Pokemon: Meeting the Alola Heiress at Summer Camp

The summary is pretty good, I would like to make a few suggestions. 1. Don't tame mythical beasts randomly, but phantom beasts can be tamed or they are racial ones but not too strong. 2. We don't want invincible articles that are full of tactical combinations and analysis of the opponent's psychology. They should have the feeling of playing PVP battles, so that they are interesting to watch. 3. There can be skill learning machines and props, but the presence should not be too high, nor too low to make people think of them subconsciously. 4. Strengthen Ash Ketchum, which is not found in the original work (Bulbasaur in the original work, some Pokémon that Ash has not evolved are all arranged for final evolution). Ash Ketchum who understands the combination of Pokémon is no longer an Ash who only plays fast attack. Xiaomao also strengthens the mature and stable feeling of Xiaomao in Chengdu area who does not conquer a large number of Pokémon. 5. Strengthen Xiaozhi's emotional intelligence. Serena can appear in the Chengdu area, and then Xiaozhi and Serena will have more intimate contact and emotional scenes (not for any other reason because I am a Zhisha fan) The protagonist is similar to Lillie

It's a very good book. I've just finished the first volume. There is no conflict in it because of the scenes between the protagonist and Xiaozhi, and the scenes for other people are also sufficient. It doesn't make people lose their desire to read because it is everyday literature. Calm daily life It's also nice to have fun conversations with the characters. The bond between him and Pokémon is also well drawn. Overall, if you like Pokémon and your daily life, you will feel comfortable reading this book. I hope the author can continue writing like this in the future. Come on^0^~[Shy]

So far, it's pretty good-looking, with a warm atmosphere, and it doesn't have that "poor man becomes rich" oversized golden finger feeling. The whole thing is very harmonious, not bad! I hope it will continue and it will be updated soon.

It's written in daily prose, so I'm still in summer camp, so the pace is a bit slower. But it's quite easy to watch in daily life (as expected, those who like to watch the sun and moon still prefer to watch daily life) The kids are a bit mature? Not like kids

It feels pretty good, more everyday, and the interactions with Pokémon are warm and interesting. I like the tadpoles very much, and the descriptions are very cute. It's just the emotional aspect that feels a bit awkward. For a seven-year-old child, not to mention the protagonist, Lillie's inner activities are too mature! The dialogue is also more adult-oriented! Overall it's not bad, keep it up!

A very heart-warming novel that makes people feel the warmth of the body

The emotional line is mainly the main character. The protagonist and Lillie have mutual feelings and ambiguous pulls. It's all very good. But Koharu is seriously OOC. When reading this book, don't think of Koharu as the original Koharu in the anime. In all aspects, it is very good. I look forward to traveling to Alola and Lillie in the future.

It's fun to watch, very interesting daily routines, and the fighting is relatively high-level. It's great that it's not toxic. I hope it won't happen again in the future.

Not bad, the writing is quite heart-warming, but there is too much content about summer camp. I thought it would be a small chapter, but it turns out it may be about 50 chapters.

It can be written like this: "I... My name is Lillie" "Shu, I find that I seem to like you a little bit." "Mom and brother, please allow me to do whatever I want for once. The tree is mine! I also belong to the tree!" "Shu, if you don't stay with me anymore, I'll cut off your feet! I want you to stay with me all the time!" "Shu, didn't you say you won't marry anyone but me? Then why are you running away?" "Shu! I was wrong, I was really wrong! I won't force you anymore. Please wake up quickly. I really won't force you anymore." "You ask me why I love holding an urn? Because there is a thief inside, a thief who stole my heart."