After transmigrating into Douluo Dalu, Lin Mu bound himself to the strongest System, but all he wanted was to slack off.
On the day of his Martial Soul Awakening, he had a mythic scroll in his left hand and a Chaos spatula in his right.
He decisively chose the latter and opened a street food stall.
He never expected the stall to come with an absolute no-combat zone where fighting was forbidden while eating.
A Hundred-Year Soul Beast willingly became a carrot-rooted rabbit guard, while Poison Douluo drank a bowl of soup and began questioning his whole life.
The Shrek Seven Devils turned his stall into a safe house, while Spirit Hall's spies ate and wrote their “Street Stall Observation Journal” at the same time.
During the final match of the Soul Master Tournament, just as divine techniques clashed, Lin Mu's food cart plummeted from the sky and left Tang San and Bibi Dong stunned.
I poked my head out. “You've been fighting for ages. Getting hungry? ...Um, would you three like a refill on your soup?”
Later, a new sign went up on the Jialing Pass battlefield:
[Lin's Neutral Stall] Eat before you fight. Anyone who breaks this rule is responsible for the consequences.
When the Asura God Sword collided with the Rakshasa Demon Scythe, the two were forcibly halted by the aroma of stewed meat.
Everyone finally remembered the terror of being ruled by the “Peace Zone”:
This stall owner wasn't just a cook.
He was the one inviolable rule in all of Douluo Dalu.
It was a new author, publishing on the platform for the first time, and then I chose to use the first fantasy novel I read as the background. When I was a kid, I watched "Douluo Dalu" and was really attracted by the many wonderful stories in it. At that time, I thought, what would happen to me if I traveled to the world of Douluo Dalu? Now as I get older and have reached the age of working, the day-to-day life has indeed erased many of my youthful thoughts, but in the end, while I still remember it and while I am still willing to write, I will give it a try and use Lin Mu's story to fulfill my childhood dream. I hope everyone who reads this book will like it. This book does not have depth or suspense, because I am afraid that if I write like this, it will not be rounded out later, so I will just write this kind of simple white text. There is no intrigue, just like when I was a kid 💕
The creativity is very interesting. It combines food stalls with Douluo Continent, and the setting of the protagonist's Buddhist stall is refreshing. However, the plot advancement is indeed a bit slow and requires patience. I hope the author can maintain it. But isn't Su Yuntao's role a bit repetitive?
It's pretty good. Although the plot remains largely unchanged, many small things have been changed. Is this to prevent being banned? Also, are the rewards given too little? Except for the peaceful realm, the protagonist's soul power level is only level 6. It has been several years, but it has been upgraded to level 1. It was given by the system and now he does not even have a soul ring. I hope the protagonist is stronger.
I saw that many of the names are from the original works. It would be better for the author to change them later and replace them with homophones to reduce the risk of being removed from the shelves. It's a bit OOC, but it doesn't affect the viewing. The plot is also pretty good. I'm quite satisfied with this book. Come on, author, don't run away. There are too many scenes with Su Yuntao, I don't really like it, mainly because it feels very borderless. I don't really like this character. Everything else is fine
It's okay. The change span of the protagonist's dishes in the early and mid-term is a bit big. The character changes are quite smooth and there is no sense of abruptness. The mid-term is much less interesting than the previous one. The part in Star Dou Forest is not as comfortable as the one in Soto Chengcheng. Come on.
It's the first time I've seen this kind of Douluo fanfic. It's quite good. I highly recommend it (≧∇≦*)
As a new author, the writing is already very good, and the plot design is also eye-catching and interesting. I hope the author can continue to produce more interesting plot designs!!!
Well, reading the reviews of this book, I always feel that it will be banned\ (_o)/ And Tomato doesn't seem to have the copyright of Douluo (´・_・`)
I haven't seen such a gentle article in a long time. I have read many Douluo fanfics but this style is unique.
It's very good, very novel. This is the first Douluo fanfic of this kind. It's very interesting.