lines of career and life. The male protagonist is strong, sober, independent and respects women. Tomato has a good male protagonist design➕1. He will not be merciful in the face of evil, and he will not take the role of the female protagonist (after all, this book is a female channel).
Regarding the heroine's parents, I feel that multiple twists and turns can be arranged to add exciting points and slap-in-the-face plots to the writing. The current situation is that the heroine's parents are a pair of little bitter gourds. The adoptive mother raised a kind and strong heroine but also raised an evil son. The fake father, Boss Xia, is a character who is both good and evil. However, in order to enrich the image of the characters, I feel that they can be shaped more richly——
Boss Xia is a boss who devotes everything to the countryside and his employees. He secretly researches and makes fake medicines for the benefit of many terminally ill patients (but it also harms the interests of others). Please refer to I am not the god of medicine. At the same time, if a businessman wants to do business well, he must be protected by someone. He also has an evil side. In the dark years, he thought about his illegal bribery behavior when dealing with others, and kept various evidences scattered in the hands of employees and villagers, as a deterrent to others for many years;
The heroine's mother, Jiang Shanqing, as a fledgling college student, was deceived by these people into lurking in Boss Xia's pharmaceutical company to find evidence of counterfeit medicines in search of justice. She had a lover, but during her interactions with Boss Xia, Xia was moved by her truthfulness, kindness and beauty, and was attracted to her unknowingly. However, in fact, she wanted to send Boss Xia to prison. In the end, Boss Xia raped the heroine's mother out of despair of being betrayed, accidentally killed the person who secretly filmed evidence, and was sent to prison to be tried. Continuing from the original story line.
At the same time, three life experiences are arranged for the heroine to increase the effect of plot reversal and slap in the face. For example, she is neither the daughter of Xia nor the daughter of the Yu family, but the eldest daughter who lives among the people and was stolen by the family's mentally ill servant mother. After several twists and turns, the daughter happened to see Jiang Shanqing's death and abandonment. She exchanged these bags and quilts for the heroine and abandoned the heroine before committing suicide. He happened to be adopted by his adoptive mother. Triggered a series of subsequent stories.
Why do you want the author to arrange such a plot? Because the heroine has done nothing wrong, but she still has to bear the heavy burden of everything. The heroine's parents clearly enjoyed the benefits brought by the heroine, but they still punished the heroine with the so-called original sin. In the end, the truth was discovered that both the heroine's parents died, everything was calm and peaceful, and a minor daughter was left to take care of the heroine. Arranging this reversal of the plot can maximize the guilt of Yu and Jiang, who think they stand on the moral high ground. At the same time, the real relatives of the heroine will not give up looking for the heroine. After finding the heroine, they will slap all parties in the face to make up for the heroine's lack of family affection.
Personally, I feel that this novel has the bones and needs to enrich the plot. The ups and downs of the plot can attract readers more ~
Although your comment is short, it is very powerful! If we want to make it more vivid or more emotional, we can polish it a little bit. Here are a few different styles of versions, you can see which one is more suitable:
**1. Simple and powerful version**
This version is great for expressing core feelings quickly.
> This book is so well written!
**2. Warmly recommended version**
This version is highly personal and suitable for sharing with friends.
> This book is great! Highly recommended!
**3. Specific praise version**
This version highlights the advantages of the book in terms of "content" and "writing style", making it appear more sincere and persuasive.
> This book has solid content and smooth writing. It is indeed a good book!
You can choose to use it according to the specific situation. If you are willing to share which book it is, maybe I can help you write a more detailed review!
It's so good, but it's a pity that the ending is a little rushed. Both the male and female protagonists are very good. The male protagonist is respectful and polite to the relationship, and he won't rush into it if he likes it. He respects the female protagonist's feelings and gives the female protagonist the greatest sense of security. The heroine has been suppressed since she was a child, and she has not developed a twisted character. She is strong and independent, and she is not a virgin.
It's super good-looking. The theme is novel and the story is neither long nor short. I don't know why the rating is so low, but it's really good-looking. I have been so impatiently chasing other books recently that I almost forgot about that one when I found this one. Thank you for your hard work in writing this book.
Help, who wrote this book? Too over the top.
Oh, it turns out I wrote it.
I give the author an encouraging five stars. In fact, I like this rhythm. I like to watch ambiguous dramas. If I am really sure of the relationship, I will quickly lose interest. The plot of this book is actually not very complicated, but the writing has more ups and downs, and it doesn't feel like the word count is too low. I think a large part of the reason for the low rating is because after reading the title, I thought it was a purely slap-in-the-face article, but it turned out to be a slow-burning plot article. Many people are used to the intensive rhythm of the review, and have no patience to read it. The author also lost his patience, and the ending was indeed quite rushed, as if he had just read a summary. The explanation has been given, but it is still a bit of a pity. There is basically no sweet love anymore. All that is left is to finish the plot. Please encourage the author and hope that it can end better next time.
Although the ambiguous love between the male and female protagonists was very sweet, the female protagonist was so bitter. After watching it, she felt like she was soaking in bitter water... The female protagonist was so looking forward to a new life away from the family. She finally stood up straight, but suddenly a burden made her bend down again [almost crying] [almost crying]
What kept me going was: I wanted to see the retribution of those who bullied the heroine, but unfortunately there was none...
The male protagonist is really decent, while the female protagonist is more growth-oriented. She always talks about turning big things into small things, and only fights back after being bullied many times. The scumbag and the mistress almost jumped to the ending.
I stayed up late to read all the updates. They are very interesting. Is there any other situation about the heroine's life experience? Because the heroine has never done DNA directly with the man. It may be a coincidence that the blood type is the same. Based on that person's appearance, it is impossible to give birth to a daughter as beautiful as the heroine. Will there be a reversal in the future?
It's okay, it's not ugly, but the heroine's fate is a bit tragic at the beginning. Everything else is pretty good. It's a very concise article, basically focusing on the main points without any nonsense. It's just that the ending is too fast and I'm a bit uncomfortable. I thought I'd write more about the tragic ending of the vicious female partner and the scumbag.
The plot is compact and the story is perfect, but the ending is a bit unsatisfactory. The ending of the heroine's parents is both expected and unexpected. In the end, the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists when they got together could have been added, but after finally getting together, it was gone.
It's good to watch. The male protagonist was curious about the female protagonist at first and then turned into care and love. They finally got together near the end, which was a bit late [laughing awkwardly]. The female protagonist didn't just go to the male protagonist to solve any difficulties she encountered, but relied on her own efforts to fight for them. The heroine's fourteen years of misfortune were caused by a doctor. It can only be said that her biological father was not very strict and trusted that doctor too much.
Not bad, Tomato is one of the rare things that can give everyone a suitable motive for their actions, and it can be self-justified, and the vicious parents are not shameful. It is a pity to see it later.
Very interesting, the storyline is novel and attractive
It's a good read. I suddenly discovered this book after a book shortage. It's different from other books where the heroine is weak and weak, and the woman is strong and the man is strong. She's very sensible, and the plot is also the most different I've ever seen. There aren't so many brainless supporting characters. Overall, it's really good! !
The full text is concise and concise, and the words are meaningful without being superficial. The female protagonist is gentle, kind and strong, while the male protagonist is an informed, knowledgeable and guiding lover. All in all, it's an article worth reading.
The author's writing style is very good, and the heroine of the novel is also perfect. The score for such a beautiful novel should be higher.
Very beautiful, the language is humorous! ! ! ! ! !
So pretty, so pretty [laughing]
I just feel that the heroine's baby is so miserable🥹🥹🥹
How about making her happy when she grows up?
It's rare to read the whole book, hehe, it's so good to read, I've read it all [Like] [Like] [Like]
It's really beautiful. Don't be misled by the ratings.
It's very good, and the plot is also touching. It's a pity for Yu's father and Yu's mother. They are also quite pitiful. I thought they would reconcile a little bit in the end and help them take care of their children.
The writing is very detailed. I like it very much. I like the specifics. It really touches my heart. It is different from the cookie-cutter novels. I think this article is very unique and interesting.
I've never reviewed a book on Tomato, but this one is worth a listen. Give it a big thumbs up from the bottom of my heart! ! !
It's very beautiful. I sighed after watching it.
Say to the author: You wrote this book very well, really
It's a pretty good book, but it ends a bit abruptly.
The only book I read from beginning to end. Good looking [like]
What a great book. I stayed up until 3:30 and finished reading it!
So far, so promising. Hopefully the next parts will be equally engaging
Give it to me, I shouldn't be rated this way. I read every word and chapter without missing a beat. Author, you really captivated my heart. You wrote so well. You are awesome👏🏻
A treasure was discovered. The whole story is complete and non-delayed. The rhythm is tight and there are slaps in the face. The heroine is sober and self-reliant. She blooms in suffering, knows how to use strength to fight, and is highly intelligent. Each item tickled my quirks. Bad guys are rewarded, and it has the potential to make a hit short drama. Disadvantages: There are many details that can be added to the story. Most of the time, the author chooses to mention it in one stroke or simply describe it. Although the ending is sweet, it may be because the data is not very good, so the author chooses to sketch the ending, which is a bit hasty. But despite its flaws, I still like this book very much. My humble opinion: The abuse of the heroine is too shallow and plain compared to the harm suffered by the heroine herself. It can be seen from the content that the heroine was actually abused very much by her parents. Starting when she was 10 years old, the heroine's father committed domestic violence behaviors such as whipping, locking her in a dark room, and controlling the heroine in order to break her wings. There was a control group of little girls, and all kinds of abuse elements were put together, but it may be because the writing is weak (or it may be that the author does not want to spend time writing about the abuse of girls), so the abuse part did not make me cry (generally, when I read abuse stories, I can't help but shed tears when I see the heroine being hurt). Secondly, the ending and the male protagonist need more interactive descriptions. The relationship with the male protagonist is very sweet and interesting. I really like watching the relationship between them. But it only ends with a few chapters, which is a pity. One is a heroine who does not believe that he will love the heroine, and the other is a heroine who has been hurt for the first half of her life and is waiting to be healed. This is actually a very interesting collision combination. There are two lines of career and life. The male protagonist is strong, sober, independent and respects women. Tomato has a good male protagonist design➕1. He will not be merciful in the face of evil, and he will not take the role of the female protagonist (after all, this book is a female channel). Regarding the heroine's parents, I feel that multiple twists and turns can be arranged to add exciting points and slap-in-the-face plots to the writing. The current situation is that the heroine's parents are a pair of little bitter gourds. The adoptive mother raised a kind and strong heroine but also raised an evil son. The fake father, Boss Xia, is a character who is both good and evil. However, in order to enrich the image of the characters, I feel that they can be shaped more richly—— Boss Xia is a boss who devotes everything to the countryside and his employees. He secretly researches and makes fake medicines for the benefit of many terminally ill patients (but it also harms the interests of others). Please refer to I am not the god of medicine. At the same time, if a businessman wants to do business well, he must be protected by someone. He also has an evil side. In the dark years, he thought about his illegal bribery behavior when dealing with others, and kept various evidences scattered in the hands of employees and villagers, as a deterrent to others for many years; The heroine's mother, Jiang Shanqing, as a fledgling college student, was deceived by these people into lurking in Boss Xia's pharmaceutical company to find evidence of counterfeit medicines in search of justice. She had a lover, but during her interactions with Boss Xia, Xia was moved by her truthfulness, kindness and beauty, and was attracted to her unknowingly. However, in fact, she wanted to send Boss Xia to prison. In the end, Boss Xia raped the heroine's mother out of despair of being betrayed, accidentally killed the person who secretly filmed evidence, and was sent to prison to be tried. Continuing from the original story line. At the same time, three life experiences are arranged for the heroine to increase the effect of plot reversal and slap in the face. For example, she is neither the daughter of Xia nor the daughter of the Yu family, but the eldest daughter who lives among the people and was stolen by the family's mentally ill servant mother. After several twists and turns, the daughter happened to see Jiang Shanqing's death and abandonment. She exchanged these bags and quilts for the heroine and abandoned the heroine before committing suicide. He happened to be adopted by his adoptive mother. Triggered a series of subsequent stories. Why do you want the author to arrange such a plot? Because the heroine has done nothing wrong, but she still has to bear the heavy burden of everything. The heroine's parents clearly enjoyed the benefits brought by the heroine, but they still punished the heroine with the so-called original sin. In the end, the truth was discovered that both the heroine's parents died, everything was calm and peaceful, and a minor daughter was left to take care of the heroine. Arranging this reversal of the plot can maximize the guilt of Yu and Jiang, who think they stand on the moral high ground. At the same time, the real relatives of the heroine will not give up looking for the heroine. After finding the heroine, they will slap all parties in the face to make up for the heroine's lack of family affection. Personally, I feel that this novel has the bones and needs to enrich the plot. The ups and downs of the plot can attract readers more ~
Although your comment is short, it is very powerful! If we want to make it more vivid or more emotional, we can polish it a little bit. Here are a few different styles of versions, you can see which one is more suitable: **1. Simple and powerful version** This version is great for expressing core feelings quickly. > This book is so well written! **2. Warmly recommended version** This version is highly personal and suitable for sharing with friends. > This book is great! Highly recommended! **3. Specific praise version** This version highlights the advantages of the book in terms of "content" and "writing style", making it appear more sincere and persuasive. > This book has solid content and smooth writing. It is indeed a good book! You can choose to use it according to the specific situation. If you are willing to share which book it is, maybe I can help you write a more detailed review!
It's so good, but it's a pity that the ending is a little rushed. Both the male and female protagonists are very good. The male protagonist is respectful and polite to the relationship, and he won't rush into it if he likes it. He respects the female protagonist's feelings and gives the female protagonist the greatest sense of security. The heroine has been suppressed since she was a child, and she has not developed a twisted character. She is strong and independent, and she is not a virgin.
It's super good-looking. The theme is novel and the story is neither long nor short. I don't know why the rating is so low, but it's really good-looking. I have been so impatiently chasing other books recently that I almost forgot about that one when I found this one. Thank you for your hard work in writing this book.
Help, who wrote this book? Too over the top. Oh, it turns out I wrote it.
I give the author an encouraging five stars. In fact, I like this rhythm. I like to watch ambiguous dramas. If I am really sure of the relationship, I will quickly lose interest. The plot of this book is actually not very complicated, but the writing has more ups and downs, and it doesn't feel like the word count is too low. I think a large part of the reason for the low rating is because after reading the title, I thought it was a purely slap-in-the-face article, but it turned out to be a slow-burning plot article. Many people are used to the intensive rhythm of the review, and have no patience to read it. The author also lost his patience, and the ending was indeed quite rushed, as if he had just read a summary. The explanation has been given, but it is still a bit of a pity. There is basically no sweet love anymore. All that is left is to finish the plot. Please encourage the author and hope that it can end better next time.
Although the ambiguous love between the male and female protagonists was very sweet, the female protagonist was so bitter. After watching it, she felt like she was soaking in bitter water... The female protagonist was so looking forward to a new life away from the family. She finally stood up straight, but suddenly a burden made her bend down again [almost crying] [almost crying] What kept me going was: I wanted to see the retribution of those who bullied the heroine, but unfortunately there was none... The male protagonist is really decent, while the female protagonist is more growth-oriented. She always talks about turning big things into small things, and only fights back after being bullied many times. The scumbag and the mistress almost jumped to the ending.
I stayed up late to read all the updates. They are very interesting. Is there any other situation about the heroine's life experience? Because the heroine has never done DNA directly with the man. It may be a coincidence that the blood type is the same. Based on that person's appearance, it is impossible to give birth to a daughter as beautiful as the heroine. Will there be a reversal in the future?
It's okay, it's not ugly, but the heroine's fate is a bit tragic at the beginning. Everything else is pretty good. It's a very concise article, basically focusing on the main points without any nonsense. It's just that the ending is too fast and I'm a bit uncomfortable. I thought I'd write more about the tragic ending of the vicious female partner and the scumbag.
The plot is compact and the story is perfect, but the ending is a bit unsatisfactory. The ending of the heroine's parents is both expected and unexpected. In the end, the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists when they got together could have been added, but after finally getting together, it was gone.
It's good to watch. The male protagonist was curious about the female protagonist at first and then turned into care and love. They finally got together near the end, which was a bit late [laughing awkwardly]. The female protagonist didn't just go to the male protagonist to solve any difficulties she encountered, but relied on her own efforts to fight for them. The heroine's fourteen years of misfortune were caused by a doctor. It can only be said that her biological father was not very strict and trusted that doctor too much.
Not bad, Tomato is one of the rare things that can give everyone a suitable motive for their actions, and it can be self-justified, and the vicious parents are not shameful. It is a pity to see it later.
Very interesting, the storyline is novel and attractive
It's a good read. I suddenly discovered this book after a book shortage. It's different from other books where the heroine is weak and weak, and the woman is strong and the man is strong. She's very sensible, and the plot is also the most different I've ever seen. There aren't so many brainless supporting characters. Overall, it's really good! !
The full text is concise and concise, and the words are meaningful without being superficial. The female protagonist is gentle, kind and strong, while the male protagonist is an informed, knowledgeable and guiding lover. All in all, it's an article worth reading.
The author's writing style is very good, and the heroine of the novel is also perfect. The score for such a beautiful novel should be higher.
Very beautiful, the language is humorous! ! ! ! ! !
So pretty, so pretty [laughing]
I just feel that the heroine's baby is so miserable🥹🥹🥹 How about making her happy when she grows up?
It's rare to read the whole book, hehe, it's so good to read, I've read it all [Like] [Like] [Like]
It's really beautiful. Don't be misled by the ratings.
It's very good, and the plot is also touching. It's a pity for Yu's father and Yu's mother. They are also quite pitiful. I thought they would reconcile a little bit in the end and help them take care of their children.
The writing is very detailed. I like it very much. I like the specifics. It really touches my heart. It is different from the cookie-cutter novels. I think this article is very unique and interesting.
I've never reviewed a book on Tomato, but this one is worth a listen. Give it a big thumbs up from the bottom of my heart! ! !
It's very beautiful. I sighed after watching it. Say to the author: You wrote this book very well, really
It's a pretty good book, but it ends a bit abruptly.
The only book I read from beginning to end. Good looking [like]
What a great book. I stayed up until 3:30 and finished reading it!
So far, so promising. Hopefully the next parts will be equally engaging
Give it to me, I shouldn't be rated this way. I read every word and chapter without missing a beat. Author, you really captivated my heart. You wrote so well. You are awesome👏🏻