Please Do Not Enchant Basic Skills with Strange Terms

It's so good to see me doing somersaults ᝯ◂ ˃ ᵕ ˂ ▾ಎ↝. The setting of the entry is not novel, but the author's writing is very interesting and not sloppy. It is very concise and neat, and the various abilities after upgrade are also very interesting [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's pretty good. In every aspect, it makes people feel that this is a popular book. I hope the author will continue writing. Alas, I thought the protagonist was going to take off when I saw it later, but in the end, he played an assassin of the same level and used all his cards. Even if both parties are not ordinary people, the protagonist's magical outfit is not so bad. It's because the equipment is not valuable or the protagonist's skills are useless. I didn't say that the other party is a genius or a wealthy family. As for the protagonist, does it seem that he is so good?

Let me briefly talk about my feelings and what I think are the advantages and disadvantages of this book. 1. Overall experience: It's impressive, but there are still many shortcomings 2. Advantages: The fighting is good, and I like some settings very much. For example, the organization of the church is very consistent with the setting of the Western magical world in my eyes. It can collect heavy taxes, and the bishop can be shrewd, but there must be some people who truly abide by virtue; there are also some settings related to the lords. Finally, the descendants of the border lords are no longer just freeloaders. The three brothers of the Earl's family are very good. 3. Disadvantages: To be honest, there are many, such as the plot is procrastinating, etc. Among them, I think the biggest one is that the protagonist does not have a clear goal. I always feel that the spiritual core of a protagonist determines the core idea of ​​the work. Taking this book as an example, Victor has been getting stronger, but what is his original intention of becoming stronger? Alive? Go home? Or do you just want to experience the customs and customs of another world? Or do you simply enjoy the thrill of conquering monsters? In short, no matter what the original intention is, it should exist, so that Victor's power source can be explained and the most essential aspect of Victor's soul can be shown. (All the above represent personal opinions only and can be used for reference. Thank you for watching.)

It looks good, why isn't it popular? (The rating is too low, so I give it five stars) Objective evaluation 7-8 points (all full scores are 10) 1. The plot is 7 points. The author has good ideas and ideas, and does not feel like repeating routines all the time. There are many plots that are very well designed. I like it very much. There is no boredom of not watching it anymore, and there is no brainless plot where all the opportunities are taken by the protagonist. 2. 7 Points for characterization. The protagonist's personality is relatively good. Except for the two-person case (actually the author handled it perfectly in the end, thumbs up), he does not procrastinate and kills when necessary. He is an absolute self-interested person and interests come first. Moreover, a few descriptions of small characters are also okay to promote the plot. There are not many loopholes in the logic. 3 Goldfinger 8.5 Points. This fusion and swallowing ability is quite in line with my taste. The author has a good imagination and many skills are very novel. The only drawback is that there are relatively few ranks. I have seen more than 270 chapters. Many skills are orange, and there are a few red and purple ones. I hope there will be more levels later, but I think red is enough. The author has not written much yet, and I don't know how it will develop in the future... (It can't be finished after all red, it's pretty good, please write more) 4 The world view is 7.5 Points, just two words "sew", but after all, there are a lot of articles in the world, and it all depends on how good your writing is. If you write well, you will definitely be praised by a lot of people. The world view belongs to Western fantasy. I saw the shadow of many old friends... But the description It's not bad, it makes people feel integrated. It can be seen that the author has great ambitions. He is a god and teaches technology and change. The key is that the protagonist's skills seem to have been exhausted. Author, I beg you not to finish it in a hurry. It is really good-looking. Why doesn't anyone like it? 5. The writing is 6.8. There's not much to say. I've read it all on Tomato. If you want a bicycle, it's good if you can find a good deal. Just look at it. The writing is actually good enough on Tomato. I've combined all the book reviews here (see this, in fact, the previous reviews are a bit high, but if it's only on Tomato, then it's okay to add 1.5 To all the ratings). That's about it. This is the first time I've seriously written a book review. Generally speaking, this book is just for digestion or relaxation after meals. It's not the most interesting to me, mainly because its popularity is too low! ! I feel that the author will die sooner or later if this continues. If you like reading, please stop reading books. If you continue to read books, they will die. My personal ability is limited. I just use my love to generate electricity and write a few more comments. The author forgives me. If it weren't for the low popularity, I would be too lazy to do it. I forgot one thing. Another aspect of this book that attracted me is that there are many battle scenes, and the descriptions of the battles are very exciting! I like it very much, and there is no shortcoming of being sloppy and boring. It can be seen that the author is working hard to innovate. Because of this, the final score of this book is 8.5 Points.

It was a book that quite surprised me. It is a very traditional western fantasy adventure upgrade flow. The scale of the Golden Finger version is quite good so that it does not crash and it is very enjoyable to read. The author's attitude is also very good. The whole book is very satisfying. I just want to read this kind of pure adventure novel [Blow Kiss]

It's quite good. I watched it for several hours. The only flaw is that the protagonist's combat performance is too low. Personally, I feel that sometimes the combat performance is not as good as some NPC supporting characters. The entries I took seemed very strong, but the performance seemed to be average. I said, why is the rating so low? Chapter 350 begins. An event or a copy is written for 100 chapters and then ends. It's different from before, good water

Five-star praise, four-star actual shooting. This is a simple and unsophisticated Western fantasy dungeon adventure novel. The story structure is simple, the plot is clean and refreshing, it is a simple adventure, easy upgrades, and clean monster spawning. There are no bitter old grudges and no sticky love. Very refreshing.

Divine book! It's truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is four The rebirth of a great masterpiece, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Land"? I lost some of my literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? I owe it some connotation! "Zhu Xian"? My feelings fade away in front of it! "Covering the Sky"? In front of it, I lost three cents of my imagination! "Buddha"? Half of the layout is missing in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online writing! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo's old village, Poetic Immortals and Poetic Saints, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Emperors of Qin and Han, Emperors of Tang and Song, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, and Aristotle ——Who wouldn't be in awe after reading it? ! This book by the author is truly the work of heaven and man! The writing is brilliant and the rhetoric is exquisite. It inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is deeply penetrating! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: If I never have the chance to see such a masterpiece again in the future, what would be the point of my life? What's the point of my life? ! Fortunately! Make a decision immediately and put it on your bookshelf! A restless heart can only find a moment of peace. Otherwise! If these masterpieces are covered in dust and the world cannot see them, wouldn't it be a waste of resources and the author's efforts? ! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice the small self to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to everyone in the world! This book must be held up to the sky again and again, so that the whole world will know it! Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are witnesses: Is this book enjoyable enough? --Not enough! Traveling across the rivers and lakes, rivers and seas serve as evidence: Is this book enjoyable? --Not enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not fast enough! Not enough content! Not enough! [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] Divine book! It's truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is four The rebirth of a great masterpiece, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Land"? I lost some of my literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? I owe it some connotation! "Zhu Xian"? My feelings fade away in front of it! "Covering the Sky"? In front of it, I lost three cents of my imagination! "Buddha"? Half of the layout is missing in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online writing! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo's old village, Poetic Immortals and Poetic Saints, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Emperors of Qin and Han, Emperors of Tang and Song, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, and Aristotle ——Who wouldn't be in awe after reading it? ! This book by the author is truly the work of heaven and man! The writing is brilliant and the rhetoric is exquisite. It inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is deeply penetrating! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: If I never have the chance to see such a masterpiece again in the future, what would be the point of my life? What's the point of my life? ! Fortunately! Make a decision immediately and put it on your bookshelf! A restless heart can only find a moment of peace. Otherwise! If these masterpieces are covered in dust and the world cannot see them, wouldn't it be a waste of resources and the author's efforts? ! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice the small self to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to everyone in the world! This book must be held up to the sky again and again, so that the whole world will know it! Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are witnesses: Is this book enjoyable enough? --Not enough! Traveling across the rivers and lakes, rivers and seas serve as evidence: Is this book enjoyable? --Not enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not fast enough! Not enough content! Not enough! [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on]

The book is actually a good book. The author's description of fighting scenes in Western fantasy is really good, and the skill design is also very distinctive. At least the combat power has not collapsed yet, but there are too many fighting scenes, the plot is advanced too slowly, and the plot tension is a bit lacking. Overall, this is like a classic (the knife is not ruthless enough, ps: For example, the alchemist, for example, than For example, the Druid who saves his mother, giving an advanced entry must not shock the reader's heart (manual dog head)), traditional (the plot is easy to guess), the outline of a panel-type western fantasy novel only expands the description of the battle part, yes, it must be said to the point, but it lacks some "fun" to attract people to continue reading. I still hope that the author can get better and better.

Overall, it's okay. It's a little bit toxic, but it doesn't have much impact. I have read almost 200 chapters so far, and I haven't found any signs of a breakdown in combat power. Although the overall plot is about changing the map, it is not like other online novels where there are so many high-level characters. The protagonist is very weak at first, but then becomes stronger and his influence increases. The protagonist occasionally encounters fish-exploitation situations, and he has enough character. The balance of combat power is very well written. The protagonist's skills are actually quite high, and dealing with World of Warcraft is quite troublesome. Considering that the setting is for a small team to defeat Warcraft, it is actually more in line with the setting. After all, the protagonist has to fight the output of five people by himself. I just feel that the income from defeating World of Warcraft is a bit low. A fourth-level Warcraft only costs a few thousand gold coins. When it comes to updating equipment, a single piece of equipment can easily cost tens of thousands. Normally, if the protagonist wants to get an adaptable piece of equipment, he has to hunt down several level 4 monsters (one dungeon in the early stage only has a few level 4 monsters). Team operations also gain benefits, but ordinary adventurers will only be slower to update equipment. If you think about it carefully, it is actually a little bit poisonous. I think the balance of combat power is really pretty good. The follow-up story about entering the secret realm with that aristocratic woman is a little bit toxic. If you like pure and refreshing writing, you can give it up.

With the support of the new book, it is a very classic Western fantasy upgrade. In one sentence, it can be summarized as watching how the protagonist becomes stronger from a grassroots with no background. The various genres and skill settings are complete, the author is very thoughtful, the combat process is also described in detail, and there are many updates. I would like to make some personal suggestions. One is the lack of character motivations, that is, there is no main mission. It is all about killing monsters and exploding entries, which makes it a bit boring after reading too much. In addition, the use of golden fingers is so normal that various entries can be combined to create some saucy routines or funny effects, which makes it more interesting to watch.

It's quite nice to look at. You can see a bit of AI flavor in some places, but it's not too serious. Then, although the plot keeps developing, it still feels a bit like a running story... Overall, it's okay, but the scene descriptions or some sentences are a bit complicated. There are a lot of battles or tasks, and the interpersonal relationships are basically 0 in my opinion (the supporting characters who are related to the protagonist but named have almost no meaning), but it's good. I like Lone Wolf. Then I jumped in Dual Soul, not knowing what happened. I'm a little confused by some of the subsequent skills. In the end, there is the young genius, the death of the elder, the death of the elder, the death of the elder, the death of the elder, the resurrection of the beloved elder, and finally the sacrifice... It feels so familiar.

Yes, it has a solid step-by-step development, involves a lot of content, and the fusion of entries is also fresh. There is no boredom of repeating formulas or slapping someone in the face. Unfortunately, the score is too low. I hope the author will give full play to his strengths and write millions of words. Two souls abide, one is prosperous and both are prosperous, one is destitute and both are devastated.

It can be seen that the author is very careful in writing, and it can also be seen that there is a very typical literary youth disease (the appearance of Chinese classical element skill names in Western fantasy novels is really awkward... And the long description of the skills cannot grasp the key points. I just dreamed of playing a mobile game to see the skills for a long time and need to be translated into adult language). What I feel is that the author is very serious in writing but a little too hard... The plot has a good portrayal of the protagonist and the poisonous split soul. Although I have read the revised version, it is still not a good plot in a cool novel. And when I saw the hard-working mandarin ducks fighting this cult, I realized that maybe it was because I was no longer in the audience... The author felt that it was too pitiful to kill a young couple, but after reading it, I only thought, "The family spent so much effort to cultivate the next generation, but both of them were stabbed in the back because of love, and they both fell in love." A classic plot like "Poor Boy/Maid"... What motivations would there be for embracing this? The result is this... Changing from a career brain to a love brain, this long plot has a much lower rating from me [smile], but I feel that the author is very satisfied, so I can only admit that I am not the audience of this article, I wish you well

I have read more than 200 pictures and wanted to comment. I suddenly saw someone saying that in Chapter 126, the remnant soul controls the protagonist. I was confused. I looked at the title of the chapter. It was not that the protagonist activated the evil god. I didn't mention it. Now I see it is perfect. My perfection refers to the drama. There is nothing bad about the flow of love. The protagonist is now invincible at the same level. He is a ranger at a distance and a noble master at close range. He has high connections in the union and the Holy Cult. Apart from reading for a while at the beginning, I only listened to the book. It is worth listening to the book and playing the game. So far, it is very good.

It's good, but the entries are too poetic and picturesque. The Chinese context of Western Fantasy actually affects the senses. Secondly, some skills are in the clouds😵 Others are well written. The plot is not procrastinating, it is enjoyable online, it does not overwhelm the combat power and it does not crash. The author is quick to update. I heard that someone made more than 10,000 yuan in one day and 100,000 yuan in a month. Come on, author.

Traditional Western fantasy, Golden Finger is reasonable, and the protagonist is super powerful and has clues to follow! Although the beginning of the mission where everyone else went to the protagonist as a team and it turned into a single invitation is a bit surprising, this kind of plot appears in many TV dramas and movies in the West, so it is normal for the author to write it like this! The bigger poisonous point is said to be the twin souls, but I think it's okay. Different views on the problem will lead to different results. The final result is acceptable, and this so-called poisonous point is harmless! After all, the soul travels and takes over someone else's body. In a fantasy setting, it is normal for the original owner's remnant soul to come out and do something. Anyway, in the final ending, the remnant soul is gone, and the protagonist has been greatly improved, which is acceptable and not as poisonous as others say.

It's hard to write a book review, and it's even harder when everyone has already said it well without spoiling it. Emmm, it's the Dragon Boat Festival and the book has exceeded one million. After reading the author's words, I had some thoughts and planned to write to support it, but I didn't expect that the rating was only 7. I remember it should have been 9 when I first started reading? Perhaps. But it seems that you have to control the score in Tomato, otherwise there is a risk of being replaced? Stop talking nonsense and start reviewing the book seriously. One thing to say is that this book is very special, and skill upgrades are normal, but it is still very difficult to write skill upgrades and entry fusion as features. This is a very Western fantasy article, with a Japanese-style Western fantasy background and the protagonist's Chinese-style Western fantasy thinking (hhh, Chinese-style Western fantasy martial arts). It is not the style of a Western fantasy online game, nor is it the American style of Middle-earth. So it's not just a numerical competition, it's more about guessing riddles (fog), ahem, we're not the Rice Krispies Riddler, it's just a competition of resourcefulness and the use of skills. This is a solo hero story. We will always have only one male protagonist, but that doesn't mean there won't be group portraits. Just like the protagonist's skills, he is a man in the city, hiding in the city. Before you know it, you can get to know the evil god who contributed his mouth (really gave him his first kiss)? Become a guest of the Adventurer's Guild (can give priority to good quests with less work and more money)? Communicating cordially with an introverted druid (opening a door, checking the water meter, that kind of thing)? Observe the gossip of the forest elves openly and openly (although you need help beating up the naughty kid, but you have listened to the gossip, you are not an outsider, you have come here, and you will not leave until you beat him up)? This is an article with neither obvious advantages nor disadvantages, but this is an article with the author's care spilling out of the screen. The author is excellent, and I can hardly imagine that this is a novice. The rendering of the background, the shaping of the characters, and the design of the skills are all on point. However, this kind of excellence is not straightforward and refreshing. It requires patient reading. If Amway is too hard, it may actually raise expectations and make people chase after the advantages. Of course, there are also shortcomings (we readers love to point fingers •̀ᴗ-), and many comments have also mentioned that the lightning points of the two souls (emmm, actually I think it is not bad, maybe because I was notified in advance when chasing, but it is indeed not subtle enough, and the plot is a bit deliberate), the one-sided fighting of other characters, and the large space of skills (although, the feature of our book is skills. In fact, the skill design is very good, but as the effect level increases, a lot of explanations will inevitably be required, emmm , mainly because it is difficult to summarize in one sentence, which leads to the beginning of the Riddler. However, a good book is not about its length. It is really more verbose and constantly reviews the attribute and skill panels, so that I strongly doubt the word count, but the plot is really good. The necessary panel descriptions and skills are fully displayed. Even if it is suspected of repeating the word count, it will not affect this. I hope the author will not be affected by this, maintain his own rhythm and expectations for the text presentation form, and make reasonable adjustments (don't worry too much). Ah, that's a lot of verbosity. I hope the author will keep up the good work, have a healthy Dragon Boat Festival, and update more often! ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧

It's very beautiful, the writing is great, the fighting is cool, I like the setting of the protagonist as a lone wolf, the protagonist is very handsome (sometimes the protagonist is described as a cat, and suddenly I got a cute point ⊙▽⊙), but there are a lot of fighting scenes. It would be great if the description of the fighting can also promote the plot! (Sometimes the fighting content is a bit lengthy, almost just reporting entries and reciting skills.) But it is a really good article! I'm a bit picky here. I hope I can continue to update and see Xiaowei getting stronger gradually (︡ω︠)

The combat description is really good. It's not easy to find someone who can write about fighting in Tomato.

Summary: Arrows and magic, entry enchantment, adventure, (there is a short plot of two souls) Generally speaking, it is quite satisfactory than the shoddy ones of the same type. The skill setting is also quite creative, but the only difference is that the plot is mediocre. The characters on the stage are all tools, but Old John, who was meant to be the backdrop from the beginning, is pretty well portrayed. As for the subsequent plot development, we started to add elements to enrich the plot, such as the rebellion of the knights, the fallen genius, the gilding of the noble lady, etc. But in my opinion, it is still the same, even a bit rushed. After the ending of the Two Souls plot, the plot gave me a feeling of suffocation and inexplicable deflation. It may be a rhythm problem, or of course it may be affected by personal emotions. (I was really not normal when I read this book, so it may be due to personal emotions) But then again, I have come here to eat at the buffet. As long as it is not homogeneous, unnatural plot, and selling dog meat, (the poisonous point of my special attack), it is all trivial [laughter] Then there is the controversial Two Souls plot. Using the world view of this book, it is the relationship between the mage, the alchemist and magic (Two Souls). Mages were the ones who first laid the foundation for the theme of dual souls, but unfortunately the development went wrong. Then the alchemists came on the scene and wanted to use the dual souls as one element (for example, for supporting characters), but obviously the minority was inevitably assimilated, and then both built the mage tower on the already wrong foundation. Then they were eliminated by the times and began to struggle, and then they all established separate associations. At this point, the two souls became a fashion code [laughing evilly]. To put it simply, there is a big one coming from the front.

Caught up with the latest chapter in one day [face covering] Generally speaking, Chapter 200 is okay. There are ideas, there are skills development for Western Fantasy, and the story has been developed with a main line participating in the year-end commendation since the second city. It is estimated that by the end of the year, the protagonist will transform into a sixth-level hunter and a sixth-level mage. You can also pretend to be three months in the east of Hedong or three months in Hexi at a party. But there are still several shortcomings. The first is the unavoidable remnant soul. I looked at the version that was modified later and thought it was qualified. But if you suddenly have a remnant soul, it must be a big poison. 😰 For example, if you have gone through thousands of hardships to become the highest strength, become a god king, farm and settle down, will a soul suddenly come out and take over the life you have worked hard for so long? Secondly, there is another point. The author's writing is too jumpy and does not include the origin of many entries. Although this can capture the "freshness" of the idea, it will really make the reader confused and have a poor experience. But the flaws do not hide the good points, it can be regarded as a plate of high-quality "dessert" with a novel and pleasant taste. Come on, author, work hard 😊 I hope to be on the list one day [Sending heartfelt wishes]

There are quite a few poisonous points in the middle. Personally, I think the biggest poisonous point is that in the secret realm, the protagonist first spent a lot of time making an awesome-looking snowman, which wasted a lot of time. As a result, he was first stabbed in the back by the natives, and then pressed and beaten by several natives on the opposite side. So, the effect of pinching the snowman in the front was superficial, and a lot of time was wasted there, resulting in no resource points later. But overall, the author's writing style is very good. Some plots have poisonous points, such as one body with two souls, and sometimes unreasonable emergencies in order to advance the plot. I have to say that this is a very good author. He controls emotions, describes many things, and describes the collisions between characters very well. The author is also very obedient to correct any poisonous points that exist. The author also has a very good advantage. He will often pay attention to the comments of almost all readers and give more or less replies. This allows readers to feel that this is not the author telling the story alone, but a resonance between brains. This allows most readers to have a good reading experience and a high degree of reading participation. In short------the author should update more, but it is not enough.

Overall, it was okay. There were no major problems with the writing, plot, or character design of the protagonist. The setting of skill and equipment fusion entries is relatively new and interesting. There are also problems. I haven't seen too many of them yet. I personally feel that the bigger problem is that there are problems with the character's behavioral logic. In almost every battle, whether supporting characters or villains, their basic behaviors will be fought to the end. Even if they hit a wall in the middle, they will come back and beat them bloody, regardless of battle damage or morale. In this way, it would appear that the supporting characters or villains are just like NPCs in the game and will only act according to the set procedures. If they bring in the thinking of real people who are fearful and consider gains and losses, it will appear fake. I personally give this book a score of about 8-8.5, Which is a book with flaws but still readable.

It was good to watch, but the protagonist still had too little work. As a meat pigeon player, I thought of shooting an arrow for an eye-catching entry first. Then he took out a silent siege crossbow that fired arrows from his space backpack. And an invisible siege blast arrow. Then he left with his concealment, and then sneaked in another one. Instead of following an acrobat like now. It felt like I was being chased away.

Basically, I read the latest one in one go. Every entry is quite interesting. It was fun to read all the way and suddenly a remnant soul appeared in the middle (dealt with Chapter 125). The perception dropped a lot. Even if I don't think of it as a poison point, it still feels too abrupt. Moreover, it is an aggressive remnant soul. Even if I want to forcefully advance the main line of my hometown, I can still hint or suggest something metaphysical from a high position. What's next is the desert dungeon that took 60 chapters? Pretty much. I was fascinated by the plot. I skipped the last few scenes of the sea of ​​clouds. Overall, it was okay. The imagination of the entries and other plot advancements were okay. To talk about something unrelated to the book, the author basically replied to every message, but the reply felt too human-machine [cool] Completed, personal rating is 3.5, Rounded to 4 points

Give me a good review. Although the residual soul took control of the body and released some poison later, the overall rhythm is very comfortable and the writing is also very smooth. I give it a good review and the author will continue to work hard [Top post][Top post][Top post]

A very interesting classic Western fantasy novel. Goldfinger is a roll award system, which is quite similar to the experience of a game in the novel. Overall, it gives me the feeling of fighting, fun, touching corpses, fun, growth, and fun.

This author's writing is good, and he doesn't look like a wild tomato boy. The story develops naturally and smoothly. The protagonist doesn't talk much but does things cleanly and neatly. The first part is well written, a bit like a professional player. I haven't read the second part yet. I will comment after reading it.

Well, there is one major negative point, but the author quickly dealt with it. Generally speaking, it does not affect the reading. The other plots and characters are also very good. If you have to find faults, I have already said it in the comment area - the protagonist still feels a bit unsteady. Logically, he has a bunch of concept-level hidden skills and should naturally become an old yinbi. However, the actual performance is a bit It's quite a "contrast"; then there is the intensity of the skills, which can only be said to be a bit outrageous. Only the fourth-level purple skills involve some conceptual operations, while the sixth-level red skills can actually manipulate cause and effect. It can only be said that the world view is a bit too advanced. It is difficult to imagine how strong indigenous people other than the protagonist learn and practice these skills... [Face covering] [thinking] [smile]