Wang Carpenter Was Reborn, Mo Dou Broke Off His Relationship, and Lu Ban Became a God!

As the opening chapter, this chapter can be called a model of refreshing writing. It not only completes the core setting of "rebirth + revenge", but also firmly captures the readers with dense conflicts, distinctive characters, and explosive climax. In terms of plot, from rebirth and awakening to being surrounded by his children, to Lu Ban's secret skills to fight back, and Mo Dou's sworn vows, the rhythm is tight, the reversal is neat, and there is no redundancy; in terms of character creation, the greed and insidiousness of the "Nine Insects" and the calmness and ruthlessness of the protagonist are quickly established through actions, details, and language, especially the protagonist who combines carpentry skills with revenge. "Lu Ban's Secret Technique" breaks the situation, forming a unique "craftsman's revenge" setting, which is highly recognizable; in terms of atmosphere creation, the solemnity and bleakness of the mourning hall is intertwined with the aggressiveness of the villain, and the protagonist's angry murderous intention, which is full of tension; in terms of language, it has both the picture sense of environmental description and the impact of short declarations. The metaphor is precise, pungent, and highly contagious. Overall, the beginning of this chapter is a climax, which not only explains the core background and contradictions, but also leaves enough suspense, successfully arousing readers' expectations for the subsequent specific process of "Ink Dou's Broken Bride" and more magical uses of "Lu Ban's Secret Techniques", which sets a "refreshing, exciting, and ruthless" tone for the full text. The most exciting thing about this chapter is the balance between "refreshment" and "logic": Refreshing feeling: Wang Dezhu's counterattack is crisp and neat, from "defeating the enemy with a battle of ink" to "exposing the drug through drug testing" to "violently beating in public", there is no irritation in the whole process, especially the foreshadowing of the "Nine Palaces of Marriage Breaking Arrangement", which makes readers full of expectations for the follow-up "cleaning up the unfilial son". Logic: The drug testing process has scientific details (silver needle + vinegar), the self-exposure plot has causes and consequences (Li's sinister greed + Wang Erni's madness), the memory killing explains the motivation for revenge, and the neighbors' comments strengthen the moral stance, all linked together without any loopholes. Disadvantages: The portrayal of some supporting characters (such as Wang Sangun and Wang Xiaowu) is a bit thin. More psychological activities or backgrounds can be added to make the group portraits of "unfilial sons" more three-dimensional. Summary: This chapter uses "Poisonous Chicken Soup" as the introduction, "Ink Dou" as the sword, and the trio of "poison testing + self-exposure + memory killing" to strip away the ugly appearance of the "unfilial son". At the same time, it establishes Wang Dezhu's "stolen revenge" character, and even uses the "Nine Palaces Broken Marriage Formation" to whet your appetite, just one word! Cool! Two words are still cool! ! !

[Author's self-comment] Luban's secret technique is a unique skill that can lead to the gods! The beginning of rebirth at the age of 59 is hell! His wife's coffin was not covered, and nine unfilial sons came to snatch the family property. The old carpenter Wang Dezhu broke off the relationship with an ink fountain! There is no Virgin's heart, only the feeling of perseverance to the end: the ink-drawn lines tightening the bones, the reverse word splitting to set up a situation, the seven-day promise of revenge, every chapter is a collision between craft rules and real-life conspiracy. Baozi, who likes folk crafts + rebirth and revenge, can rush with confidence, it's a fun slap in the face, the pace is fast, and you won't lose money after chasing! # Rebirth # Mo Dou breaks off the relationship #Luban Fengshen

Okay, that's a nice slap in the face! Relieve your anger, click in and enter the role, completely enter the role! It should be another down-to-earth book about ancient times that can be used to enthrone gods. It's good to read and listen to! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] It is good-looking, has clear logic, vivid characters, gripping plot, and distinct themes that blend into real life. Luban's secret technique can also be put into practice, is worth pursuing, and has endless aftertaste. [Like][Like][Like]