Douluo************

After reading it, this book is not as dark or anti-Shrek as other Douluo fanfics I have read. Since the God Realm, including Tang San, was punished by the big eyes from outside the world at the beginning, many of the backgrounds do not exist. After a brief look, it can be regarded as a very original work. The power of the protagonist will be easier to understand for those who have understood Mingchao and the plot. Although it is said to be a god-king level, it is actually not well expressed. There are basically no disappointing plots, and the plot may be pushed a little too fast. After all, my impression of Dou Er's original text is relatively shallow. There are many things that happened in the background, reflecting the concerns and views of the son of a country's marquis on the future, but these are all sketched out. Including after the destruction of the God Realm, the situation outside the Douluo Realm, and any difficulties in the universe, these are not mentioned. The overall world view has not been fully developed yet. I look forward to the follow-up. So far it looks pretty good.

The writing is great, really. Most of the fanfics about Dou Er usually describe Tang San and Wang Dong in a very dirty and unnatural way, but this one doesn't. It doesn't look so deliberate, and it feels very comfortable to look at shame.

In addition to martial arts and soul skills, are there other elements of the tide? Who is the heroine? Don't dismantle the original cp [eating melon]

It's well written, the plot is not cliché, and it's not scary at all. It's worth watching.

You must write it down=ᗜωᗜ=

It's ok, come on, author You can pay attention to the segmentation. You may read it quickly, but it will not look good if it is too long.

It looks pretty good for now.

Let's turn the protagonist into a big card and take the stage! (Happiness)

Come on, author, keep writing [Chigua] This is the first time I have seen a book about Ming Chao and Douluo [Adoration] Four stars

Five-star praise, this book is worth a try

It's a very good fanfic, even if you haven't read Mingchao, it won't matter

It feels pretty good-looking Score points to prevent the book from disappearing.

Looks good, the setting is very novel

Where are the author groups (◎o◎)

It's well written, I hope you won't be banned [face covering]

I stayed up late and accidentally caught up with the large army. Bad, bad, bad.

The writing is quite good, it would be nice if it could be written a little more and a little faster [eating melon]

Unfortunately, the author was killed by a strong man above the author's mirror [face covering]

It looks good, I love watching it, so. . . . . . . Update soon! Pressure guarantee letter.

Support, well written

Very pretty. Ming Chao

If you want to follow the rules, you know

Dear author, where is the group?

Not bad, even Tomato's fight story didn't end well. I hope it can be concluded.

Give it a five-star support and keep reading. As long as you don't update it constantly, it would be better if you update it 6 times a day.

It's quite good. It's one of the few books that I can read and start to catch up with newer books. Highly recommended

Although there are some minor flaws, it's really good. High points, brothers.

Okay, the settings are pretty good.