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I was deceived into it by the cool title, but the writing is really good. The protagonist's early twisting feeling is well written. You can change the indentation of the paragraphs. It often looks like a big pile of text and looks a bit tired.

Isn't it that the background is very big? When I first arrived at the sect, I was wildly insulted and almost killed. After I arrived at the sect, I was constantly targeted, kicked here and there, and two days later, two people came to insult and frame me. I felt that the protagonist's family and father and mother were not good enough. No one's family has a high status for the big yellow dog at the gate. It may be a unique way of writing. I don't understand but respect it.

Yes, the heroine is well portrayed. I enjoyed reading Chapter 256, but Bai Wei's writing was a bit fragmented, lengthy and boring. Everything else is good. More to come.

One star less would make the author proud. I have read more than 100 chapters so far, and I think it's okay. It's just that the early stage is a bit toxic, the transformation of gods to save the situation is too slow, and the emotional line progresses very slowly. I looked at the title and thought it was invincible in the early stage, (wry smile). When I read the text, alas, it turns out that it is not a particularly exciting article. Also, as a time traveler, there is no system or anything else. The eldest son of a family that traveled through time and grew up. The child is a kind of strength in itself (wry smile). Now I am looking forward to Murong Xue's conspiracy. The plot is quite good and more attractive. I hope the author will continue writing it. I think, even if there are not many people who support it, being able to give Mo Li a perfect ending and finish writing this story may be the greatest meaning to the author... Also, from my point of view, that Murong Xue seems to have some special attributes, and I am looking forward to it. My family is waiting for me to see the latest chapter... That Mo Li, I don't know when I will be able to unlock my heart. Compared with reality, I can't help but sigh, the male protagonist eats so well, I envy the male protagonist I have read the latest chapter now. I am very convinced that Murong Xue has awakened special attributes. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up plot (Western Region). However, reading several chapters is too troublesome. I will read it for a while. I hope the author will not be a pigeon, otherwise... Then there really is no top but no bottom.

Give yourself a good review [shy]

The carefree and free-spirited but secretly sensitive young master × the loyal, silent but sharp-edged sword-bone servant From the current point of view, the drama is written in a relaxed and relaxed manner, and the two people's late-night emotional exchanges made me so high. The writing is not pretentious or awkward, and it allows you to feel the turbulence of the two people's emotions. The little servant who has begun to look forward crazily to unlocking the heart lock will forcefully swear to possess the master.

It's been a while since I've seen a work that moved me, and I'm a fantasy harem bookworm. Uncle Huang hasn't read it, so he decided to comment and encourage the author halfway through reading it. The author's description of the emotional inner monologue is very good. Whether it's inner details or the character's reaction (corners of mouth) (clenching hands) when hearing a certain sentence. Can the author arrange some Shura fields appropriately in the later stage? Don't let the hero's strategy go too smoothly. Woohoo. (I hate people who are handsomer than me and richer than me) [Crying]

It's not bad, it's not a mindless harem of girls. I find the emotional scenes quite comfortable. The worldview seems to have no problems at the moment. It's quite relaxing to watch. There's nothing particularly serious about it. I hope the author will update it more. It's not enough [shy]

It's very interesting. Keep up the good work, author.

The book is quite nice.

I really like the idea that the female protagonist is the male protagonist's bodyguard or maid. I don't know if there are any books with similar settings.

I feel like there are some features here that are a bit like seeking longevity.

I hope there will be a happy ending for all the heroines. I really like Murong Xue's [blowing kiss]

I like to have fun every day, come on [blowing kiss]

Nice, very sweet novel

It's okay. Generally speaking, it's in the middle and upper reaches and is watchable.

I don't look like a local, my writing is really good.

The detailed description is still very detailed, but it's just not satisfying enough.

What a hearty read

Not bad, not bad. If the emotional details were more profound, it would be better, maybe 8 points or above [laughing]

The writing is good, and the emotional line develops naturally! Although the plot is a bit scattered, the shortcomings do not hide the good points, and it is well received!

It's well written, but it's a pity it's not popular

When will the lock on Li Qiye's heart be unlocked?

Not a harem? There are several heroines in total. Now the only one whose relationship is clearly written is a maid! That Murong Xue also has some signs of it. Isn't the author a bit lacking?

Why don't you feel like a local?

Not cool enough, not cool enough

Give more candies to Li Qiye!

It's okay, but the expectations given at the beginning are different from those in the rest of the article. I thought it was a forbidden harem.

Why are there so few people? I think it looks pretty good ()

Come on ฅ, it's very well written, keep it up!