Mysterious *********

It looks good, and it can be seen that the author understands these worldviews very well, but the main plot is a bit slow. Klein can appear more and hold more Tarot sessions. When I was watching Lord of Mysteries, I really liked the feeling of Tarot Club showing the divine in front of others. We've also mentioned the fateful guys. Why can't we write a few fateful guys so that Tarot masters can do a dozen of them? Didn't Audrey have access to memory? Then we can incinerate the industry. And Amon, I've long wanted to see him lose his temper [laughing evilly] The exterminator, even the top four in Dian Lao, are pretty good, let them see the ruthless work that Dian Lao can do [laughing evilly] Come on, author! It's rare to see something that suits my taste so much. Don't stop updating it. I'll read it every day.

The writing is really good, I am familiar with various settings, there is no sense of fragmentation when integrated, and the logic is smooth. It's just that the control of the plot is slightly lacking, it's a little too out-of-the-box and incoherent, and it feels like I'm writing whatever comes to mind, and the multi-perspective writing method requires too much writing skills. Even if it continues like this, it will be over 9 points, or even 9.5.

It's very interesting, and I will give you a small advertisement every day. By the way, is there still a chance to remedy the seal?

Advantages: The worldview is well integrated. I think it can be said to be a combination of Sora and the memory of the time traveler. The disadvantage is that the protagonist feels like he is shouldering the burden of the world on his shoulders, which is not quite in line with the mentality of a traveler in a Genshin Impact story.

Oh my God, it's so beautiful I hope to give Klein some growth events, so that the protagonist can solve the problem of out-of-control mental skills that have not been strengthened by various previous events.

What's really interesting is how you plan to write about Ke Maomao's experience.

Oh my god, it looks really good. The world view is not only handled very reasonably, but the plot is also quite innovative and logical. Thank you very much [Like][Like][Like]

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There are some conflicts in the design, but it's not a big problem. I like it (ꈍᴗꈍ)

Well written, the author has good skills

The writing is very good, very good. Come on, come on, come on [laughing evilly], please write more.

Various settings, well integrated [like][like][like]

Nice and interesting novel

So powerful and amazing!

It can be seen that the author has really studied the worldview

It's quite a new attempt, but it's a bit messy. As a collection of self-integrated settings, there's no big problem, but as a novel, it still needs to be improved.

At least I found it interesting in the early stages.

The author's writing is very nice. It would be even better if there were more interactions between the protagonist and Kemiao. Come on