Tycoon Life: Starting Out as an Online Tycoon

It's okay, but Qi'an's character is seriously unlikable, not even as good as the college student who painted the picture. In addition, you can have a little more realistic consumption, instead of three points and one line: brush money and NPC's reaction to open a room. It may be fine at first, but it will cause visual fatigue as you look at it. Finally, there is the issue of dog-licking in the comments. The two female college students the author wrote about were okay, but Qi'an really wrote it as if the protagonist couldn't live without her, and I saw that the young woman in the latest chapter also has this tendency. I hope the more I write, the better Stop writing emotional scenes. The young woman in the back had a high fever in the middle of the night. Instead of calling an ambulance or taking a taxi to the hospital, she asked you to drive to her house to pick up the child and then go to the hospital. Hahaha, your child is not in a hurry. There is a lot of foreshadowing. From the beginning, you wrote that this woman is here for money. The protagonist can't meet her without money. They are all adults, and it is written openly that this woman had a hard time raising a baby by herself and could no longer carry on, so she wanted to find a rich man so that she could take care of her daughter. She got the money, and the protagonist was happy. You have to write awkwardly about how broken her family is and how difficult life is, and then the protagonist comes, Qingtian is there, and she has someone to rely on. Haha, this will only move you. If you don't have some writing skills, don't touch the emotional scenes. I read this book because there are no system restrictions on how many points you have to earn and the amount of points you have to earn is relatively restrained. I don't care if the protagonist's harem has charisma or not. I only care about whether it's fun to earn money and spend money.

It looks very comfortable and looks better than just a gift. There's a little more sparkle in the world, come on, author After reading it, the traces of AI are a bit obvious but still acceptable. If there is still a plot in which the heroine gets close to the protagonist, it will be a bit discouraging. I don't know why the author likes to write this kind of plot. The male protagonist is almost becoming a tool.

It's okay now, and I can talk about it in a mediocre way, but the author still needs to master the rhythm. It's not that being dull is not good, but he still needs to increase the explosive points appropriately to make it more attractive, and then slowly slow down the pace to prepare for the next explosive point. If you can master the rhythm well, you won't be afraid of the big news. At least you can support yourself by writing books.

I was thinking about it before, but I found a novel that I really liked, but it had too few words. I looked around to see if the author had any other works, and found out that it was actually written by the author of my favorite novel now. Real show

Four stars, please encourage me. I read one chapter and it's not my cup of tea. It has the potential to be a bit of a dog licker.

Nice! I like this kind of slap in the face without thinking.

It has a sense of life, but in Qi'an's case, it doesn't feel like the protagonist has to pay so much. The protagonist's attitude towards Qi'an does not match the author's description of her. Did the author bring in anything himself?

Is Qi'an an electronic pet?

It's pretty good. I'm not very good at evaluating it, but it's much better than those who easily reward millions and tens of millions.

It's great. It's the first time I've seen such a simple and powerful article. It's different from others. It's awesome.