Another World: From the Start, I Became a Dungeon

It's so good. It's so good. I finally found a real dungeon novel on Tomato. The other books are either pretentious live-streaming articles or second-rate games. It makes me want to vomit.

Support, I hope the pace will not be too fast, it would be best to have as many daily routines as Empress Xiuman [full]

Super pretty!! Although the protagonist is in a dungeon, he can also gradually develop the ability to penetrate outside, so the world view is not small at all. The different thoughts of people from all walks of life and the different ideas of different classes are displayed, and the characters are very vivid and three-dimensional. The protagonist's design and creation of dungeons is also very interesting. Logical and smooth writing.

It looks good, it still has the same style, the writing style has also improved a lot, the plot is also very attractive to me, I hope it will not be blocked, and there are also hand-drawn drawings by the author

Not bad, a serious dungeon. There are no disgusting human supporting characters. A dungeon should look like a dungeon. Since I was once a human being, I should understand how humans as a whole can coexist harmoniously with treasures.

It's really good to read, very good to watch. The only flaw is that there are a few updates. I hope the author can make more updates after his 100,000-word debut. Updates are becoming more and more unstable. There has been no update for four or five days now, and the author has not said anything about the situation.

The story is interesting and breaks away from the common "Fourth Natural Disaster" routine of cultivating players, but some descriptions are not very clear. The narrative is written in the form of group portraits, but the names of some characters are highly repetitive (Keshidun, Kessed), and I don't know if I missed it or didn't write the ending of Kess. The fight with the Evil God Fragment was a bit too long, and it reflected the protagonist's shortcomings of not wanting to take action even though he was very strong. It also indirectly led to the protagonist's development slowing down, and the possibility of being invaded by a powerful enemy from the sky. However, the author's creativity is good, and the hand-drawing is quite attractive (a bit Elona's style, especially with a sense of fantasy) 5 stars A few more points to complain about 1How to farm when the seventh level is a desert? Even if a few farming monsters were created, the process of how the protagonist changed the soil to manifest his powers was not mentioned. The second paragraph always feels like it is missing arms and legs, the meaning is unclear, and the person is lost. I am dazzled by it. When writing about a battle scene, I want to write about his hand but there is no connection. Then I write about another person's mouth saying "First Order..." It is really indistinguishable. I don't know whether it is the adventurer fighting monsters or me fighting the author's words. 3. The description of the growth and battles of the adventurers is a bit overwhelming, and the shortcomings of incoherent descriptions become more prominent as the story unfolds. I probably learned some writing methods from light novels, but I only took the loose spirit from them, and cannot cover up the bloatedness of the writing. The strength and goals of the 4 protagonists and their direct family members are unknown. The protagonist's motive is just to have fun, but there was an inexplicable time travel before, and countless adventurers invaded later. There are gods looking down on this world, and there are evil gods peeping around. I don't know what the protagonist wants to explore, what he gets, and what he relies on. I can only write it down in the routine of [opening up the labyrinth → creating monsters → sand people → getting upgraded energy → recycling]. This is probably an old way that has been passed down since the days of the gods, and there is nothing new in it. 5. Wouldn't it be great if the protagonist and his related enemies and relatives could be written on the same screen and from one perspective, using less pen and ink but enriching more images? However, the protagonist's "position" is too high, and he cannot lower himself, resulting in the sense of déjà vu that the protagonist is almost a puppet of the author's inspiration. I hope the author's writing fluency will continue to grow.

It's a good-looking, real dungeon novel. The author has also written several books. I feel that the quality is somewhat guaranteed. The content setting is quite attractive to me [please update]. I think the rating will increase. If you are confused, I think you can take a look.

It's easy, funny and smooth. The maze environment of the dungeon is good, and the plot behind it is also good. The interesting point is the synthesis of monsters, guardians, and magic equipment. [Laughs] The intention is that the subsequent various symbolic events will bring in various different materials from the outside to synthesize various prop monsters. [Seeking attention] For example, the alchemist's life potion For example, Terraria's long straight worm summons bosses, slime rain, blood moon events, or various other event-based punishment content bosses. [Laughing] You can also add some food, potions, and one-time props to increase buffs that anyone can use [Note] The point of complaint can be said to be that the third guardian does not have a long range. It is recommended to add a little attack range from the first floor to the ninth floor 😎

It's okay, I can watch it. At least building a dungeon seriously. Until the latest chapter, the protagonist still regards building dungeons as his only goal. It's much better than those things where the main character doesn't have many characters and just goes out and pretends to be someone else.