Editing the Supernatural, Starting in Neon

It's pretty good, and the writing is pretty good, but I hope that when the author writes in the future, he can occasionally mention some situations or reactions to the previous weird stories. Otherwise, it will be produced one by one like this, and if you just turn over the chapters directly, it will feel quite boring, without that feeling. Behind the scenes, there are various preferential treatments here. The red line cannot be touched, but you still want China. What should you do? Then you can only enjoy the blessings. The dragon comes to congratulate you and you are from the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion. In fact, these are okay. Although it is very cliché, it is human nature. But just by writing this, you would dare to touch it? Do we want to come to the only kingdom of God in heaven? Will there be various preferential treatments later? It doesn't matter if you make a small fuss, but if you really treat me like one of your own and give me crazy preferential treatment, then you don't need to look at it. Isn't it different to just look at what I get and hand it over directly to the country?

(The following is my personal opinion, please do not criticize) I personally have read Chapter 77, and the overall feeling is okay. But after more than 70 chapters, when I arrived in the Kingdom of China, I started to feel a little um and give some special treatment. It's not that it's not good, but you have to grasp this degree. Anyway, I feel that it may give China a big advantage in the future, and it will be a big step ahead of other countries.

It has a good behind-the-scenes flow, the writing is excellent, and the plot arrangement is reasonable. It would be better if the protagonist could be more restrained when he appears. For example, the part about gambling is actually unnecessary. It would be better to write about how the old man tracked down the Jersey Devil. You can also wear a vest when you appear in the future, and you don't need help. You can just play a guiding role.

There are some minor points, but I have caught up with the latest chapters, so overall it is okay. As for the latest chapters, some people in Dragon Kingdom don't like the preferential treatment. I think it is okay and more realistic. After all, the character is an ordinary person.

It's very interesting. Keep writing. Come on, just try not to reorganize the country. Otherwise, the book will fall apart as soon as the rules are tightened. Try to avoid the country. If you write well, it is difficult to grasp the scale, and it will easily have an impact on the world view of the novel. If it is not well written, it will be easily blocked. It is better not to write at all.

Very good, especially the gas station and the living body. These two parts are really well written. Why is it getting boring?

Maintain your current level, don't act too fast, don't play around with your emotions, show yourself before others 😂 😂 don't touch the flood line, five-star recommendation!!

Tomato is one of the rare behind-the-scenes videos worth watching. No, author, are you planning to end the story? I had a hard time finding one that I could read.

Personally, I feel pretty good in all aspects, and I hope the author can continue to do so 👍

[Pause face] The writing is very good. In fact, the logic is relatively rigorous in the early stage, but many people may not understand it. You have to create some illustrations to let ordinary people understand it.