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It's pretty good-looking and acceptable for now. I hope there won't be a female protagonist coming out of nowhere later on. And the inexplicable beauty scandal. [Crying] The current rhythm is quite good. Author, hold on! Come to the author and let me tell you. This book is a creation story, and it is best not to add any messy stuff later. What is the fourth natural disaster? If I want to see this fourth natural disaster, I can just search it. What is the purpose of our book? Creation! Not the fourth natural disaster. You pay attention to this. There is another inexplicable beauty who throws herself into his arms. The book is not available yet. Keep up the good work. The momentum of your book is still good. Don't live up to my hopes. The above are personal suggestions. These were originally supposed to be posted in book circles. But I posted it here so that the author could see it.

It's remarkable. Some places make me feel comfortable watching it, but some places are too complicated and the traces of AI are too obvious. I hope the author can read and revise it himself. Some places are really hard to describe. Already using AI, don't add a little more doge But it's a little better than most creation flows, it doesn't interfere too much, it's a group portrait of creation characters But the character of the protagonist is a bit difficult to evaluate. The description of the extraordinary desire is too much, which makes me a little disgusted. I suggest reducing the relevant description [Looking at it, I think the biggest poisonous point is this] In short, the future is promising, 3-star foundation + 1-star encouragement The one behind is another giant creation baby

It's good. The protagonist is not a saint. Vent your desires when they need to be vented, and break them off when they need to. Then just find a Taoist temple or a hermitage to hide, and slowly nurture your mind and cultivate your character. As the saying goes, if you cultivate your life but not your mind, you will get the first disease!

The early pace and setting of this book are pretty good. Except for the slight flaw in the plot of "Dinosaur Eggs", the overall reading experience is good. It's a pity that after the plot developed to "The Star Comes into the World", the quality took a sharp turn and was no longer as exciting as before.

The protagonist is a normal person. He is a person who has received nine years of compulsory education and has obtained the right to create a god. However, life is cultivated by himself bit by bit. It can be likened to the pets you have raised since childhood. Benevolence is inevitable. Each of them really regards themselves as some kind of cold and heartless protagonist. Transforming from a human to a god is a process. How can normal people have such great adaptability? The only logical problem at present is to buy the dragon egg with all the money. I hope the author can work harder and strive for more hits [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It looks good but I hope I don't have a female protagonist [grievance]

The evolution of civilization, the beginning of the story, the outbreak of uprising, the reconstruction of society, the establishment of feudalism, different heroes and heroes will also appear, and more interesting civilizations will be created. Civilization will not stop developing, it will become more prosperous, and it will also become more hellish.

The box world, in a subspace that cannot be detected by any living thing, is the location of the creator god Gwen. If all living beings stagnate due to arrogance and jealousy and cannot produce energy that satisfies God, they will be chewed on hot dogs a hundred times by the four angels of creation! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's okay. I hope I don't switch to cultivating immortals midway. In creation stories, cultivating immortals always takes up a lot of the plot.

I feel fine at the moment. I think it's normal to spend all my money buying eggs. If you want money, just buy some gold first and then enter the small world to change things.

It's very thoughtful and expresses my feelings. It's very fresh and not poisonous.

Awesome, awesome, awesome, love to watch, love to watch, love to watch Why are so few people reading such an awesome book?

Nice! I know that the author writes from his own heart! It's not just to attract people's attention, because it's all written from the heart, and the carefully written works are really beautiful! Come on! Author! Come on! Author, your work is really great! I really don't know why, there are so many people in Tomato who have dirty, dark thoughts and don't understand appreciation. Isn't it that good works can arouse people's resonance? Those who only like cool articles and don't comment on good works, come on! Author, I look forward to your next true expression! @

Not bad, at least you can watch it

Very interesting creation story

It really feels like there is no difference from the original article

Chapter 35 is obviously AI-enhanced, but overall it's very interesting. The further you go, the more boring it becomes

As a creation-style novel, it is quite good. It can be considered a high-quality product in Tomato. So far, I don't see any bad points.

Not bad, I hope you can carefully describe the process of how the protagonist affects the world in the real world [laughs crookedly] I like the kind where the extraordinary outside erodes the world and the world changes drastically.

Really nice. As long as there are no poisonous points later. The rating shouldn't be bad

It's very well written. Come on, keep writing.

Very good. Although it still has a clichéd beginning, the racial setting is still good, and the story progress is also good, without any sloppiness. It is recommended to take a look.

It's very good in the Creation Goddess. Come on [Blow a kiss]

The protagonist doesn't know what he is still doing, and he hasn't appeared for a long time.

Come on, come on, it looks good

Beautiful, many manifestations of saints

Come on, the author, keep it up

There are shadows of "I am God"

Looks good, the writing is okay

Very healthy