Genshin Impact: I Sell Cards in Teyvat

Four-star anti-screen. It's a very good article. As a derivative article of a male channel, it is already remarkable because it does not kneel down and lick the female characters and does not deliberately belittle and persecute the male characters. The characters in the article are not too OOC. The only shortcoming is that it is too short. At present, it seems that there is no heroine, but the future is promising 👍

There are currently 22 chapters. I think it's mainly a matter of rhythm and plot. I think that in general, this kind of novel that uses external forces to intervene in the plot should promote the development of the plot through the role of cards. The core service goal should be the plot. For example, through this card, how do the characters become, what changes occur in the plot, what regrets are made up, and what interesting plots are created. But the author's current performance to me is more like focusing on the cards. It seems to be the character → draw the card → what skills the card has → the character's feelings → a small impact, and so on. It feels more like a running account to me, just a bit like instant noodles Of course, it may be that there is a problem with my understanding, and the later chapters may be improved, but if the previous chapters cannot retain readers, there will still be some problems, but it may also be a matter of preference. Maybe some people like to farm slowly. If there are improvements in the following articles, I will change the review Summary: You can read it when you are short of books. What should I say when I see Chapter 59? It's hard to comment A flowing story line, changing the soup but not the ingredients, it is still a cycle New character → draw card → play card → character is surprised → or → share with others → others are surprised Nearly 60 chapters are already over 100,000 words long, and there is little feedback. I feel like it's just a slice of Wendy's Purifying Wind Demon Dragon and Diluc's Beating Doctor. Most of them are possibilities, what you can do if you have this card. For example, the first two chefs may make better dishes after they have the card. In theory, shouldn't there be a single-character plot, such as the adventures of two cooks, Chongyun's feelings about using cards, or the effects of other characters getting cards? There are too few such plots, and there is little feedback. It just gives people the feeling that the author is focusing on the cards and carefully creating card effects. That's not to say it's not possible, but it can be written like this in another world, and it can also have these effects in other fan fiction cards. What I want to see is the plot of Genshin Impact, and the impact of cards on the plot and main characters, and the various interesting plots derived from it. Summary: Can be watched daily

It's one of the best Genshin Impact novels I've read recently. It's highly recommended for those who like a relaxed, everyday style of writing. There aren't too many descriptions of fierce battles or bitter hatred, and the atmosphere is very relaxed [laughs] The descriptions of the characters are also very accurate. There are even many specific stories of the characters. This is the first time I know 🤦. There is nothing OOC about it at present. Moreover, the energy and writing power used for male and female characters are similar, and there is no preference for one. The appearance and story of each character are very reasonable. The abilities of the cards are also very interesting. Although I have never seen some of them, it can be seen that the author is involved in a wide range of circles [laughs] Even if I don't know the abilities, the writing is very clear and interesting. A very recommended book [laughter]

A very comfortable Genshin Impact fanfic. The protagonist travels through time and opens a card store. The cards are set in complete gradients. There are weapons, skills, special rule cards, and upgrades. The scene where everyone in Liyue comes to draw cards is written to fit the characters of the original work. Zhongli, Ningguang, and Wendy interact naturally, and the overall rhythm is relaxed and there is no forced conflict.

Add some other worlds to it, otherwise I feel like my combat power will collapse.

I feel that one Genshin Impact world is not enough for these cards. How about adding a few more worlds?

It belongs to Genshin Impact's clear flow of card drawing. At least the author is not Yun Yuanshen. Eh? Yun Duo🤩, da↘da↗da↘da↗da↘, I really want to play Genshin Impact😨, Yun☁️Genshin Impact😙, dang dang dang dang 😊, watch the excitement👍🎊😆, Yun Duo🤩 ☁️Genshin Impact😄, woooooooooooo, I really want to play Genshin Impact😭😭😭Yun☁️Genshin Impact, my friends are here😊😃😆, let's play Genshin Impact together, YunShin☁️Genshin Impact! Ahhhhhhhh😙, I really want to play Genshin Impact😙Cloud☁️Genshin Impact, hahahahaha🤣🤣🤣, play Genshin Impact together, Cloud☁️Genshin Impact, think about it, 🤩I want to play Genshin Impact😋Web cloud, low power consumption and no distortion😌, WiFi network cable🥰, all can be 60 frames😍, come, come, come👏, enter the cloud☁️Genshin Impact

First of all, I would like to encourage the author, but at present, it seems that the card drawing link and the explanation link of the chapter occupy too much of Zhang's pages, and the actual plot is not much promoted. If it continues like this, it will only appear to be very watery. After all, you update three or four chapters every day. If most of them are explanatory cards, it would be like those things in the upgrade monster-fighting system where the protagonist can just look at the system panel and write a few pages. I hope the author can improve it. After all, it will still be like this in the future. Some people will rate it and say it is very poor. Finally, I have not played Bengtie for a long time, nor have I played Bengsan. The author can give a brief introduction when describing the new characters and new titles that appear in the article later, so that some readers who have played one or two games can quickly understand [Thoughts]

Brother, you seem to have been stabbed. [Laughs] Kong Zhi Rui is against the Lord. It seems that you can show up in any way you want Kong Zhi Rui. Just write a setting. It's just that the ruler of Sora didn't join the rebels and was still on Sky Island [laughing]

It's a very good fanfic. The plot is light-hearted. Although the protagonist is not invincible at the beginning, he is pretty much the same. He is a fun-loving person throughout the whole process. It's just a plot. I have no patience for reading too much. I don't want to read it after more than 200 chapters. I'll wait for a while before continuing.