Immortality Martial Arts: Start with Nuo Nuo Fruit

It's pretty good-looking, with fantasy martial arts and devil fruits. It would be better if it was less pretentious.

It's pretty good, but living with the princess in a mixed dormitory is a bit confusing. You still want to hide your clumsiness, but you use your trump cards like crazy. Are you really not afraid that the boss will search your soul? [Eat melon]

Foster parents can leave comments here, and the author will listen carefully to their opinions, but please give more ratings, it is not easy for newcomers [face covering]

I'd give it an 8. At least it doesn't have any poison points, so it's a fun battle. The writing is not weak, and the description of the battle scenes can also be given 7 points. The combat power increases rapidly, but it is not bloated and unbalanced, so I will add 1 point. The score is a bit low now, give it a full star.

I felt it was pretty good. I could read it and asked a lot of questions. They were all in the paragraphs and comments. I don't know how many changes the author made.

It blends quite well.

It's okay. The plot is very smooth. The subsequent system rewards are hard to think about. This is the only bad thing about system imagination.

It's okay, nothing toxic, not too stressful, it's still quite refreshing.

In other worlds, there are computer games and film and television works based on this book. Come on, author! Write a satisfying work!

It's a great book. It's the first book I've put on my bookshelf this year and I want to read more.

Okay, did the author forget a mythological lottery ticket?

Well written, good luck to the author!

It's pretty good, but it looks like it was cut.

Martial Arts, Devil Fruits, Spiritual Veins, and Martial Souls have all been hybridized. To encourage you, there are still a lot of little poisons.

It's okay. Compared to others, I'm just too young. I'm not used to it every time the age comes out. It feels weird.

At present, there are no poisonous points, and the combat power is not suppressed, which is good.

I like your bookshelf. I like it.

It looks pretty good so far, so this five-star is a little encouragement.

This novel is good. I haven't found any bad points after reading it.

I personally can watch it, it just depends on personal preference. He has no background, is not invincible, and is not strict enough. [Understood] Those with great luck. Or change your trajectory and go kill big monsters or something like that. Beating people is a bit too high-profile. Not in the river

It's not poisonous, the logic is clear, and it feels good when it's time to feel good.

I just didn't feel good about the devil fruit I chose, but the others were okay.