Quick Travel: Zha Gong Is Reborn and Just Wants to Have Sex with His Wife

I think it's super good-looking. The first world may be a bit sketchy, and it does feel like it hasn't been developed yet, and then the ending suddenly feels a bit rushed, and it feels like it stops abruptly. But actually, personally, I was quite satisfied with the first world. I saw everything I wanted to see. The young lovers finally got married, Xie Wan returned home, and even better, there was no memory of living in ancient times. Although there is still a little regret, but I feel that it is more complete, and I am happier to watch it. Then let's talk about the plot. Whether it's the "Zha Gong" in the title or the "Zha Gong" in the text, both are in quotation marks. They are not really scum, they just have a little misunderstanding with their lover, which is not revealed. Then this misunderstanding, coupled with a little mistake, caused the two people not to be together, and even separated by life and death, so I would like to thank the system for giving me a chance to start over. There may be spoilers below, so don't read if you mind. The first world was brought up, right? The children I raised must belong to me. The face-less God of War Prince Face Secret Guard (this is not up and down), and Xie Wan is a time traveler, which also surprises me. In fact, I feel that her story is somewhat similar to the story of a person in a novel I wrote myself. The only thing in common is that they are girls who traveled to ancient times and then returned home in the end, but I still feel a little surprised and a little surprised [Sending Hearts] Then I am also very happy that Xie Wan finally returned to her home. She doesn't even have the memory of being in ancient times. I feel very good. Congratulations to Xie Wan, you are back home. Thank you very much for giving Xie Wan a good ending. Then the second world, I think it's also very interesting. What you think is a coincidence is another person's long-planned plan. The husband is gentle to his lover but cold and venomous to others. The CEO I was sent to a foreign country to suffer. I left the person I loved and was even misunderstood by the person I liked. A person misunderstood the person I liked and left without saying goodbye for ten years. From then on, my heart was locked in love. I don't know if there is a deputy CP. Then let us thank the MVP Li Ziyang in the audience and sigh that the world is really small. Then I actually want to ask you, after the world ends, can there be an if line where two people meet each other without being separated at the age of 18? And the writing style of Dada is also very good, and the emotional lines are also sweet and not too blunt. Now it is just that the article is too short and not many people read it, but it will definitely become popular in the future. Finally, I look forward to writing a better plot, and wish all the young lovers a 99 [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

I have watched the first Little World so far. Let me talk about the advantages first. The subject matter is quite novel. It seems that the author wants to write a story with a relatively exciting plot. The two characters are also good. The big dog and the guiding lover are quite cute. The world view is relatively large and there are many personal settings. It can be seen that it is quite creative and thoughtful. But there are still some small flaws. Quick travel is not suitable for spreading the setting too much. In addition, each small world only has a dozen or 20 chapters. I feel that the author can focus on one line. Take the first world as an example. I read books relatively quickly, but the relationship between the two people was not very well laid out. There was no explanation of how the two people met and fell in love with each other, which was very unconvincing. Some of the emotional conflicts that led to the previous life did not make me feel particularly sad. Including the characters mentioned in it, such as Vice General Duan and the Fourth Prince, there is no description at all. I only know that there is such a person. In general, I still suggest that if you want to expand the world view, it is OK to write a few more chapters as a slow time travel. If you still stick to short stories, you can discard some unnecessary characters and settings. (The above are all personal opinions, please don't criticize if you don't like it) The concept and writing style are okay. If you polish it a little more, I think the author is fully capable of writing a good article. Don't be too impatient and take your time. Come on, and finally, I wish the author good health and happiness every day! 😊 Ahhhhhhhh, you are my god! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The second small world is so awesome, I can't even believe that these two worlds were written by the same person. The emotional line is very smooth this time, and there is no such foggy feeling. Now I can really get the cuteness of the two people, and the characters are also very lovable, including the emotional transition of the protagonist, which is also very natural. You must stick to it. The current rhythm is just right, the points of conflicts and emotional explosions are also right, and the jerky feeling of the first world is completely lost. You must continue to update, I will follow you [blowing kiss]

The writing is very beautiful, the writing is delicate, the plot is novel, the emotional line is supernatural, the relationship between the protagonists is very interesting, I am going crazy, ahhhhhhh, super invincible and explosive, it is so beautiful [Bird of Birds God] [Bird of Birds God] [Master of Birds of Birds] [Master of Birds of Birds]

This subject matter is so attractive, please give me a lot of support from the author

Nice! Unexpected! My wife is so awesome!

I have always preferred rebirth novels. The large-scale stories and characters really touched my heart ~ and it is also in the form of units, each unit is a different story.