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The double heroine refers to the romance aspect, but other than that it's pretty good. The early part is a very heart-warming story, and the love between the protagonist and the bird, Sunday, and mother is well described. Later, I saw the protagonist and the bird kissing each other and then running away.

This book can be rated four stars for readability among all the books I have read (maybe I am more strict), but since this is still a new book, I will give it a five-star rating. The following reasons for four stars contain spoilers, so read with caution. This book participates in the growth of Robin and Sunday as the original heroine. It creates the original plot line of the Birds brothers and sisters before they grow up (before arriving at Pinoconi). It also creates a more complete character of the heroine Star Weaver, such as why she chose to embark on her destiny, and why she chose to embark on her current destiny. There is also a growth line for the heroine, instead of just being stuck with the bird brothers and sisters. These plots make me think this book deserves a five-star rating. However, the flaws are equally serious, which is why I only gave it a four-star rating in the end. In the writing, the author seems to have forgotten the identity of the heroine as a junior high school student given in the first chapter. When describing it, it gave me the feeling that the heroine is mostly in junior high school. For example, it is understandable that the author wants to express the pain of the heroine's delay in reuniting with the bird brothers and sisters because of hunting, but the writing only reflects the heroine's own immature thinking (that is, only the level of a junior high school child), so the heroine's identity in the writing is seriously separated from the set identity. Additionally, there is an error in the description of the Battle of Square Pot, the Third War of Plenty. The Battle of Fang Hu takes place after the Yue Yue Rebellion. At this time, Jingliu has fallen into the demonic body. Hu Lei was captured by Jingliu when he was still in Luofu Jianshou, and he has been imprisoned in Youqing Prison ever since. Therefore, the description of leader Hu Lei in the article is wrong. Of course, there is also a slight problem with Fu Xuan, the soothsayer of the Jade Palace described here. Fu Xuan has already left Luofu at this time. However, this novel is still considered a masterpiece and I look forward to the author's continued updates. (Updated to Chapter 43 on March 19, 2026)

So pretty. There was no ooc at all, and it showed me that my aunt was smiling. Keep rolling around in bed. It's so beautiful. Why are there such beautiful books? So gentle. It is recommended to take a look. Not much more to say, I'm going to continue chasing. So pretty, wow wow. I love robins and I love Sunday. I love Aunt Lark.

The author writes very well, why doesn't anyone read it?

The author wrote so well that I could see me twitching on the bed with my aunt's smile on my face. The robin is so cute~The robin is so cute~[Blow a kiss]

The writing is very good and will automatically bring readers into the mood. I didn't read the beginning and skipped directly to the middle part, which had no impact at all. The reason why no one read it is probably because of the title of the book or something. (Because I didn't click in because of the title of the book)

This is the best book about Beng Tie that I have read so far👍. The writing is very good, and the content of life and battle is just right. I just hope it won't stop updating. Such an explosive update... Uh... Ah... Is a bit unstable. In short, the author must not stop updating!

To be honest, when I saw the protagonist fighting against a group of industry creations in the early stage, I already cried. Then there was a section where the grandfather and his godfather were training him with a gun. I was introduced to the protagonist. To be honest, I was really fascinated by it. I have never seen the author write so well. I cried for the first time. Damn it. To be honest, I highly recommend this book.

It's a very good book, with a lot of updated words, and the content is quite interesting. After reading it for so long, it will become popular sooner or later [Thinking] (I also ran away from Vera of Genshin Impact to watch Iron Weaver's Weaver Star) By the way, can the author come back and correct some inappropriate wording? Well, for Zhixing or Weaver Star?

It's so beautiful, and the writing is very touching. I stayed up late for two days to catch up on the latest chapter. The author's other books are also very good! ! ! The author must keep writing! ! ! ! It's rare to find a novel in Tomato that is so appealing to me! ! ! ! ! I will die if I stop updating! ! !

(Author, if I give you a five-star review, can you come back again~) It's my second time reading it now, and I suddenly remembered that I haven't given a book review yet. How do you feel after reading it? I don't know. Anyway, I think it's a great book. I'll read it, love it, and reward myself by reading it again ´͈ ᵕ `͈

It's a good read, a love story about Robin. The growth and transformation of the protagonist Zhixing or the dialogue with the system Baihe are also very interesting. The author is also awesome and adds updates every day for no reason. It's so pampering [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I read novels just to relax, and this is perfect for me. First follow-up review: A very nice book, don't exhaust such a good author to death (I vaguely remember updating on 11, 12 and 13 days in a row) Second follow-up review: Look at the reading time

The great author adds updates whenever she has time, I love her so much [Adore][Adore][Adore]

The writing is very warm, and the warmth flows into my heart. The psychological transformation of the protagonist during his growth process is also deeply affecting.

The plot is okay, and I haven't seen such a warm and heartwarming description in a long time. It's just that the AI ​​smell is a bit strong in some places.

4 Stars are for the little bird brothers and sisters

Super delicious^•͈༝•^ฅ

Looks good! ! ! ! Highly recommended!

A good book written by a good author [crying]

It feels good, just don't stop updating @Great Miss Fox

Teacher, you must write to the ending. I like this book [sending my heart] The protagonist is so handsome.

8 Chapters a day! ! ! ! Foster father ah ah ah ah! ! !

It's very interesting, the main character is a magic pill, but the words are a little short

The emotional line is very well written.

Look! The efficiency of this update is... Great! Needless to say But why are the ratings so low? Oh, there are only a hundred people, that's fine

Very good, it looks so good, it smells so good. It's the first time I've been so crazy about updating. The author worked really hard and it's so fun to read it😋😋😋😋😋😋

Author, you wrote Chapter 30 so well, I loved reading it so much. This is the first time I've seen Scott's remark that he can still be saved. I really like it. Most people still regard Scott as a person having fun.

Super well written! ! ! The protagonist has his own charisma

Are the heroines Huang Quan and Zhi Xing?