The Taciturn Genius Girl and Me

The book is quite comfortable to read, but the pace of the daily salvation story is slow. I feel that the previous content is a bit boring. If you calm down and read it, it will be fine. But if you are a little impatient (want to see the yandere quickly), you can't read it. It feels like eating a chicken rack. It is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. I wanted to jump to watch but the content behind was unavailable. Either male or female protagonist will work. Summary: It's a good article, but if you can't calm down and read it, it will feel like chewing on the words. But the advantages outweigh the disadvantages (which are few). Worth a look[Like][Like][Like] The female protagonist is a bit too deified, almost like a robot, and Cheng Che feels like the male protagonist as soon as he appears. If it had always been written in this way, it would have been directly changed to Lu Wei and Lin Shen, Cheng Che and Su Wan. I hope to see the heroine take the initiative to break her fixed thinking in the later stage [grievance]

The writing style is an author who has his own characteristics among the many books I have read. Different from most daily writings, although this book focuses on daily descriptions, it does not bury emotions directly in the words like ordinary novels. Instead, it has a scientific thinking that requires you to slowly infer the emotional narrative by yourself, and prove the relationship between the protagonists step by step. It has its own characteristics. However, I would like to make some suggestions. The description of time in the article is very brief, which makes it easy to feel abrupt or confusing if you do not read it carefully. For example, the narrative related to Cheng Che is very abrupt when it first appears, without any warning, and then directly goes through the flashbacks before and after the competition to describe the process of getting acquainted. However, there is a lack of direct description of time. If you do not read it carefully, it may make readers feel very confused. However, readers of this kind of novel rarely read it carefully word for word.

The in-depth understanding of emotions and the daily conversations between the male and female protagonists can always make people immerse themselves in it. When I read the front page, I consciously understood that the author's yandere novels do not have the same plot as most yandere novels on the market, but this is also the main reason for people to continue reading. ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧

A common problem with popular yandere novels is that the yandere in the novel is generally just an attribute of the heroine, and is often used to portray the part of a person who lacks love. However, in popular descriptions, this kind of character is just to support a character to meet the needs of commercialization, and the transformation process is often missing. Or it is too abrupt and sick for the sake of illness, which leads to errors in the character's logic, and the overall plot perception is not good. I have read a lot of yandere articles with the theme of development, but there are also many that are easy to break down in the middle, especially the relationship between the supporting characters and the plot, and the conflict between the character logic and the plot; for example, in the description of the transformation process, sometimes many poisonous points are easily hidden here. You can see from the comments that most readers are currently uncomfortable with the supporting character Cheng (for the reason I mentioned in the comments in the article), so consider writing this type of subject matter For business, you need to avoid several obvious poisonous points. Of course, as long as there are novels, there must be clowns. This method often appears in the public in the form of a Shura field in the interaction between the male protagonist and other people. (Readers have double standards. They can accept the existence of a harem, but they will have a greater mental obsession with the women in the article. This is more obvious in yandere novels. This is a two-way choice between the reader and the author). Process is necessary, and writing your own path is also necessary. Of course, don't go too circuitous. The system may be complicated, but it only takes a pure heart to write stories. Ps: Of course life is not what you want, but I still like to watch something sweet. By：min

The narrative rhythm is relatively brisk, and it is not as irritable as other Tomato novels. However, there are some deficiencies in language description, which ordinary readers may not be able to see. However, the way the male protagonist speaks is consistent with the way the genius girl speaks, or it should be said that the two people look like the same person. The different personalities of different characters are not well distinguished. This is not in line with the similar but different life experiences of the two. Of course, it is difficult to have a good independent character personality. I hope the author will continue to work hard to improve his language and writing!

This book is awesome! Don't be fooled by the rating, the writing is better than some 9.5 Novels, and the narrative is eloquent, immersive and relaxing. Stop torturing readers. The content can be repeated but don't keep repeating it. I can't watch the process of the heroine writing the program, reading the program, and shutting down the computer more than ten times.

This is definitely not a formulaic yandere writing template. If you can bear to read it, it will make your eyes bright. The plain words can convey a stable power and a quiet feeling of moisturizing things. The characters are special, and the emotional development is also special, but it is also delicate enough. I believe in the potential of this book. Come on author [like]

The writing is good, and the arrangement of the characters in the plot is also perfect. The heroine Su Wan has a normal friend (female) and an academic friend (male) in the field of mathematics. The author has done a good job in handling this aspect. The heroine has no real contact with Jacky, and Jacky's feelings and boundaries for her are immediately eliminated and strictly controlled. There are no poisonous points in other novels (no physical contact, no daily interactions...). Even though it still makes me feel uncomfortable, I can understand the role of writing about Jacky. First, I can gain new understanding and insights on the heroine's mathematical journey. Second, through Jacky's feelings for her, she can clarify her feelings for the protagonist, thus opening up the emotional line. The current pace is very slow. The heroine was 12 years old at the beginning and is now 13 years old. About 50 chapters have been written for a year's plot. According to this trend, the relationship between the male and female protagonists will officially open in chapter 300. But 300 chapters are too many, and I'm afraid the author will be a eunuch if he doesn't write them all. It is recommended to open the love line in Chapter 120

This novel is very well written and the author's technique is skillful, but I don't like this type of novel (the author writes very well, it's really good, but I don't like the previous ones), but the author writes really well. I give the author five stars because I can't judge the author's writing because of my own liking. Come on, author.

Originally I wanted to give it zero points, but after thinking about it carefully, I decided not to. After all, the sentences in this article are quite vivid and the plot is okay, but there are a lot of repetitions and the competition for favor (I don't know why, the heroine cried inexplicably and the protagonist asked if it was because he was on the phone with someone else?) It is suspected of AI. Even if it's AI, I'll admit it, because this article is really good and the special details of the characterization can only be said to be gold-rimmed. If the author sees my comment, please give me an answer. Is it AI? If so, can you modify it next time you publish it? The book is dead, but the love of the characters is real.

I really like such a long-lasting, warm and plain story. Every time I read it, this beautiful story will make the corners of my mouth slightly raise unconsciously. Thank you to the author for bringing us such a story. I hope that Lin Shen, Su Wan, and everyone who writes and reads this story will go well and find their own happiness in life.

A very thoughtful book that resonates with people all the time. I always thought that I had no pressure and had a good attitude. I cried when I was in junior high school, and I thought it was a special reaction when facing difficulties. Now I am in my twenties, and I discovered today that when I cry, it may be when I find myself under great pressure. This book uses a surreal way to let me know myself.

Well, what can I say about this book? It can be seen that the author has good writing skills, but in fact, this book only promotes people who like to see yanderes. I think it might be better if the author tries to change the label (remove the yandere and replace it with adoption or slow pace). Compared with other books of the same type, the emotional collision started early. This book can be seen from this book. It can be seen that after the slow-paced adoption was prepared, the progress was consciously made. Feel like watching Nurture? It doesn't count as cultivation but mutual growth and redemption. Maybe changing the name and label can attract the corresponding group. I really can't stand it anymore, but I still like that kind of energy. The above is purely my personal opinion. I only want to mention it for new readers who want to read it. If you are here for yandere, you may not get what you want for a long time. If you are here for the single heroine and adoption, then you can see if it suits your taste. The author's skills are still there.

Judging from the current situation, it is beginning to accelerate. The theme of this book is redemption and sadism. I hope it will have a good ending. If it is sadistic, it will most likely start from the perspective of the age of the male and female protagonist. I hope the author can perform stably and write well every day [top post]

The writing is good, but the pace is slow. But Cheng Che is more vicious in this regard. He is said to be a partner in mathematics. But he has a different feeling for the heroine. The male and female protagonists prefer daily interactions. Yandere has not seen it yet, so I will give it five stars. Check it out later

The author writes very well and has a good foundation. I was pleasantly surprised by combining mathematical logic and using it to describe the relationship between the male and female protagonists. At the same time, this novel is different from the yandere novels I have read before. It has its own characteristics. I hope you can continue to work hard and give them a good ending [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

It seems that there are 40 chapters. So far, this is a really touching book. I always put myself in the third person when reading books, but I can't help but empathize with the characters when reading this book. When I see that the heroine has new friends, I see that the heroine's world is getting further away from the hero, and I see that the hero is gradually no longer able to intervene in the relationship between the heroine and Jacky. When I saw the male protagonist feeling that the female protagonist no longer needed to rely on him, I, a non-smoker, couldn't help but sigh, "It's a pity that neither the male protagonist nor I smoke." It made me understand the role of cigarettes for the first time. For the first time, I felt the parents' feelings about their children getting further and further away from me. It was really an indescribable sigh! Thank you author, this is a good book so far and I have benefited a lot from it.

It's very bland and has the feel of daily life. I just wish there were more emotional changes. It's always been rational analysis and so on. Although it makes the characters fuller, it's a bit boring after watching too much. The above is only my personal understanding

The fresh yet profound writing style, the delicate psychological description, the familiar mathematical knowledge, and the scientific romance filled between the lines all made me addicted to it. In short, I recommend this book to anyone who wants to calm down and experience a period of time [Like]

This book is the best one I have read on this platform. The logic is clear, the story line is also very good, the writing is good, the plot is also very good, and there are many exchanges between the male and female protagonists. It is very interesting and there are many small truths. This book is very good to read slowly and calmly.

A, the writing is good and very delicate. It's not the usual formulaic yandere novel, but it's still more developed than yandere. It feels a bit AI-like in some places. It's mostly the absolutely rational and data-laden words that give me a sense of AI, but it doesn't have a big impact. The writing style feels very light and more everyday. It's not very sweet at the moment, it's a feeling of family affection (of course the heroine is only in junior high school, so if this makes the hero fall in love, I'd recommend it directly). But even though it's very daily, it's still readable. If you've seen enough conflicts, come back and read this book. It's a good choice. In addition, regarding the high proportion of male supporting characters in the early stage, maybe someone needs to avoid lightning? Although I don't think this is a big problem. After all, the heroine is of this age and age difference, so it is necessary to have some friends with whom she can talk (but maybe I am projecting my loneliness and fear of loneliness, so it doesn't have a big impact on me). Moreover, dozens of chapters about the male protagonist's country were downplayed, allowing the heroine to clarify her feelings for the hero.

The writing style is by far the most attractive point of your book, author, but you need to know what the readers who click in want to see. It is not an overly literary description. Although the writing style is indeed very good (but check the context more, using AI should be better than without AI). Add appropriate plot points or enhance the interaction between the male and female protagonists, and reduce unnecessary character descriptions. This is Tomato. You have to change your work according to the user.

It's very depressing, not ordinary depressing. In the latest dozens of chapters, I just feel extremely depressed. The heroine gives me the feeling that she may commit suicide at any time. Does it have to be suppressed for so long?

This is the first time I have reviewed a book in the past six months. For better or worse, I haven't reviewed a book in half a year. This is a good book. Generally a very sincere book, The text is clean, There is no trace of AI either. There is nothing else to say.

The water flows slowly, this kind of cultivation is the most beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The narrative technique is skillful and natural, which is a hundred times better than those who will marry the protagonist if they are given a piece of bread. The feelings only come after being together for a long time. The changes in the relationship in this book are amazing, but it is a pity that it is not finished yet. Come on, author

The author has a wide range of knowledge, I don't know if it is AI, but knowing this already shows that the knowledge is very wide, step by step, I feel that the problem is to describe it more from the female protagonist's perspective, and the male protagonist's psychological activities can also be added. The plot does not need to be too fast, and the flow is not to be first, but to keep talking, don't stop updating, keep writing, it will be a good book.

It's very interesting. The author's writing style is good and the writing is comfortable. The portrayal of the male and female protagonists is also very three-dimensional. There is no yandere element in the early part of the fifty-chapter novel. It should be a bit later. Liangcao is worth reading.

Very good work, love it [sending my heart]

The rating of this book may not be very high, and the number of people who like to read this book may be very small, because it is very plain, just like a drop of water penetrating a stone. Who said that two stones with thorns will not grind each other down. I like it very much and hope that the author can continue to keep it up and give the two stones a good ending.