Yu Yin transformed into the cannon fodder master in the novel about cultivating immortals. The original master was strict and rigid, and was eventually killed by the gangsterized disciples.
The system told her: she must maintain her character and complete the plot before she can go home.
On the surface, Yu Yin trains his disciples indifferently, but in his heart he complains crazily: "My eldest apprentice's wrists are shaking like this when practicing swordsmanship, why not become an embroiderer in the mortal world!"
"Second disciple made this elixir, even dogs won't eat it!"
She waited for the plot to end to get her lunch, but found that something was getting more and more wrong with her apprentices.
The eldest apprentice's swordsmanship improves by leaps and bounds, and the second apprentice refines the best elixir.
The young disciple of the future Demon Lord who would stab her through with a sword would follow her with red eyes all day long.
Until one day, she heard her little apprentice's voice: "Master, don't be afraid, I will protect you in this life."
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Book Review: In the plot of collapse, enjoy the sweetest master-disciple candy
The most fascinating thing about this piece of writing is its perfect balance between "survival" and "love".
As a book traveler, Yu Yin has had the mentality of "hurrying back home after finishing the plot" from the beginning. However, in the process of maintaining the original character, he accidentally triggered the butterfly effect of the plot. She was extremely mean to her disciples, complaining that the eldest disciple's swordsmanship was not as good as Xiu Niang's and that the second disciple wouldn't eat the pills, but in her heart she couldn't help but feel soft for the weakness of the younger disciple. This contrast between duplicity and duplicity makes the character full of fireworks.
The "reverse counterattack" of the apprentices was the finishing touch. They were supposed to be enemies, but they developed an almost paranoid desire to protect this "strict master". Especially the young disciple Yan Wei, who has gone from a silent and gloomy boy to a demon king who bravely stood up to protect his master. His words "I will protect you in this life" are not only a compensation for the regrets of the previous life, but also an affectionate confession that makes the readers cry.
The story does not forcefully sprinkle sugar, but lets the emotions flow naturally through details: Yan Wei's silently guarding figure in the distance, the eldest disciple's forbearance when punishing the sword, and the second disciple's persistence when refining the elixir, all imply that they have a deep love for their master. This setting of "everyone secretly loves the master" makes every interaction full of tension, which not only satisfies readers' expectations for a sweet pet, but also retains the refreshing feeling of wearing a book.
The author uses delicate brushstrokes to interweave the urgency of "survival" with the ambiguity of "heartbeat", making readers sweat for the protagonist while also unable to help but laugh at the secret interactions between master and apprentice. This is not only a qualified and refreshing article, but also a sweet Shura scene that makes people addicted.
Book Review: In the plot of collapse, enjoy the sweetest master-disciple candy The most fascinating thing about this piece of writing is its perfect balance between "survival" and "love". As a book traveler, Yu Yin has had the mentality of "hurrying back home after finishing the plot" from the beginning. However, in the process of maintaining the original character, he accidentally triggered the butterfly effect of the plot. She was extremely mean to her disciples, complaining that the eldest disciple's swordsmanship was not as good as Xiu Niang's and that the second disciple wouldn't eat the pills, but in her heart she couldn't help but feel soft for the weakness of the younger disciple. This contrast between duplicity and duplicity makes the character full of fireworks. The "reverse counterattack" of the apprentices was the finishing touch. They were supposed to be enemies, but they developed an almost paranoid desire to protect this "strict master". Especially the young disciple Yan Wei, who has gone from a silent and gloomy boy to a demon king who bravely stood up to protect his master. His words "I will protect you in this life" are not only a compensation for the regrets of the previous life, but also an affectionate confession that makes the readers cry. The story does not forcefully sprinkle sugar, but lets the emotions flow naturally through details: Yan Wei's silently guarding figure in the distance, the eldest disciple's forbearance when punishing the sword, and the second disciple's persistence when refining the elixir, all imply that they have a deep love for their master. This setting of "everyone secretly loves the master" makes every interaction full of tension, which not only satisfies readers' expectations for a sweet pet, but also retains the refreshing feeling of wearing a book. The author uses delicate brushstrokes to interweave the urgency of "survival" with the ambiguity of "heartbeat", making readers sweat for the protagonist while also unable to help but laugh at the secret interactions between master and apprentice. This is not only a qualified and refreshing article, but also a sweet Shura scene that makes people addicted.