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It's so good. It's so good. I finally found a real dungeon novel on Tomato. The other books are either pretentious live-streaming articles or second-rate games. It makes me want to vomit.

Support, I hope the pace will not be too fast, it would be best to have as many daily routines as Empress Xiuman [full]

It looks good, it still has the same style, the writing style has also improved a lot, the plot is also very attractive to me, I hope it will not be blocked, and there are also hand-drawn drawings by the author

Super pretty! ! Although the protagonist is in a dungeon, he can also gradually develop the ability to penetrate outside, so the world view is not small at all. The different thoughts of people from all walks of life and the different ideas of different classes are displayed, and the characters are very vivid and three-dimensional. The protagonist's design and creation of dungeons is also very interesting. Logical and smooth writing.

Not bad, a serious dungeon. There are no disgusting human supporting characters. A dungeon should look like a dungeon. Since I was once a human being, I should understand how humans as a whole can coexist harmoniously with treasures.

It's really good to read, very good to watch. The only flaw is that there are a few updates. I hope the author can make more updates after his 100,000-word debut. Updates are becoming more and more unstable. There has been no update for four or five days now, and the author has not said anything about the situation.

The story is interesting and breaks away from the common "Fourth Natural Disaster" routine of cultivating players, but some descriptions are not very clear. The narrative is written in the form of group portraits, but the names of some characters are highly repetitive (Keshidun, Kessed), and I don't know if I missed it or didn't write the ending of Kess. The fight with the Evil God Fragment was a bit too long, and it reflected the protagonist's shortcomings of not wanting to take action even though he was very strong. It also indirectly led to the protagonist's development slowing down, and the possibility of being invaded by a powerful enemy from the sky. However, the author's creativity is good, and the hand-drawing is quite attractive (a bit Elona's style, especially with a sense of fantasy) 5 stars A few more points to complain about 1How to farm when the seventh level is a desert? Even if a few farming monsters were created, the process of how the protagonist changed the soil to manifest his powers was not mentioned. The second paragraph always feels like it is missing arms and legs, the meaning is unclear, and the person is lost. I am dazzled by it. When writing about a battle scene, I want to write about his hand but there is no connection. Then I write about another person's mouth saying "First Order..." It is really indistinguishable. I don't know whether it is the adventurer fighting monsters or me fighting the author's words. 3. The description of the growth and battles of the adventurers is a bit overwhelming, and the shortcomings of incoherent descriptions become more prominent as the story unfolds. I probably learned some writing methods from light novels, but I only took the loose spirit from them, and cannot cover up the bloatedness of the writing. The strength and goals of the 4 protagonists and their direct family members are unknown. The protagonist's motive is just to have fun, but there was an inexplicable time travel before, and countless adventurers invaded later. There are gods looking down on this world, and there are evil gods peeping around. I don't know what the protagonist wants to explore, what he gets, and what he relies on. I can only write it down in the routine of [opening up the labyrinth → creating monsters → sand people → getting upgraded energy → recycling]. This is probably an old way that has been passed down since the days of the gods, and there is nothing new in it. 5. Wouldn't it be great if the protagonist and his related enemies and relatives could be written on the same screen and from one perspective, using less pen and ink but enriching more images? However, the protagonist's "position" is too high, and he cannot lower himself, resulting in the sense of déjà vu that the protagonist is almost a puppet of the author's inspiration. I hope the author's writing fluency will continue to grow.

It's a good-looking, real dungeon novel. The author has also written several books. I feel that the quality is somewhat guaranteed. The content setting is quite attractive to me [please update]. I think the rating will increase. If you are confused, I think you can take a look.

It's okay, I can watch it. At least building a dungeon seriously. Until the latest chapter, the protagonist still regards building dungeons as his only goal. It's much better than those things where the main character doesn't have many characters and just goes out and pretends to be someone else.

It's easy, funny and smooth. The maze environment of the dungeon is good, and the plot behind it is also good. The interesting point is the synthesis of monsters, guardians, and magic equipment. [Laughs] The intention is that the subsequent various symbolic events will bring in various different materials from the outside to synthesize various prop monsters. [Seeking attention] For example, the alchemist's life potion For example, Terraria's long straight worm summons bosses, slime rain, blood moon events, or various other event-based punishment content bosses. [Laughing] You can also add some food, potions, and one-time props to increase buffs that anyone can use [Note] The point of complaint can be said to be that the third guardian does not have a long range. It is recommended to add a little attack range from the first floor to the ninth floor [cool]

I have found another novel that I can read more than 100 chapters in one go and hopefully finish it without getting bored. The last one was a book by Shen Yu (although it got a bit boring later on). Writers who are imaginative and creative will really feel a sense of anticipation when writing. You will guess and think about it, and you will be motivated to pursue it. However, there are still some weak parts in this book (such as the chapter about Bullock). Focusing on a certain person without changing the perspective for several chapters tortured me, and it is indeed not interesting. The dungeon should try not to over-focus or pay too much attention to a certain character. This gives me an unbalanced feeling. Bullock's revenge should not be the main plot and write a lot of ink. It is good to omit a part of the process that is dispensable. Of course, it does not rule out that the author needs someone to help him improve the word count. Finally: [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][ Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

The writing is very good. Currently, the protagonist has created a lava dungeon. I helped the author think of three different types of levels. They are the Deadly Path, the Devouring Swamp and the Eternally Frozen Ice Cave. The dead path is a path of eternal darkness. Only the stone road on the ground can serve as a direction guide. All lights cannot illuminate more than three meters. In the dark environment that has always remained silent, ferocious dark monsters may suddenly appear at any time to attack. They will become invisible and can catch adventurers into the darkness. The man-eating swamps, mosquitoes, diseases, and quagmire that you don't know if you can pass through, the hiding beasts and the vicious witches living in the deep forests, the huge ancient war trees and forest giants whose silhouettes can only be seen are all staring at the adventurers who dare to venture in. In the permanently frozen ice cave, after experiencing mazes, deserts, lava, and swamps, it's time to experience the cold. Here, fuel and water have become the scarcest supplies. Adventurers can only look at the sky full of ice, snow, and ice cubes but are powerless. The wailing dead who keep appearing vow to drag them together into this hell where they can't sleep.

My family members don't understand, this magical book just made me confused! Lu Bu fought with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, and the fight was heated for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai suddenly came out and crushed the whole audience. If Noah hadn't thrown an outside ring and then connected with the Noxian guillotine to save the situation, this wave of being targeted by the M4 six-power scope would have been too cool! The most amazing thing is when Zhuge Liang said harshly to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, you are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liangliang." The anger at being nearly knocked to death by the monkey almost spilled out of the paper! What we are saying is that the plot of this book is ridiculously interesting, the system is orderly in chaos, the foreshadowing is everywhere, the fighting scenes are as immersive as if they were on the scene, and the characters are portrayed in a "deep way", focusing on the joy of a chaotic stew in one dimension! Overall, I love watching it

Skull has a hasty ending, Xiu Xian is inexplicably interrupted, and this book seems to be sent. Is the author busy in the real world or unable to write anymore? Why does he always start the book like this and stop writing halfway through... The book has good ideas and deserves a four-star rating.

It still conforms to the author's consistent writing style and is still good-looking. I won't talk about the writing and plot. After all, the quality of the previous books is guaranteed. I wonder if the maze terrain of this labyrinth city can change once a week. In this way, the method of drawing maps can be curbed.

It's pretty good, but it has a strong sense of urgency. When it was only the tenth floor, an evil god was arranged to attack the dungeon. He was robbed of one floor and was limited in the number of floors he could create [face covering] This is not a cool novel, it should be a funny and passionate one.

The subject matter is novel, the plot is not cliche, it is very rich, and the characterization of each character is different. I highly recommend this new book. If you are short on books, you can read it. I hope the author will update it soon.

Okay, okay. Judging from the context, this book may be able to write a lot more and push the author's limits. I hope so. I've read the first few books and they didn't work well in the later ones. But the early days are really fun and I have a lot of ideas. Not much else to say, good tomato grass

Yes, it can be similar to the Bone King Guardian. Pig's feet are completely opposed to humans. It is similar to the type oppressed by capitalists. The characters are well-drawn and there are behind-the-scenes elements. There is no element of love and love. It is worth recommending [please update]

It's a good-looking dungeon design article, and it doesn't involve boring relationships. The protagonist's position is very firm and clear. The overall setting of the dungeon is developed step by step from simple to difficult. It's very interesting. I'll get five stars when it's finished. By the way, do you have any similar recommendations?

The actual rating is four and a half stars. It was a bit tough in the early stages but got much better later on. I feel like the rating could go up to nine or more. The storyline of building a soul theme park in a dungeon is quite enjoyable. The classic skin-changing mobs and the defense map, as well as the short stories in the comment area also add a lot to the reading experience.

The overall world view and settings are okay, and it becomes more and more interesting the more you read it. I hope the author can expand his thinking in the future and set up more underground types. Overall, it will not lose to the top dungeon books.

The setting is really interesting, but it was so uncomfortable when it was discontinued. The interweaving of some historical stories is not too wonderful. The only small flaw is that the people who came in the early stage were too weak, but the author himself made up for it by saying that everyone was attracted by the firepower of another nearby, which is considered acceptable. The author just stopped at the point where I suddenly wanted to see how it would be dealt with. To be honest, the people in the early stage were too weak. I wanted to see if the author would write them into new characters who were born from the sky, or if he would just outright elevate the earliest characters. The former is more logical and the latter is more emotional, but in fact, as long as the writing is good, I can accept it. I can't think of a reason to stop updating. Hey [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It is very different from other dungeon-type novels. It is very consistent with the ideal dungeon, including farming, farming, power development, etc. The plot is compact and attractive. There are basically no poisonous points in about 100 chapters so far. It is worth reading.

It can be seen in the early stage that it is a bit of a novice, or it was written on a whim in the middle stage. It should have jumped over the pitfalls of the predecessors. It is very beautiful. In the later stage, it is a bit back to the primitive people, but it has jumped over again. It is so beautiful.

It's very interesting. Tomato doesn't even have many dungeon novels. This really suits my taste. The last time I read such a hearty dungeon novel was a Japanese light novel. I have also read the author's other books, and I hope the author writes more. Currently, I haven't even broken through the small dungeon (the smallest dungeon). Only the elves, a western fantasy race, have appeared, and the others have not appeared. What kind of story will there be when the foreigners come after the port is unsealed? The protagonist's power has not spread much to the surface world, the sixth level has not appeared, and the human army has not marched over. The story has just begun, and I am looking forward to it.

The article remains the same, the creativity is bright and beautiful.

Very nice. The plot flows smoothly. The plot arrangement is reasonable, and the continuous creation of dungeons to challenge adventurers is too exciting for me. But at which level does Forbidden Fire actually appear? I hope it will be later and a little more challenging. If the forbidden fire is too weak, it will not look good. I hope that Forbidden Fire can really appear when the 40th or 50th floor is conquered.

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It looks good, the subject matter is novel, and the creation of monsters on each level is very fresh. I look forward to the follow-up.