Demon Slayer*******

After reading this, I feel that the author still needs to improve his writing skills! The flow is good. After reading the whole book, although the story has not been fully developed, it can be seen that the author has thought about and polished this book very carefully. Come on, I would like to make a suggestion, try not to insert jokes from other anime. It feels very out of place. Sister Qing's Xinqing's book tries to avoid the jokes from other anime. Now there are two questions, that is, the first one is actually a relatively deliberate action of the protagonist in some aspects. In fact, the protagonist and Kanae should have been aware of it. For example, the nightmare that Kanae had and the sister who went out to save Giyuu can be explained. The second problem is that if there are two heroines, Shinobu's emotional line will have to start to be paved. There is also a very serious problem. I hope the author will not make the mistakes that most authors make, and treat the two little butterflies equally. Don't have the problem of who is older and who is younger, which will ruin the goodwill of butterfly fans! ! In fact, the most serious problem is, Hajisaku, how do you balance the emotional lines of the two heroines! This is a difficult thing. I hope you can grasp it! I also want to raise a small expectation. It's too bitter for two little butterflies. Give me more sugar and give me more daily life [laughter]

Let me talk about the male protagonist and Kanae, I can only say that they are like a couple, they are relatively gentle, and then, the male protagonist is a bit sinister, just like Butterfly Ninja, and if he has a hard time saving, he will not only save the pillars themselves, but also the people around him, such as Butterfly, his family. There is also Giyuu, his sister, and Muichiro, his parents and brothers, or Tanjiro, his family who met in advance. All I can say is that the protagonist is the classic Japanese manga Asashi, gentle and not only gentle, but also capable and charming. Of course, some of them may not be saved due to timeline reasons, but I don't remember

The writing is very good, the protagonist is gentle and kind, and the emotional line is very rich. The author also listens to suggestions and will basically reply to messages.

Watch it boldly, watch it sweetly, feel free to read it, if you have a knife, ask the author to exchange swords with you [laughing][laughing][laughing] (I don't have a knife at the moment)

It would be great if I could collect Mi Li too. I like you Li the most, hahaha

You can still look at it from the front and hope that the combat power will not be too collapsed. Come on, author [laughing] I finished reading it in one sitting, but it was a bit short.

It's really beautiful. Highly recommended.

The heroine is the Butterfly Sisters, and the author's emotional film is really beautiful. In the latest chapter, I have already established a relationship with Shinobu, and of course I have already established a relationship with Kanae. It's really, really, really nice to watch [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Very good, the emotions are very delicate, I look forward to [sending my heart]

Very nice, highly recommended!

Of course the first comment is mine, author, come on [top post]

It's full of emotions, and it can also be used for fighting.

It's beautiful. It's considered one of Butterfly Sisters' better works. Come on, author.

I ate it first [Note] This is one of the most beautiful Demon Slayer fanfics I have ever read.

It looks good. I love watching it. I want to watch it all the time.

Very good, very detailed writing

A few of them were adopted by the butterfly family

It's very beautiful. I'm married to Kana Megumi. I wish you 99

It's good-looking, some of them are the same as Sister Dan's, they're quite good-looking, but there are too few.

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work, author.

Why are there so few people with such beautiful books?