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Compared with the current popular disenchantment of the original work, it cannot maintain its originality. The characterization of this book is really impressive, and the plot remains smooth. It's a pity to deal with it emotionally. But this is undoubtedly a well-written book. The best thing is that the two people didn't get into a relationship out of nowhere. I hope there won't be any problems in the future. The only things that have been criticized are the following points: 1. Problems with Harry's character development, 2. Problems with plot allocation after school, 3. Problems with emotional processing. It's a pity that these three points together lead to the current perception being far inferior to that before school, and can even be said to have regressed. In terms of character creation, Harry is portrayed as too weak. It would be no exaggeration to say that he is a Hufflepuff. This transitional kindness is reflected in his reaction when facing the "squib" rumor, which is frustrating to watch, but there is also a heartwarming plot when he saves Fleamont. He talked about killing Voldemort, but he couldn't do anything to Riddle, who was still a child. Longing for his family weakened the courage and instincts of the Gryffindor who had defeated his old enemy. This part of the shaping can completely take the essence and discard the dross. Considering that the look and feel of this article itself is not a pleasant one, it can be tolerated for the time being. It is worth mentioning that Harry is not a nice guy who acts foolishly, but a person who dares to resist and reflect. Especially after experiencing the decisive battle, his view of Slytherin would at least change because of Snape. In terms of plot, Riddle's first rejection of adoption and his life in an orphanage is undoubtedly a commendable plot. The subsequent relationship between Harry and Riddle has flaws and praiseworthy aspects. The plot after going to school is the most important part of Riddle's characterization. It can also be seen that the author is good at using smooth events to set the stage and then lead to the climax calmly. The overall mood is stable, which is consistent with Riddle's character and Harry's adult identity. Therefore, whether it is the "Squib", the secret room, or the relationship between the two will be advanced in the future, I hope that this part of the plot will solve the existing problems well. In terms of emotional processing, whether facing Riddle's side or Voldemort's side, the young Auror Office Director only showed the image of a gentle and conservative teacher without showing real courage. Since the author has the ability to calmly narrate, there is no need to use the conflict between the two as the only driving force. Such a conflict seems a bit too frustrating. Although Harry traveled back in time to Voldemort's childhood, his heart was still stuck in the past and even became weak. I miss Hermione and Ron, my feelings for Riddle are not good, and I still look at the problem from the perspective of a person from the future, thinking that blood is nothing. And the most important point: in the plot, I thought about what Riddle needed, but actually forgot about it because of the Defense Against the Dark Arts class. When I saw Harry dressed up to attend the middle school recommendation, I thought that the subsequent plot could focus on the relationship that I really wanted to see. However, I only saw that Harry was handsome for only three seconds. After going to school, the relationship between the two quickly dropped to the freezing point. This is interspersed with the plot between Fremont and the Potter family, which is the plot of the latest chapter. Riddle is exploring his own life experience. Harry and Riddle may not necessarily need to have a good talk next, because the two of them can solve the problem through their own reflection. Maybe Dumbledore is a good promoter? Finally, as a reader of online articles, I hope the author can read this evaluation, maintain a good pace, and solve these problems that affect the perception. Thank you for reading to the end. As a fan, readers expect to see plots and characters that meet their psychological expectations. Judging from the completion of character creation and plot narrative, this book is qualified. Everyone also hopes to see characters based on the original work that transcend the original work. I hope the author can think carefully about how to solve this problem, this could be better.

I like this theme, and I get four points mainly because everyone is here for Harry, but the core of this book seems to be to portray Riddle who has not changed much, and I can't see the influence of Harry on him. In addition, regarding the image of Harry, Harry in the novel is actually a stubborn, straight man, and a very venomous British bully. In the original novel, Harry often complains in his heart, and treats everyone the same. I don't think that Harry will change when he is ten years older. After all, he has not changed after seven years of schooling. By the way, after one day of tying up, I found that Harry gave me a slightly different feeling from Professor Zillo.

The emotional description is delicate and the characters are fully developed. Events flowed naturally. Very well written [like] The chapters before going to school were okay. Now in school, the protagonist becomes Voldemort? And there is no magic in the whole story, and there is palace fighting and party fighting? The design of this outline is confusing to me [face covering]

How to say it? It has both shortcomings and advantages. Personally, I prefer to read it, so I won't deduct points for the shortcomings. In fact, the biggest shortcoming is that I personally feel that it is too short. The second is that Harry Potter is too useless. Just because of the author's title and cover, most people who read this book should subconsciously read it. It's beneficial, but the author so far is actually more focused on describing Tom, and so far, Tom is still the Voldemort who makes people want to strangle him. It feels like the arrival of Harry Potter has not had any impact (actually it has, but it does not affect Tom's still so annoying). I don't think there's anything wrong with the characters (Harry has really matured a lot, but Tom is still so damn cool). I hope that Harry can stop eating so many turtles, that the brush strokes can be moved away from Tom, or that Tom can change a little more, at least to show that Harry is useful. Based on the author's current writing style, I estimate that Harry Potter plans to spend six years grinding Tom into a needle, and grinding the iron pestle into a needle for Voldemort into a handsome boy. Otherwise, the stone's heart will not be warm, and Voldemort will be killed in tears in the end. The probability of the former should be higher. At least so far, Tom couldn't tell that he was grateful at all. He felt that Potter wasted all his feelings on him, without any positive feedback.

Harry is really the one who resists pressure [face covering]

It's great, there is no sense of violation in any aspect. ... But to be honest, every time I see Harry's weakness with his grandfather and Riddle, my face wrinkles like a bitter gourd ʅ ͡ ͡ ͡ ͡ ͡ ͡ ͡ ͡ (Ɵ ը) ʃ ͡ ͡ ͡ ͡ ͡ ͡ ͡ ͡

Overall, it's pretty good, but this Habo is too frustrating ´ᯅ`

I think the writing is very good, there is nothing inconsistent with the original characters, and the hearts of Harry and Tom are also very delicately described. I also like other characters created by the author, such as the upright and brave Amanda, etc... The portrayal of Little Potter is also quite faithful to the original work, but because in 1937 the wizarding world was restricted by ideas and traditions, including the understanding of bloodline and squibs, but you can see Harry's efforts, School Deng's support and the changes in the students. Those who like cool writing can be advised to quit, but I personally don't think there's anything particularly uncomfortable about the plot. Some of the author's descriptions made me really feel the unique and beautiful qualities of Harry Potter that inspired me. In summary, it's a great book [sending my heart] Come on, author, I tied it in two days [laughing and crying]

It's good to watch, good to watch, but it's a pity that it's being serialized. It's painful to follow the serialization! ! ! The description of Riddle in this book is very consistent with my feelings when I read the original book. Harry is also a mature and brave Auror. I personally feel that the protagonist is not OOC. But Harry is always at a loss when facing Riddle. Riddle is more like the leader in the relationship. He is cold or even too cold. The first thing he considers when making friends is whether the friend can bring benefits to him or whether the other person is qualified to be his friend using some standards that ordinary people would never consider. At present, I don't think Harry has confidence in teaching Riddle well, and his sense of being at a loss when communicating with Riddle is too strong, which makes me want to speak for him.

Why do so many book reviews give me low marks? This book is written very comfortably on the emotional line. Fuha, that's the tone! It feels a bit forced to be superior and inferior. Harry's character design may not be handled well, but overall the emotional line and plot are well described.

It's a good book. The character description of Riddle is absolutely spot on. There is no meaningless show-off, only the coldness and deepness of the city. I highly recommend giving it a try to those who read the book.

Although I don't know why the score is so low, I think this book is still good. I tied it overnight. I like to read this kind of warm plot. Harry has a gentle maturity and Riddle is slowly changing. There may be a little setting problem, but it is completely harmless.

I'm going, I'm going, it's so thunderous and awesome, okay, I have to taste it hard. I'm going to be a teacher, she is like a goddess to my mother, sister. I'm a little restless despite being an ascetic. OS, my soul has been extremely shocked. I guess this is my rightful daughter. I'm also enjoying a blessing. I must enjoy it hard.

In fact, the writing is quite good. Although the characters are a bit OOC, it is delicious to think of it as a book with the same setting independent of the original text. Most of the negative reviews are about OOC characters, which means there is nothing wrong with the storyline and writing.

It's okay, the character doesn't have OOC behavior

My favorite is still this Amanda,

Full marks. I do think that the original Harry will not be what he is now when he grows up, but in my eyes it is not particularly OOC. The author's way of handling the original characters is very clever, not to mention the almost completely restored existence of Riddle😂

Five points for the plot and Tom, and one point for the portrayal of Harry. Good luck to the author for the article. Although this Harry did not write that feeling, but the adult Harry can barely accept it. At least I have finished reading the article. Good luck to the author, but don't run away when writing about family relationships... After thinking about it, I'll give it five points. The article is really good.

Well written! ! ! Really worth seeing! ! !

It's really good. Can the author release the 600,000-yuan manuscript tomorrow? Harry's character is very sweet. Maybe he has seen too many dark plots. I always feel that Little Tom is acting. I am laughing so hard. Come on.

It's okay, although the people are a bit OOC, especially Harry. It would be much better if it wasn't a Harry Potter fanfic. I'll give it a five-star rating first so that more people can see this book.

Riddle wrote Invincible well.

Nice! The writing is very good!

After reading it, there are still no surprises.

Although I feel like you won't be able to continue writing in the end, I still encourage you.

My Mamma Mia, I also fell in love with this book. Who doesn't want to rush home and read the last chapter?

I just tied it yesterday, and today there are so many more. The author can't do it. Please don't throw a knife at yourself. Please, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Very beautiful, very very beautiful

This is a very good article in Tangha

Harry looked at me and made me feel depressed.