[Football Coach] + [Fused Memories] + [Realistic] + [Youth Development] + [Tactical Battles] + [Underdog Comeback]
[Not a wish-fulfillment story] (Be patient and take your time reading.)
After an accident leaves retired player Lin Feng in a coma, the football memories of legendary manager Marcello Lippi somehow merge into his mind.
There is no magic or System, only the lifetime of experience, tactics, and lessons from failure of a legendary coach.
Drawing on the “Silver Fox’s” wisdom, he starts with the details of training and takes on a football culture obsessed with quick results.
His path is filled with doubt, infighting, and the impenetrable walls of reality, but it also holds the seeds of hope.
This is more than a story about winning. It is the journey of a man of football who uses a borrowed torch to try to light up the long night of Chinese football.
I have always had a question, isn't U12 a primary school league? Do primary school students have the physical ability to play 90 minutes➕30 minutes? I went to check it out. The domestic U12 game is basically 50 minutes ➕ 10 minutes (overtime), and the national game is only 60 minutes ➕ 10 minutes. Can you check the basic information carefully before writing?! After reading two hundred chapters, I guessed that the author is just an amateur football fan, and does not have a deep understanding of many basic football things. As for the writing method, it seems that writing about a primary school league is similar to that of a professional reserve team. The picture he described did not reflect the difference between the two at all. Football is about the feeling of progressive strength, and the game screen should be the same. But after reading what he wrote, the scenes of adult professional games are similar to those of primary school students. This is a matter of the author's basic skills. In other words, the author's professional quality and professional knowledge reserve are too shallow.
Overall, the writing is very good. I currently feel it is above 8 points, and it is possible to continue to hit 9 points or even higher. The author is very careful and chooses an angle that is suitable for fans to read and understand the game. No matter the rating, keep working hard and look forward to more exciting things. Good books still need to be promoted. The text is solid and the framework is good. In this era of fast food culture, traditional thinking needs to be changed so that more people can see it and be interested.
This is not a traditional football article, but if you can put your mind to it, it is still worth reading. The plot may be too AI-heavy. Can the author make some changes after the AI is written? If not, your book won't go far.
I read this book after watching the referee, and I felt that the coach was really a wonderful person, but in the past I felt that he was not the same personality, but after the memory was merged, there was indeed a sudden change. I understand my ex-wife very well. But I feel that the whole story has met too many good people so far. After entering the profession, it became more group-like. Instead, I couldn't feel the progress of the coach himself, and it lost a bit of the refreshing feeling of online writing.
It's really good, the content is very detailed. But why do I always feel a slight sense of depression when reading it, but it is also a characteristic. It's just that the emotions are very awkward, which makes the overall tone darker. I don't know what the overall tone of this book is.
Very well written, keep up the good work
Tomato saw part of it last night and asked people to comment. It's hard to be objective. At least the previous writing is good. I don't know what happens next. I have ideas, but I feel like the characters are not vivid enough. Too few characters. There are 12 people in a team, and only four of them have names... Maybe the author is afraid of writing too much and losing control. But the creativity is good. Start with youth training. Big room for growth
I felt pretty good after looking at the front I withdraw my review. The first part was very good, but the second part was very bad, especially the divorce part.
Yes, a rare coaching article,
Not bad. A good article about football. It's so inhumane. Italian football is outdated.