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Personally I feel pretty good In terms of background design, the original character design refers to the comic version of Douluo Dalu, which looks more comfortable. The content of the world view has been boldly expanded without affecting the main plot, and an additional soul master task has been added to help others (refer to the Adventurer Association, help people work and get money) In terms of story, I mainly follow the main line so far (until Chapter 37, I haven't read the rest yet), is it more about daily life? There is still fighting. It feels like living a normal life. The shortcomings of personal feeling are the integration of the world view of the protagonist Wuhun. The protagonist's martial soul is the breath of the sun taken from Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. Its main functions are to strengthen physical fitness, speed up blood flow, and increase heat control. This kind of thing is considered to be a combination of the original martial soul, but the first soul skill is biased towards slashing, and there is a feeling that it is not integrated well. "My martial spirit is the breath of the sun, not the sword. The sword is just a medium." The master looked at him, and the severity in his eyes slowly turned into appreciation. "Remember what you said. The most powerful place of the original martial soul is always oneself. After I go back, I will develop a new training plan for you based on this point. You need to learn to control that kind of heat more precisely on your fingertips, elbows, and even knees. If you can't make everything a knife, at least you must be able to fight without a knife." This is an explanation of the soul skill. It can be understood that the soul skill can be used in any way, but it cannot be released by oneself, so the knife is used as a medium, which means that in subsequent battles and demonstrations, the knife is used to slash.

It looks pretty good so far, one of the better among Douluo novels. It's not the kind of mindless blackmail, nor the kind of mindless licking. Although it's with a group, it has also written its own characteristics. I hope that the subsequent development will not all be with the group, but some of my own actions.

Good looking [like], no system, no stupidity, lick it. The author still has a good writing style, with his own rhythm, very stable, and without any flaws. It can be said that Douluo in Little Tomato is very well written. The original characters written by the author should have borrowed the shape of the comics. [Laughing and crying] It has a full sense of life and will not make people sick.

Although it is a pity, although there is no ending, and it is not even well written, I will never forget the positive portrayal! I will always wait for the author. One year, two years, ten years, as long as I miss you, I will see you again! Cause and effect will guide me to meet the author again [crying]

The character is a comic version on the inside, and a 3D version on the outside. There is a major mistake in the beginning, which can easily dissuade many people. There are even random passages and chapters in the back, but the author writes really well. Everyone is trying their best to write lifelikely. The outline also looks very strong. It must be very nice to write it with the author's writing style. It's a pity.

Can Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing be the heroines?

Five-star support, I hope the author will come back soon [blowing kiss]

Gone? Is it because the author stopped writing or the platform doesn't allow it? I've seen a few good fics all written and suddenly disappeared?

Very nice, but I wish it had a single heroine

What a shame. So delicately written. The details are also very good.

Not bad👍, quite novel [Like]

A good Douluo fanfic

Very well written, keep up the good work

Not bad, sketch No man, why is it over? I'm still looking forward to it

Books are okay, the characters are from comics, comics would be much better The book is very good. It's much better than those mindless followers who follow the trend and abuse others (some of the protagonists are of appallingly low quality). The characters are basically based on comics, which is normal for comic book people. But it would be better to add some plot yourself

It would be nice to watch it if you have nothing to do.

After reading this book, I closed the book and meditated, and I couldn't help but be amazed. The author's talent and insight are impressive.

Come on, author, can you give the protagonist a whole sword-shaped soul bone attached to the outside [send a heart]

Interesting! The Breath of the Sun setting is great!

The writing is very delicate, a rare book

A good book, not a dark and crippled Tang San. I really miss those days when I used to follow comics in class.

Not bad, I feel it is a high-quality Douluo novel that can reach 9.2