Cloud Dragon Enters Douluo, the Red Banner Flies over Spirit Hall

In the Douluo fan world where cheats are everywhere, it's great that the author can write such a delicate work [Learned] The author has a small problem, that is, the timeline is quite confusing, and he did not write at the end, how old is the male protagonist or how many years has passed? There is also the question of martial soul cultivation, how much soul power do you have? So it feels a bit weird. I believe it would be better if it could be increased. [Learned]

The story line is too messy. It can be said that there is no one. In the first picture, Bibi Dong is about ten years old and in his thirties. Then he meets Gangzi and calls him a master. The six or seven-year-old boy smokes, so I won't talk about it. Dabiao's martial spirit alternates between a tiger and a bear. Then in the previous picture, Gangzi, who is about ten years old, does not agree with the protagonist's concept and gives him a storage belt on the back. Has the master traveled through time?

To be honest, this writing style is still very good, and the protagonist is also well created, but the author is too hard on the settings. He really eats books. He is a glutton. I don't even understand the most basic settings. No matter how good the writing is, it's useless.

The plot is about Douluo, Yunlong travels through Douluo, he is still him, and the white-eyed wolf is still the white-eyed wolf. It is exactly the same as the original work, and so is the plot behind it. Whatever the original work is, that's how the author is Author: It's in your way. Us: You can do it, you can do the series. You should report it as you please

Although the subject matter is quite novel, the timeline and character relationships are too confusing.

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Beautiful and emotionally detailed

From the beginning to the present, typically speaking, the protagonist is a leftist and Tang San is a rightist. The values ​​​​of the protagonist and Tang San are fundamentally opposed. The protagonist is people-oriented and collective-oriented. He advocates overthrowing the privileges of the soul master aristocracy, eradicating exploitation and oppression, and liberating the common people at the bottom. He takes the revolutionary path of mobilizing the masses and subverting the old order. However, Tang San adheres to personal heroism and adheres to the elite order. One is left and the other is right.

Will there be more about the theoretical macro and mobilizing the masses in the subsequent plots? For the time being, this book is still very good, but the playback volume is a bit bleak. I hope the author can continue writing.

There are two of them. Let's change it to Wuhundian's girly flavor.