Douluo************

I simply think it's better than the original work, and it's not sloppy. I feel uncomfortable just reading the original work, but when I read this fanfic, I don't like the grinding slap in the face, I just like this kind of character where there is a grudge that doesn't last overnight and is reported on the same night.

Very nice and very cool. The protagonist does things neatly and neatly, not like a virgin at all. The slap-in-the-face plot comes quickly and is very comfortable to watch. Update soon!

It's good-looking. The protagonist is calm and decisive. He's not just happy. He has some brains, but there are too few of them. If you ask me, if the author writes ten chapters a day, this book's rating would be above 8.5 [Face covering] I suddenly discovered that this book had 12 chapters updated yesterday, and I suddenly looked forward to today's update [face covering] Where can I find another copy of such a perfect book for you? [Cover face]

This is very good. Huo Yuhao's weakness in his previous life is written into his current toughness and domineering strength.

It's pretty cool, I'm looking forward to how it will develop in the future.

It looks great. Can you keep the oranges too? I have read it back and forth more than once. The plot has changed a lot and I can accept it, but the author really begs you, please take away the orange [crying]

The writing is very good, and the plot is not sluggish, which makes up for the regret of watching Dou Er II. However, there are some oversights in some details. The author should be more careful when reviewing [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It has daily routines, does not procrastinate at critical moments, has no poisonous points, and the writing style is more ruthless than ghosts. From my style, this is a good book. Therefore, I send you five stars for encouragement.

It's great, it's my favorite work haha

Personally I think it's good, because I just came out of the Black Room, so the names have been changed a lot, but if you're familiar with the original work, it won't be affected much. If it doesn't work, I have to increase the score. It won't be fun if it's blocked. Don't blame me, boss.

Okay, okay, take a look!

Actually it's okay, not bad. I hope I won't be cut in half. I don't think there is any need for Wang Qiu'er to join the female lead. After all, don't you want to rebel against Tang San? After all, according to the original work, Wang Qiuer is not Tang Wutong's. Is it the same as incarnation?

Very interesting plot, loved it^ω^

It's an excellent fanfic, but I don't know why the score is so low. Is it because of a certain tj3s who is the advocate of the internet cleanup operation? Awesome, By renaming lead Huo, in this case should avoid to be sealed? Then I may feel free to give 5

The language is like Ding Liang, what he dreams about is very interesting, the four stars are not because he does not deserve the five stars, but because he is afraid that he will be proud. [Eat melon][eat melon] Why have all the names in this book been changed?

It's okay, but I feel that Huo Yuhao has changed too much. It feels weird that he lacks that sincerity.

It was very enjoyable to read. I hope the author can survive this crisis.

It's a very good book. The writing ideas are very good and the plot is also very subtle. I must recommend it to you. Thank you very much.

The language is very modern. In the middle part of the book, there are basically two or three jokes per page, and there are quite a few female protagonists. If you like rebirth streams, you can read it.

Very beautiful, I hope I won't bow to the will of heaven

It's quite interesting. It's more novel than the original work, and it's not just a cool novel. I like reading it. It would be better if there were more.

Delicious, the author is very good

Okay, just cool writing

It looks okay now, just the name [Thinking]

Pretty good, very interesting

It feels pretty good-looking

It's good looking. It's my favorite Dou Er fan at the moment. There's no OOC either.

It's good, not as cowardly as the previous Dou Er. I personally like this book and hope it won't be removed from the shelves.

It's really beautiful. The author's writing is quite silky, not bad.

The writing is quite good, especially the description of the scenes, which has a strong sense of immersion.