Honkai: Star Rail in the City: A Two-Front Battle? It’s Just Galgame Stuff!

Your book is very beautiful, one of the few that can make me feel deeply. I think the best part is the background design of Stars and Sky, an orphan, a person filled with love, an unknown hero, and an ordinary person with many connections. Maybe it's because of this that you can become light.

The City Collapses, I like it, love to watch it, and will read more. Qiong's opening has set the tone. A person has grown up alone, hoping not to look at Kafka through a filter. The combat power is now very strong, and Qiong's life is gradually getting better. Aglaiya and Saifeier are the first pair of sisters to join Qiong...

The writing is very good, and I feel heartbroken when I take it in. Maybe it's because of my personal reasons. I looked at it from another perspective. Since the protagonist got his destiny, everyone has a purpose to get in touch with the protagonist. I don't like this aspect.

It's very nice. The protagonist is too sunny, so he doesn't look like he was born from that environment, like a lotus flower emerging from the mud. But at present, this is more like a polluted world, but some beings forcibly created a world that is okay, and then put those he cares about into this world. However, it gradually becomes unable to be sealed and becomes easy to disperse. This kind of feeling will not lead to a collapse line or a perfect line in the final ending. The collapse line I'm talking about means that those who protect these people can no longer bear it, and then they completely collapse, starting more powerful pollution, and finally everyone is reunited in hell. The other one is when the protagonist grows up to the point where he can help, and then the pollution is removed, and it becomes a normal starry world.

Not bad, not bad, very good-looking. The author must hold on. I also hope that the author will not add other Ultraman, but only one Ultraman will be enough. When reading this kind of book, all you want to read is the uniqueness, otherwise the specialness of the protagonist will be gone. Can there be more chapters? Let's start with at least four chapters a day [laughter]

It has a bit of a Dragon Clan feel, and the author's writing is good. The most touching thing is not the heroine, but the author telling Qiong's childhood experiences in various places, which makes the book more three-dimensional. There are many female protagonists and no ink. Some people may think it is too fast, but I think it is okay. It is actually quite reasonable in the world view of the book. This is a matter of opinion.

It feels okay, but the progress of the relationship is too fast. It feels like a home invasion and robbery. It's too fast to want to commit suicide after meeting for the first time. The fighting is okay, and the wits are average, but the relationship...

Super invincible and beautiful, please, author, please update it, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please @ Diehuo The author begs you to update. Author, you can write about Qiong's daily life on campus, and conquer Feng Jin and the others on campus. Write more about daily life. You can go and watch those daily campus romance episodes, with a little bit of Ultra's typical excuses to transform and fight in the middle. Then during this period, aren't there a lot of monsters going to the earth? Can you let them join forces with the Abels to attack the earth? Then Qiong goes to fight, and then is defeated, and then turns into a state of destruction to beat them, or turn into a stone statue, let Die and the others awaken their power, and then turn into Sandisk or something like that @die In short, no matter what you write, whether it is daily life or combat, I love reading it, please, more, please, I really like reading your books.

The setting is novel and the narrative does not create much sense of fragmentation. The protagonist Qiong's insecurity due to living in a smoky place in the outer circle since he was a child is also reflected. Generally speaking, it is an above-average work. Then the shortcomings are also very prominent. The characters are a bit poor. The girls feel like they are given to me suddenly without any opinions (such as Yao Guang and Fu Xuan). Of course, the relationship between Aglaia and the two is very good. Secondly, in terms of combat, I can't find any faults in the personal battles and the writing is very good; however, it is slightly lacking in the huge battles.

Generally speaking, it feels good, but the scene where the silver wolf seduces the protagonist is quite unbearable. This kind of description makes me feel that I don't like it so much. It has to be when the protagonist is about to do something, and then a bigger thing comes, and the protagonist has to put aside the original matter. This kind of multiple-choice question, I don't like to make choices. Just do it once in the general direction. As for so many small directions, I don't really want to deal with it. Then I design a boss myself and see if the author wants to use it. Boss: Anonymous Destiny: before it was fertility, now it is destruction. Body shape: humanoid, height between 200~500m, normal is only 2m. The weight is 5.3 Billion tons, with a normal weight of about 230kg. Dream: Create a new world and eliminate the pain of the old world by yourself. I believe that mankind is hopeless and must smash the old world and eliminate everyone, including myself. Then create a large-scale living circle city similar to the Garden of Eden. The city will be managed by robots. At the beginning, only 20 cubs will be designed to breed into 100,000. The excess lives will be taken away by machines and then cleaned up. The children inside have all been forced to undergo surgeries to reduce their intellectual development. They are not taught knowledge, but are allowed to live a carefree life without suffering the pain of real life. Power: The former Southern Cross Society (a large medical organization similar to the Pokémon Hospital), and the idealists who surround him. (The idealists around him also agree with his idea of destroying the old world and creating a new world, even if the new world has no place of its own.) Background: The child of the leader of the Southern Cross Society did not want others to suffer pain or harm, so he worked hard to learn medical skills. In the end, he found that studying medicine could not save mankind. No matter what mankind did, it would cause pain. Even if it went through a revolution and the forces were re-divided, corruption and various chaos problems would always appear in a few years. Therefore, he believes that only people without intelligence can achieve the best life. If they are ignorant, they will not be cursed by knowledge, will not have the desire for power and other desires that lead to pain, and will only survive and reproduce happily. The writing was okay, but I didn't like the passages where Silver Wolf deliberately lured the protagonist to save people, but the rest was okay. I read this mainly because I want you to write more about daily life. This kind of sweet love in daily life is what I want to see. As for the more intense ones, watching them directly on film or watching them on videos is much better than reading novels. Or have more of this sweet love routine. It would be better to add more kissing scenes and the like. It's not that I don't like watching fight scenes, but it's that fight scenes with giants that are not normal people don't feel immersive, while fight scenes like ancient battlefields or Deadpool duels are more interesting. It will be more enjoyable to read. This kind of battle between giants and monsters has no real sense and looks quite ordinary, so I will write more about daily life. This book is positioned as a sweet daily love story for me.