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The current progress is 69 chapters. I just finished the first volume. I think I must give it a good review and support.
First of all, this book is indeed very slow-burning. So far, the slow-burning has not seen the farming and hegemony aspects. It is more like a classic Western fantasy adventure. There is no sky drop panel and system adding points. There are hooks but it is not obvious. It can be said that escaping from the dungeon in the first act can persuade 80% of the brothers to quit. After all, there are really very few slow-burning tomatoes, and they are easy to explode.
There are not too many bugs and loopholes. I can only say that the author just can't deal with women. [Thinking] I can clearly feel the general plot of the next, but the preparation is insufficient. The protagonist group is a bit like Xiaoqiang who can't be killed. Although I don't like to use swords, I think this kind of development will be more delicious if one or two of them are released.
I don't have much to complain about in the plot, but it repeatedly jumps between life and death. I can only say that it's a bit unreasonable in a world with low magic and low martial arts. I look forward to the follow-up plot.
The current progress is 69 chapters. I just finished the first volume. I think I must give it a good review and support. First of all, this book is indeed very slow-burning. So far, the slow-burning has not seen the farming and hegemony aspects. It is more like a classic Western fantasy adventure. There is no sky drop panel and system adding points. There are hooks but it is not obvious. It can be said that escaping from the dungeon in the first act can persuade 80% of the brothers to quit. After all, there are really very few slow-burning tomatoes, and they are easy to explode. There are not too many bugs and loopholes. I can only say that the author just can't deal with women. [Thinking] I can clearly feel the general plot of the next, but the preparation is insufficient. The protagonist group is a bit like Xiaoqiang who can't be killed. Although I don't like to use swords, I think this kind of development will be more delicious if one or two of them are released. I don't have much to complain about in the plot, but it repeatedly jumps between life and death. I can only say that it's a bit unreasonable in a world with low magic and low martial arts. I look forward to the follow-up plot.