Mist Game, Please Abide by the Red Rules

Judge for yourself. This is my first time writing a novel, and this book was written purely out of the blue. Because I really couldn't find the book I wanted to read, I thought I might as well make the refrigerator myself. Because I have been engaged in text-related work (a material dog), I was full of confidence at the beginning... But when I was writing, I realized that this was not the case. Thank you all for your support... Thank you🙏 Let's talk about daily issues... I think... A story can't just have strong facts, but also some seasonings. Finally, thank you all again.

For me, the main character is to my liking, but I feel a lot of the emotional line is a bit uncomfortable to watch. The role of Ning Meng makes me feel that Chen Zhi's teaching skills are melting like butter. Overall, it is quite good-looking. I gave it four stars after thinking about it. I hope the emotional line can be handled better.

The characters are vividly drawn, the dialogue is fluent, and it also has a scary atmosphere. The writing is good, but I still hope that it is more suitable for the male protagonist to go through the game on his own. After all, it is an infinite stream and the love plot is complicated and dragging.

Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The author's first copy was a little slow in the early stage, but from the perspective of the first chapter, it is also some foreshadowing, which is acceptable. The advantage is that it is not a regular sweet home or dormitory start, it is more innovative. The drama is okay, the dialogue is not awkward, but who is the heroine? Finally, there is the writing style. The author felt that it was lacking at first, and the paragraphing was almost meaningless. But the feeling is obviously different later on, and a bit of black humor is just right.

Finally getting better Why does Return to Reality always have so many irrelevant characterizations?

Awesome, pretty awesome, but there's something wrong with that lemon character

It looks good. It's better without CP. There are too many things to consider with CP.

Other plots are good, but the harem story is not very good...

The beginning is average, but the rest is actually okay I saw the live show. The author still has some skills in writing. I can't wait to see Brother Yong lose his temper (don't tell me I don't). You should be the one, it took me a week to update this much [crazy] Can we see the protagonist and Lin Wan come out next week?

This book by the author is like a long book, and the more you read it, the better it gets. It's too little, and it's gone before you get enough of it. The story is very novel and exciting. It's nothing like the cookie-cutter rules and weird stories nowadays. Come on, there will be more.

Nice! The copy is very exciting, especially the copy of the live show that just ended. I think it looks good. I also hope that this book will be cp-free.