A Gift from the Stars

I am a bookworm who has been reading online articles for more than ten years. I used to think that the novels written by others were so retarded. But when I started my first novel, although I had clearly thought out the outline of the story in the early stage, the processing of some chapters still did not achieve the smooth perfection I imagined. But I am still grateful for the readers who can read and urge updates. No matter what the reason is for urging updates and comments, the author will humbly accept it. I hope that I can achieve the desired goals in the future, and I hope that readers can give me your valuable opinions. The author needs to give himself 5 years of praise!

A good book, the warmth and warmth of human relationships in the front made me, a person who has been brainwashed by Douyin every day into being a vicious and disgusting neighbor, feel a rare moment of coolness, this is reality, warmth and warmth. In order to save my sister, I also played a little trick and developed rapidly. Now that I'm back on campus, it's quite humorous. However, it is not recommended for middle school and high school students to be too long. It is best to finish around 80 chapters. After all, although there is some writing about youth at this stage, the daily life of youth does not fit the tone of the novel. It depends on how the author grasps it! I will keep chasing, come on

This book is very comfortable for me to read. I have read about getting a golden finger to build a base in the mountains before, and being behind the scenes. To be honest, those novels are full of AI flavor. It was okay at first, but it became more and more boring as it went on, like a mechanical puppet without its own emotions. I think this book is good not because of how rigorous the technology in the text is, but because it makes me feel an emotion, a kind of warmth of home, Yu Bao's thoughtfulness and concern for his sister, and his kindness to Brother Lin Hu and Aunt Li. In order to save his sister, Yu Bao experimented on himself and found a way. His despair and the ecstasy of finding a way to save his sister deeply touched me 😢😢😢

After reading Chapter 25, everything is fine so far. Why do we have to wait until the heart problem occurs before we can think of a solution. I don't know if this twist is a good one, but it doesn't look very timely. Is there too much urgency? The transformation of results is not very fast. I still need to support it and let more people see it.

Very nice tree, very sweet, made me find the feeling of first love, the steel wool balls are great, they taste crunchy, very authentic pasta

This novel is both logical and logical. Or the readability of the story. All impeccable. The key is that updates are a bit slow.

Seeing that the protagonist is in the first grade of junior high school, the previous plot about the sister's heart disease was well written, and I hope that the subsequent plot will be exciting as well. First give me five stars to encourage the author.

It's very well written. I hope I can write more than a million words and update it more often.

Ok ok ok

For the time being, it still suits my taste very well.