The Outcast: Master, Stop Telling Fortunes. My Sword Is Here

Okay, let's hang ourselves here completely... Well, this kind of inner feeling is the best. Although love is something that cannot be explained, the logic of cause and effect exists, especially according to Wang Ye, the person in this article's circle! Ah, I'm full The rest is the plot and story, which is rich and interesting to read. The use of originality mixed with the original work is like eating a bite of rice and then adding a bite of vegetables. Needless to say, the characterization and writing style are both skillful, except for some transitions in the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists that are not obvious (I was finally brought back by the circle's self-report) Final summary: Perfect. The 50 or so chapters have already highlighted the author's background. Keep up the good work (this is one of the few times I haven't turned short stories into long stories). Finally, author, can you give it a try? Adding more than 100 chapters at once would scare me to death. . . ?

I go, I go, I go. It feels like I am eating marshmallows, sleeping on the clouds, singing and drinking all the way. The emotional descriptions are very delicate and shadowy. Personally, I feel that Zhaobao's emotional descriptions are like being submerged in the deep sea but floating in the sky. It is obviously very transparent, but also very deep and heavy. The words in the article seem to be savoring the morning sun and rain. Alas, the article is very fluent, as if it was written in nature. Zhaobao (the heroine) has a clear mind and a tough heart. She is like a clear jade stone carved naturally. It reflects various colors under the feedback of others, but she is still herself on the inside and has never changed! Gosh, really, Zhaobao is so charming! ! ! CP is Wang Ye, and the Taoist priest Wang Ye who writes about it is simply him. Wang Ye's nature is very clear and profound. He is a person who has known the difficulties ahead, but still pities the world. Zhaobao and Taoist Wang Ye are simply a match made in heaven! I can no longer tell what I am writing. I am immersed in the words and ink of the book and cannot extricate myself... I look forward to reading the rest of the article and giving you a small reminder again. I hope the author will continue to work hard and create new chapters! I wish you all the best, peace and joy!

Very nice! I really like the subtle relationship between Wang Ye and Li Zhao. It's a gentle and warm feeling. I like the author's generous descriptions and the emotional writing style is also very delicate! I feel like there is always a touch of sadness in Li Zhao [almost crying] [almost crying] Big boost, author!

Nice! The heroine has her own main plot, and she is not someone who just goes with the protagonist just because it is a fan work. The character design is also great. The author's writing style is also delicate, so be sure to stick to it. Shockingly delicious level

Nice! (>^ω^<) The plot is driven by the actions of the heroine, but it is perfectly connected with the original plot. The heroine also has her own main plot, which is very suitable for my taste! ! There was no embarrassment or forced sweetness when getting along with Wang Ye. Instead, the heroine did as she pleased. The author's writing style is super delicate and beautiful. The author must insist on making more! 🥺🥺🥺

It's very interesting to watch, the plot is exciting, the heroine has her own path, her own growth process, and her character is cheerful and tenacious. I like it very much. I hope the author can update more! [Please update]

The writing is exquisite, the emotions are sincere, and there are often small side stories. The relationship between the young lovers is not abrupt and flows smoothly. Now they have reached the stage of proposing to each other. It is not bloody, but it is very sweet. It can be seen that the author has his own ideas and does not follow any clichés. He does not mythologise or belittle a certain character. The protagonist is thoughtful and cute, and has strong fighting ability. It is not that the original martial arts genre is original. I saw the author saying that the traffic was not good, and I wanted to take a book test, but my naming ability was very poor, and I had more ambition than strength, so I came over to rate it and give it extra points.

The author's writing is really good ٩(๑❛❛๑)۶. The plot development and character characteristics are all described very delicately. We Zhaozhao has his own growth and Wang Daochang's sweet love. The author will update it soon. I really want to know the follow-up [laughing] Teacher, I will always follow you! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart] Madam, the characters in this article are really detailed, and the stories in the circle add to the charm. This article describes the balance between "Jianghu atmosphere" and "human touch". The role of Li Zhao is amazing, and Zhao Bao is a transparent jade. The bond between her and Wang Ye is not a cliché CP feeling at all, but two souls that are highly compatible, and they are the people who give each other a cup of tea in the world. The text is flowing and flowing, and the tension of the martial arts drama and the blank space of the literary drama are all very well grasped. I have rewatched it countless times, and I can taste it differently every time I watch it. I suddenly stopped updating for a few days, and I was really scratching my head. I would like to give you a little reminder, and the author would like to ask for an update! [Send heart][Send heart]

The plot of Dada is smooth, the foreshadowing is reasonable, the heroine is righteous and brave, just like Little Sun, she lives up to her name, I like it, I especially like the part where the heroine analyzes the plot of Wang Ye's salvation, it can make people feel Wang Ye's touch, the writing is very good, Dada, why has the update been discontinued [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

Oops, how well it is written. Every now and then, I would smile happily when I read it. I didn't feel OOC at all. It made me feel that the emotions were very delicate, but the description was not sloppy. I felt very comfortable when I read it [Blow kiss]