Delta: I Will Build Ashara!

World view structure ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I have never played the game Delta, but the author's description makes it feel like a game, and it seems relatively easy to understand. Full marks! Story logic ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ The structure is clear, without too many miscellaneous narratives, and it is simple and easy to understand. Although it is relatively white, the story structure is full marks! Writing and narration ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ The story progresses quickly, there is a lot of content in a single chapter, it is not sloppy, and the overall rhythm is well controlled. Full marks! Progress and fun ⭐⭐⭐⭐ The protagonist upgrades quite quickly, and the foundation of the invincible style is beginning to emerge. However, there are few scenes of showing off in front of others. This may be due to the original game. I give it 4 points here. Or stacked armor I haven't played this game much. My boyfriend took me to play it a few times when it first came out. I could only pick up rubbish on the map in the first chapter, and I couldn't even figure out how to shoot or use the camera. But the author's popularization is very good. Although I have only heard of the characters Saeed, Lace, and Crow, the characters I saw in the book are quite rich. I have nothing to complain about other than the update being a bit slow. [Shy][shy][shy]

Not bad, pure cool writing. It's one of the better ones in Delta. Although it doesn't have any highlights, fortunately it doesn't have a slap-in-the-face plot, and the protagonist is also brave, resourceful, and decisive in killing. The popularity is a bit low, but that doesn't hinder the writing. It's really okay.

Thank you all for your support. If you have any bad points, please point them out in time. The author will try his best to correct them!

Come on, come on, come on

It can be said that Delta is quite good.

It's a pure and refreshing article. Looking at the name, I thought Shen Lan was the protagonist. ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱

Beautiful, five stars for you