(The rating would have been lower if it had just come out♥)
[Azur Lane] [Taobao. Com Member][Harem][Soul Wear][Daily][Sweet]
Why did they know I was possessed as soon as they came up? !
That's not the case in Azur Lane!
As soon as I became possessed, I was called out on the spot by the group:
His walking posture was wrong, his mantra was wrong, and even his breathing rhythm was wrong.
How long can the commander keep pretending?
"They became even more excited after their identities were revealed."
"Possession is not the problem, being caught is."
"Large-scale social death scene in Hong Kong"
Reader comments
The writing is too warm, so warm that it gave me a faint feeling of death.
Different from many Kan Niang stories I have seen before, there is no deliberately pretended madness, nor is there the purpose of simply eating peaches, it is more like a kind of gentleness.
I really like this kind of writing that is both melancholy and warm. Please write more.
I feel that this kind of soft writing will make the corpse spots lighter. There is no Shura field, no fighting, and you can live your daily life like every day. It is very warm, very happy, and it feels good...
Shura Field really makes me feel aesthetic fatigue [face covering]
Brief review: The performance is not stable, but overall it is a very high-level and distinctive book.
Peaceful, delicate, and warm, these three words can basically sum up the reading experience of this book. This book completely breaks away from the inherent template of the general No-Made Point Ship B fan fiction, and writes the concept of "love". After reading it, you will really feel the body warm.
At present, there are only two small problems that I feel have shortcomings. One is that sometimes the writing is confusing, such as the part about Kirshaji; the other is that the paragraphs are too random🧐. Personally, I feel that sometimes one sentence after another appears in succession, which is not good for people.
Please give us your feedback. If you have any ship girls you want to see, you can make a wish in the comments. You can also give feedback if you have any toxic points. Beginner authors can learn a lot.
So familiar, I seem to have seen similar ones somewhere, possessing Haman and little Gaga.
The content is very good, and the writing style is also very warm. The disadvantage is the excessive use of AI, but the advantage is that it updates quickly. I suggest the author not to rush, use less AI, and polish the article more carefully, otherwise the AI taste will be too strong.
Nuan Nuan's book contrasts the realistic desolate wasteland with the warm home port area, giving people an immersive sense of warmth. The key is that this book is written in the first person, which greatly enhances the sense of experience. It must be full marks!
It's very good. The flaws are not hidden. Although it looks a bit weird in the first person, this shortcoming is not enough to deduct stars, so it is five stars. And this may not be a shortcoming. It is just uncomfortable for me.
Seriously, first person takes a while to get used to. Most of the Bilan novels were written by Shura Field and I was tired. After adapting to the style of this book, I became really addicted and the wrinkles in my brain were smoothed out [crying]
Good-looking and interesting, rarely seen in Bilanwen
It's quiet, so refreshing, like being in hot Africa, being whipped crazily by Huqin's sun god with a fiery whip. But when you feel uncomfortable all over and can't bear it anymore, all the pain on your body will be healed, and then you will be sent to a place full of spring breeze to cool down. It's like all the cells in the body are burning, and wisps of spring breeze pass through the gaps of all the cells in the body, ah~
I've only seen a few dozen of them so far, and they feel pretty good. But I want to ask, although the subject of possession is interesting, but you can't possess her forever, right? Is it to help her? (Just kidding, don't take it seriously) Will you consider letting the protagonist go there in the future?
It's not bad. There's nothing that makes me feel uncomfortable (I almost stopped reading when I saw it was a first-person description [facepalm]) Well, I'll just write this much. After all, I'm not very good at writing this kind of thing.
This book is very good. The melancholy of being alone is also warmed by the daily life in another world. Sometimes it is like wearing your eyes. It is very suitable for reading and watching in a slightly quiet situation. Of course I am listening to the book [laughing]
I lost track of time while reading, and the corpse spots have faded. I have only come across the game but never played it, but I can see the essence and future of the game from here. Your detailed description of each ship girl's daily life aroused my curiosity, making me want to see them in the original novel.
By the way, does the author have an account on Bilibili? I remember browsing the video and saw an up who also recommended this novel, saying that he wrote it himself [Thinking]
I just read a few chapters and it feels good. At least I changed the mixed toilet RCB to pure B, otherwise I will start a scolding war again. After all, the relationship between the three families is not good...
[Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
It was warm, and it felt like I had become a confused zombie. I was given a potion of weakness and then ate a golden apple. The first words I heard after I woke up were a gentle "Are you okay?"
😊😊😊
I also write a book like this☺️
Everything is good, but the AI feels too heavy
The author's writing is very good, relaxing and warm, and the pictures are also very good.
Although AI smells bad, it rarely feels good
Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I've read more than half of it. I really like this kind of novel and this kind of author. Reading a novel is like a heart-to-heart conversation, a collision of souls, like seeing the author's thoughts. I hope there are more authors like you.
It feels like being killed by a neutron
It's okay, but the writing style makes me a little tired for some reason.
I've read ten chapters. It's really good. The writing is very detailed and the daily life is good. It gives me a warm feeling like a corpse. I also want to travel through the port area [crying]
Humph, it's tied. The author wrote it very well. Is it the time travel between two worlds, the story of the commander being cured by the ship girl, or the last fantasy of a lonely mental patient in the wasteland [please taste it carefully]
Even though I have AI, the writing is pretty good and sweet.
It's a good article, and it's warm, but the DS teacher's taste is a bit strong, and the logic seems a bit unclear. If it were me, and the living environment was so bad, I would take the initiative to find TB, Kuroumi, Shabai, Ming, Yubari and others to help me.
Not bad, quite healing
It's not easy. We are finally almost past the port area.
After chasing the protagonist to the port area, will it become a classic daily routine? Are you going to continue changing your body?
I like it😍, it's a bit of a stream of consciousness, it feels so good to be on the radio
The writing is too warm, so warm that it gave me a faint feeling of death. Different from many Kan Niang stories I have seen before, there is no deliberately pretended madness, nor is there the purpose of simply eating peaches, it is more like a kind of gentleness. I really like this kind of writing that is both melancholy and warm. Please write more.
I feel that this kind of soft writing will make the corpse spots lighter. There is no Shura field, no fighting, and you can live your daily life like every day. It is very warm, very happy, and it feels good... Shura Field really makes me feel aesthetic fatigue [face covering]
Brief review: The performance is not stable, but overall it is a very high-level and distinctive book. Peaceful, delicate, and warm, these three words can basically sum up the reading experience of this book. This book completely breaks away from the inherent template of the general No-Made Point Ship B fan fiction, and writes the concept of "love". After reading it, you will really feel the body warm. At present, there are only two small problems that I feel have shortcomings. One is that sometimes the writing is confusing, such as the part about Kirshaji; the other is that the paragraphs are too random🧐. Personally, I feel that sometimes one sentence after another appears in succession, which is not good for people.
Please give us your feedback. If you have any ship girls you want to see, you can make a wish in the comments. You can also give feedback if you have any toxic points. Beginner authors can learn a lot.
So familiar, I seem to have seen similar ones somewhere, possessing Haman and little Gaga.
The content is very good, and the writing style is also very warm. The disadvantage is the excessive use of AI, but the advantage is that it updates quickly. I suggest the author not to rush, use less AI, and polish the article more carefully, otherwise the AI taste will be too strong.
Nuan Nuan's book contrasts the realistic desolate wasteland with the warm home port area, giving people an immersive sense of warmth. The key is that this book is written in the first person, which greatly enhances the sense of experience. It must be full marks!
It's very good. The flaws are not hidden. Although it looks a bit weird in the first person, this shortcoming is not enough to deduct stars, so it is five stars. And this may not be a shortcoming. It is just uncomfortable for me.
Seriously, first person takes a while to get used to. Most of the Bilan novels were written by Shura Field and I was tired. After adapting to the style of this book, I became really addicted and the wrinkles in my brain were smoothed out [crying]
Good-looking and interesting, rarely seen in Bilanwen
It's quiet, so refreshing, like being in hot Africa, being whipped crazily by Huqin's sun god with a fiery whip. But when you feel uncomfortable all over and can't bear it anymore, all the pain on your body will be healed, and then you will be sent to a place full of spring breeze to cool down. It's like all the cells in the body are burning, and wisps of spring breeze pass through the gaps of all the cells in the body, ah~
I've only seen a few dozen of them so far, and they feel pretty good. But I want to ask, although the subject of possession is interesting, but you can't possess her forever, right? Is it to help her? (Just kidding, don't take it seriously) Will you consider letting the protagonist go there in the future? It's not bad. There's nothing that makes me feel uncomfortable (I almost stopped reading when I saw it was a first-person description [facepalm]) Well, I'll just write this much. After all, I'm not very good at writing this kind of thing.
This book is very good. The melancholy of being alone is also warmed by the daily life in another world. Sometimes it is like wearing your eyes. It is very suitable for reading and watching in a slightly quiet situation. Of course I am listening to the book [laughing]
I lost track of time while reading, and the corpse spots have faded. I have only come across the game but never played it, but I can see the essence and future of the game from here. Your detailed description of each ship girl's daily life aroused my curiosity, making me want to see them in the original novel.
By the way, does the author have an account on Bilibili? I remember browsing the video and saw an up who also recommended this novel, saying that he wrote it himself [Thinking] I just read a few chapters and it feels good. At least I changed the mixed toilet RCB to pure B, otherwise I will start a scolding war again. After all, the relationship between the three families is not good... [Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
It was warm, and it felt like I had become a confused zombie. I was given a potion of weakness and then ate a golden apple. The first words I heard after I woke up were a gentle "Are you okay?" 😊😊😊 I also write a book like this☺️
Everything is good, but the AI feels too heavy
The author's writing is very good, relaxing and warm, and the pictures are also very good.
Although AI smells bad, it rarely feels good
Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I've read more than half of it. I really like this kind of novel and this kind of author. Reading a novel is like a heart-to-heart conversation, a collision of souls, like seeing the author's thoughts. I hope there are more authors like you.
It feels like being killed by a neutron
It's okay, but the writing style makes me a little tired for some reason.
I've read ten chapters. It's really good. The writing is very detailed and the daily life is good. It gives me a warm feeling like a corpse. I also want to travel through the port area [crying] Humph, it's tied. The author wrote it very well. Is it the time travel between two worlds, the story of the commander being cured by the ship girl, or the last fantasy of a lonely mental patient in the wasteland [please taste it carefully]
Even though I have AI, the writing is pretty good and sweet.
It's a good article, and it's warm, but the DS teacher's taste is a bit strong, and the logic seems a bit unclear. If it were me, and the living environment was so bad, I would take the initiative to find TB, Kuroumi, Shabai, Ming, Yubari and others to help me.
Not bad, quite healing
It's not easy. We are finally almost past the port area.
After chasing the protagonist to the port area, will it become a classic daily routine? Are you going to continue changing your body?
I like it😍, it's a bit of a stream of consciousness, it feels so good to be on the radio
What an elegant writing style, a rare masterpiece