Collapse of Iron: a Journey to the Heavens Beginning with the Biyang Brothers

A rare author who has no ill intentions towards Douluo Dalu. He is very, very good-looking. The cb item is excellent.

It looks good, the author should be a textual researcher, the setting is basically okay, and the characters are not OOC, but it's rare to see a Douluo fan being so nice to Tang San and the others, hahaha, getting along with Bai E Ten Thousand Enemies is just like the original work, so good [shy][shy][shy]

It's rare to see such a complete description of the relationship between the two without any hint of true friendship between the characters! 😭😭 Before I started watching, I didn't expect that the dialogue and plot would be so natural and smooth. Because Bai, who has a strong desire to protect and obsess over his companions, and the enemy who is quiet and more willing to use actions to care about his companions, the occasional ideological conflicts and daily competitions depict a deeper and warm friendship (how come there is an evil Wu Fate Dawn essay! 😭), This is the bond of our Biyang brothers! ! 😭😭 It can be seen that the author is someone who is very focused on the plot of Weng Xing. The settings basically have no major problems and are well integrated. The interactions between the golden descendants who appear are quite cute and warm, just like a big family. . . Finally triggered the Tomato Taobao guarantee, and the review is that it is the most friendly episode for fangirls who love CB...

Very cute! Great little white little enemy cb! Jute Meow is delicious! All golden descendants must be happy! [Crying] Good news, good news, Xiao Lian is here too! ! Everything written is very close to the original work! In my opinion, everyone is not OOC at all! The only drawback is that there is only one chapter a day...[Crazy]

The writing is very good, perfect for those who like Bai E Wan En En CB.

Very good! The plot is very smooth. The author has his own likes and dislikes, but he will not blindly criticize them. I especially like the treatment of Zhu Zhuqing and Ning Rongrong! The characters are not OOC, they are completely original! And it's not aggrieved at all, it's very refreshing, but it's not awkward at all! The relationship between the two people is just like the original gay friendship🥰 But there is no need to worry about it being cp. The author's writing is completely cb and has no cp flavor. It can only be said that once a certain emotion reaches the depth, it will be confused.

Nice! ! ! Not OOC, just the feeling of being more ambiguous and less like ordinary friends, the only true friend! ! ! What a beautiful and delicious CD! ! !

I finished reading it in one go and found it quite interesting. It's great that the two of them are cbs... And their personalities are not so OOC [loving]

To be honest, this novel really suits my taste, and the characters in it basically fit the original novel. The interaction between Wan En and Bai E is also very heartwarming. While going through the plot, I always hoped that Bai E would be happy and that he would no longer have to bear everything by himself... In short, it is a book worthy of five stars.

A rare cb direction, confessing to the teacher [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

[Thinking] There suddenly seemed to be a lot of people today. Why are you gone?

It looks good, but having said that, if you broke up with your partner, would you stop updating? 🧐🧐🧐 Please don't stop updating, ma'am✋😭✋✋😭✋✋😭✋ if if if if I say if Just a hypothesis Just a hypothesis Just a hypothesis The author's wife and his partner99 I have no intention of driving a wedge between the author's wife and his partner. Don't bully me online✋😭✋ It's just a question. If you don't like it, just pretend you didn't see it. Don't be serious, don't be serious, don't be serious

The enemy's cb direction (both the friendship and family direction) is rare to see. . . Biyangde cb is always the correct answer. . . There is no OOC in Bai E Wan Di Xi, it is all about friendship, the description is more delicate, and the overall pace is relatively fast and reasonable in my personal opinion (the faster pace may be because I haven't read Dou Yi's original work for a long time) This book is currently non-toxic, serialized, and currently only contains Dou Yi, who is friendly to Tang. Tang Ye is different from the original author (he changed the character but discarded the dross and took the essence, he is a normal person). However, the author has a bad impression of the original work Dai Mubai and others, so there will be no Dai Zhu CP. (You can go in and see what the author says about the details here) Judging from the newly revised introduction, there will be Douluo, Dou Po, Dragon Clan, Lord of Mysteries/Loop of Fate (if you have not read Lord of Mysteries, it will be difficult to understand the setting, because the setting is too complicated. Ring of Fate is the sequel to Lord of Mysteries, but it received a bad review from readers of Lord of Mysteries, because it contains the characters of the protagonist group in Lord of Mysteries OOC. I hope the author can be kinder to Xiaoke if he can write this 🥳🥳) Then the reason why Bai E and the others traveled through time was to improve Bai E's mental state, so there would be no unpleasant episodes. Read the whole article in one word, cool. If there is a catch, it may be because the cb direction is written so well. In the comment area, there are people who brush up the enemies and wait for the cp direction and then fight. I even saw someone mentioning Dan Heng in the comment area, and then someone commented below this comment about the CP direction of Ren Heng. . . Does this book have anything to do with Ren Heng? If someone mentions Dan Heng, you should mention Blade Heng. Even that paragraph is about the character Dou Yi. But it's okay, that person was scolded by me. How can an omnivore live if he only recruits evil for my CP? ! To put it simply, the only problem at the moment is spawning monsters. There are a lot of people spawning CP in the comment area. Just don't read the comment section. (The author has also mentioned this issue in the author's comments, and hopes that Chuanzi's posts will improve.) The reason the score is lower now is because the score was just released. As far as my current personal opinion is concerned, this book is enough to get a 9.0 Or above. (So this book has become a rare book that I have given five stars.) I hope the author keeps up his current pace. Please be positive cb99.

It's very interesting. The interaction between Bai E and Wan En is very warm. The author's description is very close to his character. It's an interesting adventure story.

Oh, don't worry about the stars. I think five stars are absolutely fine. I really like this book, whether it's the plot or the psychological interaction. The whole main body of the book is about the savior's psychological trauma healing and relaxation, but there is not much daily content, and the author has call backs in many places. The current handling of Douluo is also very comfortable, and it is very enjoyable to read. And when I was reading the book, I was fed dog food in the author's comments. The aftermath of the author's relationship with his partner shocked me. I wish you 99 [sending my heart] (I didn't expect that I can also talk about real-life CP in the book. It's very cool)

I have read many fan works, but I have never seen anyone who can write the characters and habits of Xiao Bai and Wan En as well as this book. It's just that Xiaobai's ability to identify treasures should not be very good [thinking], otherwise Xiaobai would have become the richest man in Onfalos long ago Also, Tang San's character design is a bit weird. I have also read the original novel, and Tang San is still very cautious. He didn't even give the Tang Sect's secret skill to Xiao Wu, whom he had known for a short time. Then when the Shrek Seven Devils found out, they were already in their twenties and thirties, so it was really strange to give it to the two of them not long after they had just met. [Think]

Everyone came to read this book, it's so good

There is no OOC at all, and the interaction between the two and the Douluo character is very good. Recommended [Like]

I came here after a book shortage, and it feels good, and there are no contradictions. There are no logical problems, except for some characters such as Tang San, but I feel that I have been involved since I was a child, so some changes are normal.

I am a fangirl who has been reading fanfics for five or six years, and all the IPs I have written are recommended by everyone. In my opinion, this book is already very rigorous, and the character interactions are also very cute (all characters recommended are handled by mom fans). It did not make me feel OOC or uncomfortable. I look forward to the follow-up. The plot is not as disliked as the popular books (suki...)

After reading the updated content in one go, everyone was in tears! ! ! (Although I also like golden origin CP) But such pure cb is so satisfying that I want to cry... The emotions are written with super delicateness! The interaction between the golden descendants is very warm! ! ! Moreover, Douluo's cartoon characters are really well received! ! ! (O^^o) Zhuqing's cold face is cute! ! !

What does Lao Mi know about Ompharos? This book is the main line! ! ! ! ! ! It's very beautiful, the characters are not OOC at all, absolute cb, the characters of Douluo Dalu are well analyzed, there is no inexplicable malice, and there is no vilification, the author is great, you are my god! ! ! !

F*ck, f*ck, f*ck, the writing is really good. I can feel the love and respect for the characters. There are no stereotypes. It depicts the sincere emotions between everyone so well. Five stars must be given. Come on, teacher, it's time to update now that the seventh day of the new year is over. Don't throw a knife in the last chapter and run away, okay?——

It's tied. I think it's good. I think this is the best one I've read on Tomato. [Shy] The story of a group of people curing Bai E is really heart-warming. The storyline is not laggy or contradictory. It's worth reading.

Why has it been removed from the shelves? It's so beautiful [crying]

I just like reading this kind of novel with a little bit of madness in it. Does the author dare to update 33550336 words in one day? I was shocked ^_^ Second chase: I missed it. What the hell is the alien fire spirit... I, a white chef, smile like a white man... Three chases: Boss, I don't update the article just to eat your fried rice! ! !

Boss! What you wrote is so great! Please keep updating! Please!

The popularity of this book is a little low, maybe because the subject matter is not very common. But this author's writing style is very good, and the characters are very appropriate, which can be regarded as a big surprise for me. It smells good [admiration] It smells good [admiration] It smells good [admiration] It smells good [admiration]

I, Feng Feng, have been short of books for so long and finally found a good book. 🌹Brothers, I have also fallen in love with it. I really think this author's writing is super awesome. After reading it, I feel that my whole person is different. 🖤Dear mommy old Feng, this book is also super good. ❤️❤️❤️

I give five stars because there are only five stars, otherwise I would give 33550336 stars. It is so well written🥹I feel relieved after reading it. It almost reminds me of the feeling in the original work of Bai E and Wan En. I really care about the other person but it is not the feeling of cp. It is so well grasped and delicious! 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋