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Shennong is here. The following plot is from Chapter 27.28. It is recommended to watch it first. If you find it useful, please leave me a comment and like it to help more people see it. If you know a little bit about Douluo, then you know what level the exoskeleton is. It is standard for the protagonist. It is a super artifact prototype. When you become a god, it will automatically become an artifact. It is a defensive exoskeleton that can be used as an artifact material. My wife is a food system and has no self-protection. When she was caught, she chose to use this plus a favor from the level 98 Seven Kills Sword to buy five million gold coins and an invitation card for the Star Luo Royal Auction. The card you can get at level 98 only by breathing is ➕5 million. The price of a ten thousand year bone in the original book is 10 million less. The level 7 soul guide is almost 5 million. You can do the math by yourself.

I beg the author to update more quickly and more often! I want to see Qiuer dunk her red pupils [laughing]

It's really beautiful! Lily High Competition!

It's very interesting, and overall it's a high-quality Douluo fanfic that I've had a great experience with so far, but I personally don't like some of the details in the early plot. For example, in the setting of the supporting character's soul ring life span, I feel that the author's control over the soul ring system is slightly lacking. The protagonist has a special setting, and it is normal for the spirit ring to have a long life. However, the third spirit ring of other supporting characters has been used for six or seven thousand years. This age has almost reached the absorption limit of the fourth spirit ring. Why not just go to ten thousand years for the fourth spirit ring? It is a bit unacceptable. There is also the plot at the beginning where the protagonist and Dou Er go to the Star Dou Forest, which is also handled a bit bluntly. Huo Yuhao already had the corresponding soul ring, and he followed the protagonist into the forest without telling the protagonist. It felt like he was forcibly advancing the plot. There is also a problem with the timeline. The timeline of the encounter with Tang Ya does not match up. In addition, the original characters that appeared in the early stage have high combat power and complicated background relationships. It was a bit difficult for me to accept when they first appeared. However, these problems were significantly improved in the later stages. The years of absorption were quite reasonable, and I gradually accepted the original character as I watched. The protagonist's combat power is very comfortable to control, and unlike other fan works, there is no brainless plot where you can kill randomly after dozens of levels. The whole process is very comfortable to watch. In addition, the emotional lines are also written very delicately and naturally, without any harsh industrial saccharine. I hope the author can maintain this pace and bring more exciting content in the future.

It's really amazing. Believe me, this book is the best-looking Douluo girl I've ever read. It's not boring at all. The heroine is not a virgin and she has brains. The author writes the battles in such detail that the more you read, the more excited you become. It doesn't have any old clichés and is better than many other two-girl series.

Super pretty! The Douluo novels I read before felt like they were illogical and mindless (the most important thing is that I can't lose my mind), but this one is simply shocking and delicious.

The writing is very good, with ideas and good writing style. However, this fan seems to have a short life in Tomato, which makes me a little worried.

The author makes Le Qingyin the protagonist CP! ! ! Please, a harem is okay too! ! ! ! Otherwise, the two of them are more suitable. They have grown up together and will not stand out from each other. [Cry][cry][cry]

When the meteor of the broken watch falls on the book, only the resurrected author can escape from the destined demise. In order to prevent the sun from setting, the author flies into the sky and takes away your book waste. The author will write because of it and fall into the void. But if you want to take it back, you, you, must write to a higher place than the author. This is the logic behind discontinuation after a serialization break. This is the author's pen This is the end of this book Nothing to do with choice Nothing to do with life or death at this moment All the ideals converge into one single ambition! All the beasts in the Brahma world are added to this body Break into the abyss, get off the shelf and draw your sword Stepping forward, this is The inscription of "Breaking Change"! This time, I press the author's life into the pen and look forward to you Surpass all interruptions and delistings!

The writing style is very comfortable, the logic is good, and there are no poisonous points. The most important thing is the battle, which makes people's blood boil. It's so awesome! ! By the way, I want to see Qiu'er dunk the red pupils! The author will bring it up quickly, hey hey...[Shy]

In fact, I would rather see Yue Qingyin become the heroine's wife [shy] who has been groomed since childhood, and be the original heroine [blowing kiss]

Very good-looking. This book basically surpasses all the Douluo fanfics I have read so far. And as far as I can see, this article is not a good one, and it is biased towards Lily. Compared to other fanfics where the protagonist starts with a million-year soul ring, this protagonist and his companions fight a thousand-year soul beast and are almost killed in reverse. However, I like to see a group of girls posting, so I must support it with five stars [Adoration] [Admiration] [Like] [Cool]

It looks good, just like when I opened the refrigerator to get socks, the TV was watering the flowers, the curtains ate the remote control, the slippers flew to the roof to count the stars, the cup sat on the ground to play games, the sun hid in the drawer to sleep, the road curved into a lollipop, I shouted into the air, and the schoolbag drank up the evening.

What does the original one-month Qingyin do? It has no effect

I can't. I think I put this book on the bookshelf when it was about 30 chapters in. I haven't read it yet. Now I've read it and I think it's very good. Also, I've become a little fat with books. ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з

It looks good, the writing is good, the plot is smooth, and the combat is good. Lily can post more posts later, and Yue Qingyin and Xiao Xiao or others can be deputy CPs.

This is the best one among my Dou 2 fanfics, but the updates are a bit slow, I hope they won't be interrupted.

It's super good-looking, so good that I can't describe the beauty of this article with my literary talent. When will the author release a hundred chapters and scare us to death [Thinking]

Good-looking (○｀ε´○) The heroine especially likes the orange-red color, with dark eyes and long straight hair ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა

It looks good, but is the heroine really Wang Donger? , I haven't seen it yet [laughing] Wrong, it's Wang Qiuer

It's pretty cool, but I don't know who the CP is.

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Very good-looking, the heroine is kind to people around her, but not a virgin

It's good to watch, both the plot and the fighting scenes are great.

Beautiful, rare to fight with 2 lilies! ! ! !

Beautiful, no need to say more

It's okay, except that it was a bit poisonous when I brought Yue Qingyin with me at the beginning, but then it became less poisonous.

The best Douluo fanfic, I hope it won't be banned

One of the best Douluo spin-offs I have ever read! ! ! ! Here I go, a subject matter that I have never seen before! ! ! So pretty Comments from a book friend of six years

The writing is delicate, lively and interesting, and the plot is also very good