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I can only say that the logic of this book is better than that of many books. At least it is not so embarrassing to read. Come on, author! After thinking about it for a while, I decided to change my rating. I haven't read it for a long time. I took a look at the comment section but didn't want to read it anymore. The rating is not as good as the Star Rail Salvation next door. Although the updates next door are a bit slow, I can barely read it.

It's nice to watch, and it doesn't look awkward. I just don't know why I feel a little embarrassed when I see the people in the Paradise in the front. I guess it's because the protagonist sacrifices himself in the end, and then the people in the Paradise behind miss him. I've seen too many plots like this. I personally hope that the author will work harder, and I also hope to see the story of pre-civilizations running out of the solar system. [Like][Like]

It seems to be okay so far. It should have multiple female protagonists and the characters are quite restored. However, scientists such as Mebius and Mr. Big V should not only pay attention to future intelligence. Aren't they curious about the system and rewards mentioned by the protagonist? And even if they know this, they probably won't completely believe it at the beginning and go back to verify it with their own methods. In short, there are some small flaws in the plot, which are not reasonable enough, but overall there are no major problems. The subject matter can keep me interested enough to continue watching; and don't stop updating [angry] [laughing] Alas, actually I think that as long as it is the real world, there is no such thing as settings, and it cannot be changed by games. A person's world view is related to the environment in which he grew up. I don't believe that Ellie will not like someone and will not understand (male and female). It's just that in the original work, she has not met someone she thinks is special and does not want to develop in the past. Alas, I ran away [sad]

Listen to my heartfelt opinion, there are very few Honkai Impact fans who write about this kind of topic. I can only say that the author should give it a big boost. I hope it can continue.

A true and objective book with multi-dimensional description, clear structure and substantial content. Comments can help more book friends

Emm, the protagonist's inner state is comparable to the inner state of an active volcano. Although his heart is flowing, he is a bit too active in his heart [smiles]

Very good, very good. But I really look forward to the protagonist discovering Alicia's love for him. It must be wonderful. But depending on the knife you buried, I think it would be more exciting when the protagonist dies in front of them. Author, I'm going to criticize you in the review. You gave the protagonist so many female protagonists, and then you, the protagonist's emotional intelligence is 0. Why? Do you want to say a sentence at the end that the protagonist lives happily with them and leads a shy and shy life? No, a normal human being should be able to detect it, right? If a girl blushes for the first time, can you explain it as an illusion that she falls in love with me? What happens next? Velvet, Mebius, (why didn't Ellie please see my post), where are they? Can't the protagonist see their behavior? Later, through Ellie, she spoke and said that the protagonist cares about all mankind but cannot fall in love with one person. What, I didn't mention it earlier, but there are many women around the protagonist and they say, let's set it up, why, later the girl says I like you, the protagonist says, how can you like me or I won't fall in love with you in the game? Do you want the protagonist to be a eunuch? Then I think you might as well let the protagonist be a green turtle, and let Weiwei and others have someone who loves them. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't force so many girls around the protagonist. Please don't let the protagonist hang them up, okay? Why I say so much is because, to be honest, when I was about to have the idea of ​​jumping off a building, it was the plot of Honkai Impact III that pulled me off the rooftop. I love this game, and I love every character in it even more. I hope that in another world they will have a savior to save them. Those who have feelings for the savior, I hope their feelings will be reciprocated. The so-called savior is not a person who only talks but does not do anything. I hope that the savior can save the world and respond to them at the same time. I was just too anxious about the emotional scenes and didn't want to see their feelings unresponsive. I just thought the content was good, but I was too anxious (only my personal opinion, please don't criticize me, please forgive me). I hope the author will respond to their feelings as soon as possible. It doesn't work, it doesn't work anymore, the rating has been changed back. You can watch the above content seriously, or you can watch it for fun. It's just that I was in a bad mood at the time, and I don't know why I wrote such a long list.

So far so good It suits my taste. I like Voice Diary and Beng San. The plot development is quite satisfactory and there are no surprises. It's not good. I hope there won't be any more eunuchs in the future. Good luck to the author.

After reading it, it's quite good compared to the other two stories about him. At least the main character's inner thoughts don't look like a loser. Many of the heart-felt stories I read like to make the protagonist's inner thoughts sound like that of a loser who has never seen a woman. It's okay for you to twist it occasionally. After all, no one can be unresponsive to beauty, but you keep twisting it from beginning to end. Thinking about the plot, you keep twisting the other person, and you want to do this and that. It's a mess. Heap, when you hear it, you will feel that this protagonist is like a woman who has never seen a woman before. He is the type of wretched and fat otaku. This kind of thing makes people feel very alienated [face covering]. Also, after more than 80 episodes, the relationship has not progressed, and there is not even an ambiguous relationship between the two parties. If you want to watch it or spread sweetness, you have to start at least 100 episodes. If you want to watch Stallion Liu Bei at that time, you can go. When will it be updated to more than 100 episodes?

If you look at it for fun, it's quite interesting. I feel like I'm constantly playing second-tier games and playing with the community. It's very fun, and it fits the stereotype. However, it is too stereotyped, and it loses the heaviness of the characters and the environment brought about by Honkai Impact. It is too stereotyped, or it feels like a second blow to the brain. What you don't care about is nothing, and what you do care about is forget it. The stereotypes of the characters are too heavy, which makes these people look less like Honkai Impact. Even if the names like Alicia and Velvet are replaced by others, if you have a deep understanding of the plot and the characterization, you will always feel that these people are not right. But again, so it's fun to watch, it's still fun to watch

The look and feel is very good, the voice, combat power and character creation are very good. I hope that when the protagonist has 100% power, it will get a good ending. At least it will not directly transform into the ultimate test of civilization and become the end of all tragedies. Come on.

I read it in one go, and I felt very deeply that [The Masterpiece of Bird Food] is a rare masterpiece in my heart. [Flying Kiss] does not have many embarrassing parts in the story, and the character design is also good [cool] In addition, some people say that the protagonist is a eunuch. To put it bluntly, how can we have a serious relationship in a civilized place? What's more, the protagonist is emotionally lacking [smile] If it's too much, you'll say it's a stallion, but if it's not, you'll say it's a eunuch. When it comes to emotional disputes, you'll say it's a wenqing disease [laughs] Why should we look at tomatoes if the requirements are so high? [Pouts] Moreover, the author is not good at writing in-depth communication and the like. If he writes too much, he will easily feel that way and feel uncomfortable. (The protagonist of the extra story and Alicia had a child directly, and did not write anything in detail) Although I don't think so, but I have always been indifferent to this kind of thing, as long as the writing is easy to write and makes people feel comfortable [note] Here I hope that those book friends who read the book reviews first will not run away after seeing the bad reviews. You will know that this book is worth reading by looking at the ratings [Love] I highly recommend this book [Top post] Oh, by the way, this book is very sweet [laughing evilly]

This is the only harem-type Honzo novel I've found that can rival Yu Radon [I'm about to cry] The only thing that can't be compared is that some places are too embarrassing, but it doesn't affect the overall situation.

Hey guys, the main character's name is the same as my friend's name. [Face covering] It looks a little weird to me. [Laughing evilly] But the plot and so on are okay, and the characters and so on are not broken. And the overall plot is okay. This is the first time I've seen this. I think it's pretty good. Come on, author! [Sending Hearts]

It's a good Bengsan fic. It doesn't drag out the plot on purpose, but it's just a little lacking. Although the love line has not been officially launched yet, there should be multiple girls, but not all of them. In the pre-civilization stage, only female heroes without official spouses should be accepted, and those with official spouses should still be official spouses. Mei is also a difficulty. Now it's okay to just write about the former civilized official characters. But when you write about the current civilized Mei Yi, the problem will come. If you don't accept the popular character, there will be a lot of trouble. If you accept Mei with a face, there will be people who will not accept it. And this face is also linked to the Thor sisters next door and Huangquan sister next door. It depends on how the author handles it.

A great story. The length is not too long, the ups and downs are interesting, and the emotional expression is very good. There are some mundane everyday things, and there are also some resonant places. The early stage is more focused on daily life, and the later stage is more emotional. The bad thing may be that there are relatively few descriptions of battle scenes, but the flaws are completely undisguised! Highly recommended to watch! (Personal evaluation) The ending may be a little rushed, but overall I can still give it five stars. It is also highly recommended to watch.

It looks good, and the author's writing style is considered excellent in the entire book circle. When I first read this book, I was all attracted by the title. However, I later found out that the more I read, the more numb I became. Now that I have finished reading the whole book, I feel really uncomfortable. I have to say that the author's writing style is really delicate. When describing the emotional lines between the protagonist, Alicia and Mebius, it really makes people feel that they are haunted after reading it (especially the proposal part). Anyway, I am now in the aftermath of the completion, and the stamina is really great. The only pity is that half a million words is a little too short, but I can guarantee that after reading this book, you will definitely be able to linger on it. There was something I wanted to say, but I couldn't say it in my heart. I could only hope that the ending of this story would be as they wished.

Specifically, it should be around 9.2 Points. This score on Tomato is not low, but due to the limitation that Tomato does not have a score of 0.5, The evaluation can only be rounded up. The overall plot is a bit old-fashioned, but the writing is okay, so there is no double trauma. The plot is suspected of tricking people into getting a knife, and it also involves some of the characters from the second episode. If you don't mind some unreasonable details, you can read it. It can be regarded as a small masterpiece among the heartfelt articles [Thoughts] I personally prefer this kind of sadomasochism, so it has certain bonus points [laughter]

Although there is a section in the middle that gives up a large number of people and thus warns? Or a reminder? The part about the seriousness of the collapse of others is inconsistent with the values ​​​​that I believe people should put first if they are at the top, and it is also inconsistent with the protagonist's initial idea of ​​​​changing the tragic story, but it does not prevent the writing of this book from being okay, and it is indeed more comfortable to read.

It's well written, and it's a good book for those who don't have a female protagonist. After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist only has thoughts about women and doesn't take any action when she comes to her door. I like more or more.

After reading so many fans, this book had a big impact on me. The protagonist and Ellie are completely opposite people, but the same thing between them is that they are both Herrschers and help humans, but one loves humans and the other cannot love. You can read the following paragraph before considering whether to fall into this book. "I don't know what love is?" Alicia's eyes were red, but she bit her lip and looked at him stubbornly. "Then you can learn." "I can teach you." Ellie said. "We can together-" "What together?" "Learn how to love together in the ruins?" "Let's learn how to be a couple together under the shadow of collapse?" "Let's learn how to start a family together in a world where we don't know when we will die?"

I have been following this book from the beginning. Every day when the author updates it, I come here after smelling it [laughing evilly]. I think this book is quite good and the plot is quite interesting. The main thing I want to say is that there are very few new books in Bengsan, and some of them are not good at writing. Don't stop updating it, they can do anything [laughing evilly]. Come on.

I finally found a good book, don't stop updating it, and you'd better not own it🔪[Punch]

Good book. Although the subject matter is a bit old, it is still so good. The performance of this book is very good. At this stage, there are 4,5,000 reminders and more than 10,000 readers. If it can be maintained and optimized, I think it will be rated 9 in the future. Come on author, I am optimistic about you

It's a very good subject. Do you have any articles about the voice of the Three Hearts that you can recommend? [Laughing evilly]

You can hear the classic heartfelt flow and believe it immediately. It seems to be a harem but for now, the main character should be nourishing the stomach. Even if I want to eat, I won't eat until later or in the finale.

The loop is perfectly closed from beginning to end, but I always feel a bit regretful, but I can't put it into words, but to be honest, this knife is quite enjoyable. After all, there is no absolute perfection in the world, and this ending is already considered excellent.

That's great. This is simply the best Sanbenzi fanfic I've seen recently. As a former ship's crew member, I'm still very happy watching this.

I like this book. I think it would be better if I didn't write a love line. It could be a strong one. It could have a single heroine or no heroine. Good luck to the author.

I think it's pretty good, so cheers for the author!