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[Gentle on the outside, strong on the inside, fallen heiress vs. elegant, cold, and desireless tycoon]
[Second male lead rises to the top + male lead chases his wife to the crematorium]
Yu Xi was brought home by her biological parents at the age of ten and groomed to be the fiancée of Lu Chengyu.
She was refined and impeccable, never making a mistake.
But before the wedding, Lu Chengyu fell in love with a Cinderella.
“Qiao Yan is still a student. She can't carry the stigma of having an abortion. You do it!”
The proud, confident young master Lu was certain Yu Xi would obey.
After all, no one would want a woman covered from head to toe in Lu Chengyu's labels.
Until the press conference, when businesswoman Yu Xi arrived with her boyfriend on her arm.
Everyone was stunned.
He Lanzhou? The eldest son of the He family? A tycoon? That reclusive, unyielding man no one could reach?
Lu Chengyu lost control, eyes red as he fell to his knees. “Baby, you still love me, don't you?”
The man looked down at him with cold disdain.
“My patience, and her, were never meant for you. Try bothering her again and see what happens.”
Then the elegant, cold man turned into a clingy puppy in an instant.
“Wife... Could you call me ‘hubby’ in front of him?”
“Okay, hubby.”
A treasure was discovered. The whole story is complete and non-delayed. The rhythm is tight and there are slaps in the face. The heroine is sober and self-reliant. She blooms in the midst of suffering. She knows how to use strength to gain strength and is highly intelligent. Each item tickled my quirks. Bad guys are rewarded, and it has the potential to make a hit short drama. Disadvantages: There are many details that can be added to the story. Most of the time, the author chooses to mention it in one stroke or simply describe it. Although the ending is sweet, it may be because the data is not very good, so the author chooses to sketch the ending, which is a bit hasty. But despite its flaws, I still like this book very much. My humble opinion: The abuse of the heroine is too shallow and plain compared to the hurt suffered by the heroine herself. It can be seen from the content that the heroine was actually abused by her parents very much. Starting when she was 10 years old, the heroine's father committed domestic violence behaviors such as whipping, locking her in a dark room, and controlling the heroine in order to break the heroine's wings. There was a control group of little girls, and all kinds of abuse elements were put together. However, it may be because the writing is weak (or maybe the author does not want to spend time writing about the abuse of girls), so the abuse part did not make me cry (generally, when I read abuse stories, I can't help but shed tears when I see the heroine being hurt). Secondly, the ending and the male protagonist need more interactive descriptions. The relationship with the male protagonist is very sweet and interesting. I really like watching the relationship between them. But it only ends with a few chapters, which is a pity. One is a heroine who does not believe that he will love the heroine, and the other is a heroine who has been hurt for the first half of her life and is waiting to be healed. This is actually a very interesting collision combination. There are two lines of career and life. The male protagonist is strong, sober, independent and respects women. Tomato has a good male protagonist design➕1. He will not be merciful when facing evil, and he will not compete with the female protagonist for the role (after all, this book is a female channel). Regarding the heroine's parents, I feel that multiple twists and turns can be arranged to add exciting points and slap-in-the-face plots to the writing. The current situation is that the heroine's parents are a pair of little bitter gourds, the adoptive mother raised a kind and strong heroine but also raised an evil son, and the fake father, Boss Xia, is both good and evil. However, in order to enrich the image of the characters, I feel that they can be shaped more richly - Boss Xia is a boss who devotes everything to the countryside and employees. He secretly researches and makes fake medicines for many terminally ill patients (but also harms the interests of others). Please refer to I am not a medicine god. At the same time, if a businessman wants to do business well, he must be protected by someone. He also has an evil side. In the dark years, he thought about his illegal bribery behavior when dealing with others, and kept various evidences scattered in the hands of employees and villagers, as a deterrent to others for many years; The heroine's mother, Jiang Shanqing, as a fledgling college student, was deceived by these people into lurking in Boss Xia's pharmaceutical company to find evidence of counterfeit drugs in order to find justice. She had a lover, but when she got along with Boss Xia, she was moved by her truthfulness, kindness and beauty, and was attracted to her unknowingly. However, in fact, she wanted to send Boss Xia to prison. In the end, Boss Xia raped the heroine's mother in despair of being betrayed, accidentally killed the person who was secretly photographing evidence, and was sent to prison to be tried. Continuing from the original story line. At the same time, three life experiences are arranged for the heroine to increase the effect of plot reversal and slap in the face. For example, she is neither the daughter of Xia nor the daughter of the Yu family, but the eldest daughter who lives among the people and was stolen by the family's mentally ill servant mother. After several twists and turns, the daughter happened to see Jiang Shanqing's death and abandonment. She exchanged these bags and quilts for the heroine and abandoned the heroine before committing suicide. He happened to be adopted by his adoptive mother. Triggered a series of subsequent stories. Why do you want the author to arrange such a plot? Because the heroine has done nothing wrong, but she still has to bear the heavy burden of everything. The heroine's parents clearly enjoyed the benefits brought by the heroine, but they still punished the heroine with the so-called original sin. In the end, the truth was discovered that both the heroine's parents died, everything was calm and peaceful, and a minor daughter was left to take care of the heroine. Arranging this reversal of the plot can maximize the guilt of Yu and Jiang, who think they stand on the moral high ground. At the same time, the heroine's real relatives will not give up looking for the heroine, and after finding them, they will slap all parties in the face to make up for the heroine's lack of family affection. Personally, I feel that this novel has the bones and needs to enrich the plot. The ups and downs of the plot can attract readers more~
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It's so good, but it's a pity that the ending is a little rushed. Both the male and female protagonists are very good. The male protagonist is respectful and polite to the relationship, and he won't rush into it if he likes it. He respects the female protagonist's feelings and gives the female protagonist the greatest sense of security. The heroine has been suppressed since she was a child, and she has not developed a twisted character. She is strong and independent, and she is not a virgin.
It's super good-looking. The theme is novel and the story is neither long nor short. I don't know why the rating is so low, but it's really good-looking. I have been so impatiently chasing other books recently that I almost forgot about that one when I found this one. Thank you for your hard work in writing this book.
Help, who wrote this book? Too over the top. Oh, it turns out I wrote it.
Although the ambiguous love between the male and female protagonists was very sweet, the female protagonist was so bitter. After watching it, she felt like she was soaking in bitter water... The female protagonist was so looking forward to a new life away from the family. She finally stood up straight, but suddenly a burden made her bend down again 🥺 🥺 What kept me going was: I wanted to see the retribution of those who bullied the heroine, but unfortunately there was none... The male protagonist is really decent, while the female protagonist is more growth-oriented. She always talks about turning big things into small things, and only fights back after being bullied many times. The scumbag and the mistress almost jumped to the ending.
I give the author an encouraging five stars. In fact, I like this rhythm. I like to watch ambiguous dramas. If I am really sure of the relationship, I will quickly lose interest. The plot of this book is actually not very complicated, but the writing has more ups and downs, and it doesn't feel like the word count is too low. I think a large part of the reason for the low rating is because after reading the title, I thought it was a purely slap-in-the-face article, but it turned out to be a slow-burning plot article. Many people are used to the intensive rhythm of the review, and have no patience to read it. The author also lost his patience, and the ending was indeed quite rushed, as if he had just read a summary. The explanation has been given, but it is still a bit of a pity. There is basically no sweet love anymore. All that is left is to finish the plot. Please encourage the author and hope that it can end better next time.
I finished it in one day, and overall it is good, with a complete story, but the beginning feels a bit slow, but from another perspective, the character of each character is very obvious, the good ones are very good, and the bad ones are very bad.
The plot is compact and the story is perfect, but the ending is a bit unsatisfactory. The ending of the heroine's parents is both expected and unexpected. In the end, the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists when they got together could have been added, but after finally getting together, it was gone.
It's good to watch. The male protagonist was curious about the female protagonist at first and then turned into care and love. They finally got together near the end, which was a bit late 😅. The female protagonist didn't just go to the male protagonist to solve any difficulties she encountered, but relied on her own efforts to fight for them. The heroine's fourteen years of misfortune were caused by a doctor. It can only be said that her biological father was not very strict and trusted that doctor too much.