The Plot Went Off the Rails, and My Disciple Went Mad

Oops, let me go. This forced love is so cool!!! Everyone is smart, the plot is very interesting, and the characters are well created!! Every character that appears is neither a paper person nor a tool person. They are all flesh and blood. When Ruan Xuan appeared, I thought he was another admirer. I was about to say that he should be able to knock me because the Even though I know I can't go home, I still want to try again and again. Of course, I'm not trying to whitewash him. What he did was indeed a beast. I can only say that he deserves it. The two of them, the protagonists, are also two little bitter gourds 😢😢 who hurt each other but can't let go of each other. Finally, they let go of the past and reunited. Mei Mei is together.

I read all the chapters updated so far in one go. It's very interesting, not watery, and very filling. Not only is the plot good, but what struck me the most is the characters. Every character that appears is not like a paper man. They are not set by some tool man. They are flesh and blood. The following comments may contain spoilers 🤔 I was not particularly surprised when I saw the love-hungry and paranoid apprentice Xiao Jian and the calm survival Shi Wuqing. Yan, until Ruan Xuan appeared, at first I thought he was another crazy admirer, until he bewitched Shi Wuqing and asked him to kill Xiao Jian and restart the world, I screamed. This man regarded himself as the master of the world. He thought he was erasing the paper people, but he was erasing every living life. Another thing that shocked me is that the reason why Qiao Song can fight Ruan Xuan is because of his Tao. His Tao is firm enough and strong enough. This is no longer a question of fighting power. It has reached the level of 'self-awareness' and the powerful spiritual power to prevent the world from collapsing. It made me ignited when I read it. The main plot is still the emotional entanglement between the two of them, but I am more inclined to he. The two of them are actually destined to be together. They are also two little bitter melons who hurt each other but can't let go of each other. I hope the author can write more chapters.

So beautiful, Wuji is really a very good, pitiful but strong baby!! I feel so bad for being so controlled 😢 I must go home! Friends like Luo Tingyun are also very good. They really try their best [sending heartfelt wishes] and their writing style is very good and their logic is clear. Come on, teacher 😘 It's a pity that Shi Qing didn't go home. . Little Couple 99 😢

I almost went crazy watching it. The characters of Baozi are really well portrayed, and the writing style is also the kind that I like very much. This is the first time I have watched this kind of plot. It made me a little depressed, but it is really, really cute! Both the master and the apprentice are so cute ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧

It looks good, I hope it won't stop updating 😢 I have to keep writing. The plot is very new. I have never seen a plot like this that makes people curious about the development of the plot. Moreover, the protagonist is not brainless, and the pulling is very exciting [heartfelt]

I have been following your articles seriously for a long time, and the more I read, the more I admire your talent. Each chapter can bring new surprises, the characters are vivid, the story is tense, and the emotions are particularly contagious, allowing people to be completely immersed in the world you have built. It's really amazing to be able to write something like this, and you deserve to be liked by many people. We know that the path of creation is very hard and energy-consuming, so we are not in a hurry to update it. We just hope that you will take good care of yourself, write slowly and write well. We will always be here, quietly waiting for your updates, supporting you, liking you, and looking forward to your more exciting stories in the future. Don't give up, and you must keep writing!

It's very interesting. I'll tell you about it after I finished it. It's very interesting and the plot is addictive. The only pity is that it's a little short. When I saw the middle part, I thought of the boss of the Mohist family 🙂. I think the writing is great, and I have the talent to publish a book.

It's quite good to watch, the tension between the protagonists, auv, it makes me so happy, hhhh, some plots may be a bit corny, but it doesn't affect it, overall, it's good to watch!!! Recommended, family members, I stayed up late last night to watch it and couldn't keep my eyes open. I'll leave a comment this morning. It's good to watch, but not many people are watching it. Come and watch!

It's so delicious Ψ(￣∀￣)Ψ, the narrative rhythm is strong, the emotions of the characters are very vivid, and each chapter is more enjoyable than the last. Unfortunately, I only read this book at night. I skipped many chapters to ensure that I can go to bed early. The forced love and imprisonment are very penetrating.

Oops, the writing is very good, and the anti-routine is also very well written. I stayed up late to read it, and it made me laugh out loud. It's not abusive to me, and the characters are also very well created. The most important thing is that there is no long description of appearance, and the words are all about the plot. I like this very much. The author is very good. He is super powerful and has a lot of imagination. The plot is not long-winded or cliché. I like it.