Tomb Robbery Live Broadcast: Start as the Mute Zhang

This performance is quite similar to Zhang Qiling's character. There's no cliché pretentious slap in the face. He doesn't save people who like to seek death. Keep up the good work, author, and don't stop updating [Like] [Like]

It's super good-looking, the characters are vivid, and the temperament of the little brother is well portrayed. The fight scenes are also very smooth, neither Madonna nor Destruction Kadokura. Much more to come!

The fighting scenes are okay, the characters are consistent, and the logic sometimes doesn't make sense. It feels like the author has written out his own voice. The subject of two Zhang Qiling meeting is quite novel, but I have a problem. The original novel is Nen Niu Wu Fang. What direction do you decide now whether to write about two men or six people (Xiu Xiu is not counted)

It looks good, the author's writing style is very good, Zhang Qiling's character is not broken, and the other Zhang Qiling is so good, his character is not broken at all. The author also said that they are two male protagonists, but they are brothers. And I like the pretentious part at the beginning the best. Brother Cool Sa, double happiness. The Iron Triangle is together again, and Hei Xiazi, Jie Xiaohua, and Huo Xiuxiu are all there. The most important thing is that Wu Xie himself has begun to awaken his memory. I always feel familiar with him.

How should I put it, the novel's description of Zhang Qiling is not OOC, it describes his loneliness and the process of losing his memory. The writing style is also okay. It's not all the author's own ideas, but it's a bit of a book-keeping style. I personally don't like this kind of writing very much. I think it's a bit dull. Of course, I don't mean to say bad. Everyone has their own preferences. As for the content, it was okay at first, it was able to attract people, and the fighting scenes were interesting to watch, but later on it became very strange. The first is Zhang Qiling's version. The author gives the Yang Yang version that comes out first, and the Liang Yuxiao version that comes out later. But isn't this convenient for readers to distinguish? The people in the article should not know it, but the author does not seem to be aware of this problem. Moreover, even if there is another world in the article, Yang Yang and Liang Yuxiao are there, no one will bring in what kind of brother they are. Secondly, the issue of how to get some things is not clear, such as the jade cicada and the black sheet with a curse. There are many places where they are used as keys. It is not written every time and then taken back after use. I remember that it is clearly written in other places. I don't know why it is not written clearly here. It is easy for people to misunderstand whether this thing is consumed or retained. Finally, the transition in some places written by the author is not natural enough, and there are many doubts. For example, the systematic strength is given by the system (probably, I think so at the moment). Why does the unsystematic one also recover his strength when he gets the strength recovery reward systematically? And in some places, others are not told that Zhang Qiling has night vision, but others know it. Zhang Qiling used blood to fight off danger more than once, but said that people who have been there since the first adventure do not know about it, which is very strange. The above are my personal views and opinions. I made the evaluation after reading all the updates. There may be some differences from the actual situation written in the article, but I hope it can help the author and readers. Oh, by the way, there are some places in the article where the content is repeatedly described. Although it is meant to emphasize, too much repetition makes people feel boring. It is recommended that the author change the expression or metaphor when repeating the description, and try not to repeat the previous description.

The expressions are clear, and the acting fits the character of the little brother very well. At least in my mind, it is very good. I like the little brother very much. The author must not stop updating it.

It's pretty cool, but isn't this acting? Why does it feel like the protagonist is lost? Even with the anchor point of the system, I can't remember myself, and slowly I feel like I only have two spirits?

I want to see the two spirits [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss], the sympathy between the two brothers [crying] [crying] [crying], only you know yourself best! ! ! !

Very nice! The writing is very good! Come on, author, never stop updating.

It's awesome, great, and very well written. I really like this fight scene, and the emotions are also very delicate. Well, if you don't like TV dramas, you may feel a little uncomfortable. Just skip the first part, and the later part will be very good.

It looks good, the acting is good, and the protagonist talks a little more than other fans, but Brother Zhang can say "Oh my God, it's Chen Wenjin", so it's okay to talk a little more without a mouth substitute. The author should feel very clean. I don't know what is wrong with reading the book. Sometimes he will emphasize that the "xx version of Zhang Qiling" has been honestly changed now, but there are still some things that have not been completely changed. The book is very good. Don't give up. I like reading it.

Hello everyone, the character design of the role-playing article I wrote has not collapsed. Some people think that Zhang Qiling has collapsed a little too much because he talks too much. If the protagonist does not speak throughout the whole process, what is the point? How can it set off the protagonist's ability and existence? Playing Zhang Qiling and falling in love, breaking down like this, breaking down like this, you have never seen anything more devastating. I have read a book that was even more devastating. The author directly wrote Zhang Qiling and directly talked about the beautiful white legs. What I wrote just has a little more human fireworks, and it does not collapse. I would like some people to think a little longer when reading this.

In the end, the protagonist seems to have forgotten himself, and the mask cannot be taken off after being on for a long time. In the end, it does not feel like acting, but like he has forgotten his past and taken on the identity of another person. From the moment the protagonist adopts the identity of "Zhang Qiling", "Xie Linyuan" seems to be Buried in the past, if this name is mentioned again later, no one will think of it, and you will know the ending of pretending to be someone else😔. Many people seem to have forgotten the true meaning of acting. 100% Acting is no different from seizing one's body. It's not that the writing is bad, it's just that I feel sad😣

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In fact, they all look pretty good, but they feel a little weird. It's probably a replacement. It felt like the protagonist had lost himself, and in the end, he became more directly a two-spirit. Of course it's still very good, I recommend everyone to watch it. Helpless. I'm really speechless, the latter two spirits are actually not bad. But why did the author insist on using a celebrity interpretation? And there are 5,000 sentences out of 10,000, all of which are words like, he is too lonely, he is lonely. In fact, that's right. It just happens too often. The main thing is the star's interpretation, it really hits the mark. If you want to do it, just do it like two Zhang Qiling's parallel worlds. You don't need to do any star interpretation. It was originally very good-looking, but this one is a bit shocking at first glance. There is a feeling that fans are wearing the skin of strangers. I still wanted to give a reward, but when I saw it later, it really scared me. Forget it, forget it. Don't read it if you don't like being brought into reality. Otherwise, you will really be shocked. The author is really weird. It feels a bit unpopular. But it was definitely written by a human being. The main thing is that I feel like it deviated a bit from the main line later on, and in some places, well, you didn't write it completely clearly, that is, whether it was retained or placed with someone. For example, that piece of jade cicada. But it is true that Zhang Qiling is not OOC, and it can even be said that it is actually quite consistent with the original work. After all, the guy in the original novel really likes to talk, as you can see from Chen Wenjin's paragraph, but I just feel that the author is a bit fluent and dull. But it's not the kind of primary school student writing style. It feels a bit like starting to learn argumentative writing. The writing is relatively green, but not that comprehensive. In fact, the funniest part is the fighting or the turn-based one. I wonder if the author laughed when he wrote it? You move and I move, just like fighting with that kid.

The creation of the image of the little brother is very successful. Generally speaking, it is pretty good. However, I don't like the Iron Triangle and the subject of twin spirits. I personally can't accept it. Of course, if you like this kind of book, it is still good and you can follow it.

This author seems to have written another novel, which is quite good. The writing style is very good. The main theme is about Zhang Qiling and the secret of immortality, as well as his loneliness. Anyway, I really like reading it.

It's nice to look at, but it's always the little brother who protects others and he gets scolded [petrified]. Those people don't have any fighting ability?

The writing is very good. Come on, the author. I hope the author can bring out more about the Zhang family so that I can have some background. Please, please, please! [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

Anyway, you haven't seen anything poisonous about me so far. Personally, I think the Zhang Qiling written by the author is considered to be above average from what I have read. What I wrote above is that he is more decisive but at the same time, he is also relatively lonely. Fortunately, the author has gathered the Iron Triangle behind him. There are also flowers and black glasses. Finally, I wish the author a great success! There are also some small suggestions, but the backend seems a bit messy. There are too many voices. And the settings of the two Zhang Qiling are relatively novel.

Although some places are not very good, of course this is also common in tomb robbing stories, so I can only say that it is just okay. At least it was a great success. Yang Yang's version of Zhang Qiling, Xiao Yuliang's version of Zhang Qiling, "Twin Spirits, Black Blind Man, Innocence, Fatty, Hua Ye, Xiuxiu" teamed up for adventure. My four stars are for "Iron 7️⃣ Corner" The author still needs to work harder

I just started to look at it, and it seems that there are people like Wu Xie, Fatty Wang, Huo Xiuxiu, Xie Yuchen, Heixiazi and others in this catalog. There really are them! Thank you, author. I thought there was no such thing. I feel that if there was only Zhang Qiling, I would feel too little and too lonely. I always feel that something is missing and he understands me too well. Author.

It's very exciting. I like to read this kind of adventurous tomb robbing novels that are very exciting and have many unknown secrets.

The author's writing is very good. The role of Zhang Qiling is not wordy, and the fighting scenes are also more coherent. It is a relatively good acting story⊙▽⊙

So far, I personally think it's quite good. At least there are no other books that are always pretentious and slap in the face. After all, I personally hate pretentiousness and slap in the face.

It's really good-looking. I like it just too little. Xie Linyuan finally became Zhang Qiling

It's so beautiful. I love the two Zhang Qiling.

It's scary and beautiful, the story is well written and very attractive.

It's beautiful, knifeless, and very sweet. Trust me, Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people.

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