Jiejiao and Conferred God, I Am Really a White Lotus Flower

Yes, although it looks good, there are some problems. The first one is from the local area, not from time travel, and there are no messy things, such as long legs, etc. The second one should be his eldest brother. What is the name of the Daoist fellow in Shangqing? Did he call his brother that way? Maybe I also saw it wrong. Anyway, it was like this at the time. The third one is obviously the protagonist. I went to meet the master uncle, but the next second he returned to the teacher or where he was. He was a little confused. The fourth one has this punishment, but this one can be a little more. For example, other Jifa teams and the elders and other sects. If they need something, they can put it on the task. The other disciples below can find it. This is like the Du'e Zhenren sect. You can In this way, the fifth person who takes the initiative to serve in heaven does not need to have his soul in the list of gods, and it is beneficial for real people to go to heaven. The sixth person has apprentices, which is very good, but lacks a mount. I read other novels about capable young people who did not see when to accept apprentices and did not write about them, or write about middle-aged people, which is very good. When the time comes, there will be apprentices and disciples called masters, etc. The seventh one can write more about other people, such as Zhenren Du'e, his master, so that it is not single. The eighth one's combat power is not invincible. For example, Qi training is the most popular nowadays. For example, the result of 100 cards has reached the Nascent Soul stage. In this way, it can be completed in two or three hundred chapters at most, so there is no need to just practice, you can make friends and apprentices, etc. Or you can accept mortal disciples, etc. You can build the middle gate in other places, and then have the protagonist of the ancestor, the protagonist's master Tongtian, etc. That's it for the time being. There is nothing else, just those two. Personal opinions and suggestions

This novel with a prehistoric theme is very interesting. It's really great that the main character is actually Bai Lian, and he's a native, not a time traveler, and he doesn't have a system. Also, I think the author has slowly brought the already stigmatized word into a positive light through the main character. The protagonist's behavior is really a good person in this prehistoric environment, but his expressive ability is not good. Anyway, this novel is very interesting. Everyone is welcome to read it.

The more I read this novel, the more interesting it becomes. I haven't seen such a great novel in a long time.

Not bad, a little less

The author can update 800 chapters a day!

There are sentient beings and everyone is making progress

Mother-in-law, it hurts so much. My mother-in-law peeked at your mother-in-law for dozens of kilometers.

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It's quite good. It's a unique book. The setting about Bai Lian is very interesting. The arrangement of the Six Saints is also very good.

It looks good, I give it five stars, cheers for the author

The writing is very good. I have put in a lot of hard work. [Sending my heart to you]