Practicing with Two People Is the Fastest

Female author, at the beginning, she got framed, misunderstood, isolated and helpless, lost initiative, and got all the debuffs.

The audience for this harem stallion theme may not be that large, but for book lovers who like this theme, it is really a very good book worth reading. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good, and there are no poisonous points throughout, which is very rare in Tomato. This book has just been opened, and the rating may be a bit low, but it is much better than many high-scoring Tomato books. I am also an old bookworm, and I really recommend it. I hope everyone will give the author more motivation to not let him be a eunuch! Come on, the author!

Not as good as the previous book, this subject matter is not suitable for current Internet articles, especially the Tomato rhythm. Overall, it still has the tone of a regret novel and a revenge novel, but judging from this way of writing, the exciting time point of revenge will have to wait until the Year of the Monkey and the Horse. Then the protagonist will always be in the stage of being aggrieved and controlled, and there will be very little excitement or the writing will be unpleasant. The point of revenge in the last book is actually very fast. The protagonist has the ability to take revenge. There are very few scenes where the protagonist is defeated, so it is very enjoyable. However, the copy with Little Sword Immortal is still well written, with a flavor of Spring and Autumn Period. Fewer and fewer people are writing this type of story-telling fairy tales about immortality. The author still has potential. I would like to give him four stars for encouragement.

With the excellent works of the previous one, this one shouldn't be any worse. I hope this one will be more enjoyable than the previous one [laughs][laughs]. I'll give you the good reviews first. It's an old-style royal uncle with multiple female protagonists, similar to the previous book's routine, and the familiar training is still there. It's frustrating in the early stage and exciting in the later stage. Some parts of the plot are quite irritating, and the male protagonist is misunderstood and has no chance to explain. Later, when he enters the Hehuan Sect, it is really the dragon's hometown [face covering] perfectly adapts to the identity of the Holy Son of the Hehuan Sect.

I hope to receive them all, and I can train them hard, but I don't want to be too good at it [please ask for updates]. Moreover, I feel that the pace is still too slow now, and it's not exciting enough. The author can speed up the pace and make it more enjoyable [love]

Lao Deng, I believe you, I will give you five stars first

Yes, it seems that the author has found his own way of writing. Except for some logical flaws in the plot, there are no major flaws in this book. However, this book is not mainly about cultivating immortals, so these flaws are not important. Keep writing, this book can be followed.

The author made a mistake. This book is a fantasy worldview, but it does not have an original realm system or use some fantasy realm systems. Instead, it uses the realm divisions in the fairy tales, such as refining Qi and building foundations. I don't know if any readers will mind. But it shouldn't matter. This book is not about traditional combat, but more about bloody battles to the end.

It's very frustrating at the beginning, but it's this frustration that makes the protagonist "blacken" from an innocent boy to a scumbag who plays with people's hearts. I also read the author's last book. I originally thought it would be easier to kill him, but it was really refreshing to see the originally unruly heroine wagging her tail and begging for mercy in the back. After the hero suffered a loss in the front, she really turned into a dog. I prefer the background of cultivating immortals to the city, and I look forward to the author's performance.

Tying with Taishang in one breath! The pace is fast, the plot is brain-burning, the harem is neither awkward nor clumsy, the beauties each have their own character but not the tool, the game is constantly reversing, the slaps in the face are intensive and not procrastinating, the more you watch, the more addictive it becomes, a must-see if you stay up late, a five-star Amway!

In fact, in my mind, as long as the sentences are coherent, the subject matter is novel, and the plot can keep up, it can be considered a good work in today's Internet literary world. This novel's subject matter is very novel and evil, and the article is not obtrusive. It is considered a masterpiece 🍅 When I read the latest chapter, the emotional descriptions are more delicate. I feel that the only drawback is the backstabbing. Although it is described in the article, it still feels a bit strange.

It's a pity that the lawyer finished it in a hurry. I hope I can write more about it, and it's a fantasy type, which attracts me even more. It's a good read and I love it [Adoration]

Our prison leaf still starts with a collapse of heaven, still has no choice but to be a scumbag, and I still give 5-star praise [please take a closer look]

I read a section and found that the author's writing is really good and the plot advances smoothly. This already beats most of Tomato's novels. This is the harem that this novel opens, and eh. . The male protagonist is a villain and has a relatively low moral bottom line. Those who care about these points should not read [face covering] I read another paragraph, and it's a common problem in harem novels that the female characters all become tools. The more I read, the less interesting it becomes.

The Little Sword Immortal part was so enjoyable to watch. Although the later part is good, it is far less good than that part. Moreover, I feel that the current male protagonist has become somewhat dependent on the Seven Emotions and Six Desires Gu, and he feels like he is being controlled. I personally hope that the male protagonist will slow down after Nascent Soul, his passions will return to his own control, and he will not be influenced by the Gu. Don't have an unstable foundation and be backlashed by the Gu, then it will be cool.

Very good, the author is very knowledgeable. In particular, the setting of Hehuan Kung Fu and Tai Shang Wang Qing Kung Fu are very good, classical cultivation of immortality. The only bad thing is that if the protagonist keeps everyone toyed with from beginning to end, he will be inferior. This kind of role setting is more suitable for the second male lead and the second female lead.

Well-deserved masterpiece

If you are unhappy, please wait. If you are feeling aggrieved, you are really aggrieved. Retract the review, the author is so good! Even the frustration and sudden changes in the first few chapters may be detrimental to the author's book performance, so they can be considered as selected [Sparrow Food Goddess] [Sparrow Food Goddess]

Come on, big brother who writes royal texts✊

I have written a real record of a fake scumbag, and I will study it chapter by chapter [smile][grievance][smile]

After reading 20 chapters, the emotions are delicate and give people the heart-wrenching feeling of reading a romance novel. I suspect that the author is probably a fan of female novels, because I feel that he has a good grasp of how to create the heart-wrenching feeling in romance novels.

It's really well written. I was a bit stumped for a few chapters at the beginning, but it was quite enjoyable at the end. It's not a mindless read. The IQs of the protagonist and supporting characters are online.

This is the most beautiful Liu Bei I have ever seen [crying]

Hee hee, the education, training and training are here again.

Purple smoke is really good

Old readers don't need to say more [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The writing is very good, I like Little Sword Fairy [Shy]

Divine book, no doubt

Still a cool article Still the emperor's uncle I didn't see the back, so I probably wouldn't have used it once or twice before throwing it away. If I had used it once or twice, at least I would have locked the car and no one would be able to use it🥵

This introduction and promotion was written before like a female video. After retreating from the clan, he was pure Liu Bei