Jianghu******

I don't know if I can keep writing this novel. There are only a few people watching it every day, and the data is really deserted. At first, I wrote this novel out of love, but the more I wrote, the more I doubted my ability. Is my novel poorly written? Or what, no one is watching? In fact, when I reached about 100,000 words, I wanted to finish it. But seeing that there were still several readers commenting and urging updates, I gritted my teeth and persevered. I didn't write this book to make money. If it were to make money, I would have finished it and started a new book long ago. The reason why I am still writing is because there are still one or two readers who have been following the update. I type until midnight every day, and often write until the middle of the night. The surroundings are quiet, and I am the only one facing the screen. Every time I finally finished writing a chapter and pressed publish, I would sit in bed in a daze for a long time. I kept asking myself over and over in my mind: Is it still meaningful for me to stay up late every day and work so hard to write? There were not many people watching, the data was always deserted, and no one left a message or encouraged me. Sometimes I feel very confused and tired while writing, and I even wonder if my writing is really bad, so no one wants to read it. But even so, I still don't want to end it casually or give up halfway. After all, it was a story I wrote bit by bit in my mind, but I still felt a little reluctant to let it go. Just hold on a little longer, keep holding on, even if it's just to give myself an explanation.

Not bad. Very pretty. The subsequent plot is not bad, but Lin Xiaoke's later appearances are so few that it can be said that she has no role at all. There is also the protagonist group. I feel that Zhang Mingliang, Lin Wei, Brother Yama and others did not have enough roles in the later stage. Then there is a plot in the middle that is a bit too watery. I hope the author will change it. It's really uncomfortable to watch. After reading it for so long, I can tell that the author's writing style has improved a bit. Overall, the plot is good, but some people have less roles, while others are pretty good.

Not bad, there is still room for improvement

The book's opening introduction sets a heavy and true tone. It does not cater to the pleasure of "shuangwen", nor does it glorify the dangers of the world. Deng Chengpeng's growth gained through "scars and deadly battles" has torn away the fig leaf of luck. The so-called "point of no return" not only expresses the helplessness of fate, but also serves as a warning to every reader: once some doors are opened, there will only be a fight to the death for the rest of their lives. Looking forward to seeing a flesh-and-blood struggle story

The author writes very nicely

Jianghu novels are very much like the classic Jianghu novels of the past. The story descriptions are straightforward, simple and expressive. Moreover, the first-person narrative is not easy to write, as it will dissipate a lot of the impact and atmosphere of the description. However, it is handled very well. It is a very good book.

Brother, don't stop updating [crying] I will listen to your book before going to bed tomorrow [crying] [crying] [crying]

Nice and enjoyable novel 👌🏻

Not bad, not bad

Really super pretty

Carpe diem, take action when it's time to take action!

It feels really good. I'm fascinated by it. Who didn't have a big brother dream when they were young [laughs]

The author's writing is getting better and better, and it's getting more and more exciting.

This is my first time reading a gangster novel and I think it's pretty good. I feel like the pace is too fast.

The male protagonist has both filial piety and loyalty, which is great [Like][Like][Like]

The plot is gripping, the writing is delicate, and the characters are fleshed out.

The writing style is delicate, I like Lin Xiaoke in the article, he is quite funny!