When Phantoms Take the Court
The day I transmigrated as a first-year at Aoba Johsai High School, I got bound to the “Kuroko’s Basketball Ability System.”
In my first practice match, I used “Misdirection” to receive Tōru Oikawa’s powerful spike.
As the whole team stared in shock, the System chimed: “Taiga Kagami’s jumping ability unlocked: 30%.”
Tōru Oikawa narrowed his eyes at me. “Interesting.”
In the prefectural championship match against Karasuno, I used three abilities at once to shut down Shoyo Hinata.
But after the match, I received a warning: “Excessive presence depletion. Your teammates will gradually forget you.”
On the eve of the national tournament, Hajime Iwaizumi suddenly asked me, “Who are you?”
I smiled, sealed the System, and walked onto the court.
This time, I wouldn’t need superpowers.
I came here for the joy of exercise, but the capital letters are a bit dull and aggrieved, and the feeling is a bit depressing. Oikawa is a bit funny, but very gentle and feels like a little tsundere. He is really the kind of mortal who works hard, so he has shining points. The writing in the capital letters makes me feel that Oikawa is a bad superior. It makes me feel that the protagonist is being bullied. There is a system that cannot be used casually, so why write it? You said the writing is not good, but the capital letters are okay, but it is a bit competitive and cruel.
This book is really well written overall, the plot is coherent and smooth, and it is easy for people to get involved. The only pity is that there is a slight problem with the rhythm control: in the early stage, the whole game is focused on the game, and the rhythm is too fast; later on, it turns to daily description, and the contrast between the rhythm before and after is a bit large, failing to balance the proportion of competition and daily life. But the flaws do not hide the flaws, the overall reading experience is still very online!
It's very beautiful. The author is great and the writing is super good. Please update it more.