King of Sequence: Become the One Favored by the Vampire Gods at the Beginning

Very good, keep it up. Here are some comments: 1. I hope that some content that affects readers' enjoyment of the work can be deleted, such as: a villain cannot be killed, and the old one comes after beating the younger one. If these plots need to be used to reflect some novel concepts, additional plots can be inserted. 2. I hope it can reflect the usefulness of the protagonist's rebirth, such as some upgrade experience, opportunities in other places, etc. However, as a new writer, your writing is great, keep up the good work [Like][Like][Like]

It's very good. I've been waiting for this new book. I like the subject matter very much. The beginning also attracts readers. It must be five stars. By the way, I am the first reader of this book. The first comment in the first paragraph is mine.

Not bad, we got things going. Chen Mo met a 30-year-old young woman online. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good, but she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty and divorced. My city is not far away. We made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have beauty functions, but when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. I'm much prettier than in the photo, and I'm my type. She also recognized me. She didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped up and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to eat, but she basically didn't eat much. The whole process was spent peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. After dinner, she walked out of the restaurant and held my hand. I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag and said: Update ten chapters to unlock the subsequent plot.

"The setting is a bit novel: he is a reborn person, and after being reborn, he is the one favored by a special god" (blind guessing whether he is a god or a son of god (very popular) and there are also plug-ins) The main plot is interesting! "The male protagonist is a bit obsessed with women" I feel that most of the male protagonists who help him are women, and these women are all good, and the tool people behind the scenes (the money and effort can save lives at critical times) all like him, love to invest, he wants something, and expect future returns. "He loves sex but she doesn't love her but she likes him." Some women are a bit frivolous and affect the sensory reading, and the male protagonist is also very murderous (except for the feeling that he is on the male protagonist's side, there is no good person) who betrayed him and targeted his death, "if you kill this person, you will kill the whole family" (decisive) except for temporarily letting go of those who can't be killed (I feel like I will sacrifice the knife in the future), let's take a look. .

You can evaluate it yourself, no one will read it, hey TT

The author's new book must be supported. The new plot settings are no worse than the previous book. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

This book is about serial vampires, and the plot is quite interesting. [Face covering] I don't know if there are multiple girls or just one girl, but I just don't know why I always want my aunt to laugh. I recommend reading this book when you are bored.

Not bad, not bad haha

The second book, I personally think it is quite well written, but I don't know why the rating is so low. This one does have some flaws, but it's still readable. Maybe it's because the previous one was okay. The protagonist is really a sweetheart, and there are too many girls.

It looks good, I hope the author will stick with it

Not bad, not bad. Hehe, I really don't know how to write a review but it's pretty good. Come on

I watched it, it looks really good and the logic is very clear.

The rhythm is tight and slightly poisonous. If the author can make the setting perfectly closed, it will be a good and refreshing novel.

Pretty good, the plot is quite enjoyable

Xinxin's new book must be supported.

Give a good review to support it

Bottom middle, description of writing and plot.

It's interesting, but I feel that this rebirth is meaningless. However, it seems that the upgrades currently only have copper coins, and it doesn't mean much whether there is a rebirth or not. . .

It looks good, give it five stars to prevent starvation.

I have also read the last book. I think it is very well written. I hope Xiao Xinxin can continue to write this book well. It's okay. Zhou Yanbin was killed and resurrected earlier, which was a failure. I guess a lot of people were dismissed here. Secondly, I don't really like books with female protagonists. There are too many female characters in this book, and a wave of people were dismissed. Then a salvation society was established to do good things. I don't quite understand it. This may be part of the reason why the data in this book is not good. . I liked the author Zhang Hao's book a few years ago. I read this book through the filter of the previous book. Very few people have read this book, but I hope the author will stick to it and finish it. Well, I'm looking forward to the next book. Come on.

He keeps writing and produces excellent works frequently; his inspiration surges and his literary talent flourishes; he keeps on working hard and his reputation spreads far and wide. Come on, author!

Very nice! Very cool! The setting is also unconventional. I'm going to give the author some gifts, so don't die suddenly.

It's okay, but it's a bit unclear whether there are multiple heroines or two.

It's very beautiful. There are many ways to do it. It's cool.

Don't cut it, it's really fun to watch

No need to say more, always in my heart

The author hasn't updated it yet

Big cheers for the author

Looks good, update soon

Intention, desire to keep reading