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Cool! The biggest feeling after reading this article (although it's not finished yet) is: it's so cool! The emotional line with Wu Xiaowu is handled so well, and the psychological portrayal of Wu Xiaowu is also very good. There are basically no OOC characters in it, and the heroine is also very unique! ! I like the description of Wu Chen (the heroine of this article) very much. First of all, she is disguising herself as a man. She did not deliberately describe the posture of her daughter's family, but she was able to show her ability as a charming girl. She is not deliberately asked to do various behaviors of men, but it will not make others feel awkward. This is what a woman pretending to be a man, just write it casually. If it always emphasizes how she is a woman but is forced to pretend to be a man, it will make people look awkward and unhappy. The second is the emotional line of this article. All I can say is, it smells good! So pretty. Very few people can do two things well at the same time: not being OOC and adding emotional scenes in their fanfics. From this point of view, this article is really rare. Finally, I am most satisfied with this article. Wahahaha! So cool, so cool. Although I also like 1v1, the heroine of All is the most beautiful among immortals. [Adoration] Come on, author, I will keep following up. I hope you will finish writing this book.

The series reaches chapter 88. It's good to read. If you don't want to read about frustrated nannies, you can just jump in. The writing style of this Tomb Raider fanfic is excellent. There is no embarrassing plot, no childish writing style, and no inexplicable characters. I was moved to tears when I accidentally ate several mouthfuls of rocks while watching the Tomb Raider fanfic... The characters' behaviors and designs are very reasonable, and the protagonist baby's personality is very full, and the force value is very high, and he does not feel any grievance at all. Wu Chen never holds grudges, because he took revenge on the spot. Wu Chen, you are just a cool, handsome and adorable puppy. The emotional line is gradual. You are not the kind of person who falls in love at first sight and falls in love with you at the second sight. Blessed are you who like to watch pure love interactions😋The main plot is a very clear strategy for the character to regain his memory. It can be seen that there is a lot of foreshadowing in the protagonist's life experience. The emotional line has not yet reached the part where the male guests fall in love and then struggle with their sexual orientation. I am really looking forward to the plot of Wu Chen falling out of the horse. Hahaha

It's very beautiful, and it's the best long story about Tomb Raiders fan fiction that I've ever read! The heroine is very well and carefully created. Many men who dress up as women tend to be greasy in writing, but this book does not feel that way. Moreover, for every male protagonist who wants to be the main palace and does not want to share, there is a taming process written, instead of simply acquiescing that the heroine is everyone's. Xiong Jing's writing is very, very good! The characteristics of each male protagonist are written out (all of them are different types of delicious products, and I have never read the original work (if I don't understand the part in the middle, I can only search it... The author will not add additional information in many places because it is a stolen background creation), and it seems to be completely understood🥺 The heroine has her own principles of action. Whether she loses her memory later or her brother loses his memory later, it is very interesting and interesting! The author is really passionate about it. I still have an appointment for a manuscript, and I am so excited for my love. The most important thing is that this is really not an ordinary all, it is the most comprehensive all I have seen so far...! Even the fat man is our "mother's family"! Some of the identity settings were changed for the sake of cleanliness. I felt physically and mentally comfortable watching them (female videos should be clean, okay!) Personally, I think it's a mid-range open and high run. It's a bit boring in the early stages, but it's really beautiful later on. I'll come back to add more after you finish it!

I have been following it for a long time, and I changed my account to continue following it. I really like it, but I feel that there are very few people. Is it because the fandom genre itself has a small audience? A woman disguises herself as a man, has the blood of a unicorn, and should start with a god-given amnesia, which is systematic. All the original protagonist group, I like the protagonist's personality very much, the strength value is high, and he looks about 50 or 46 like the black blind man, which can be regarded as a small ceiling for tomb robbers. So far, many mysteries have not been revealed, but they are not the kind of inexplicable pitfalls, but the kind where there are hints and clues in the previous chapters, which can make you guess, which is quite exciting. Wu Xie has already changed the track when his love meter is full, Heixiazi is almost there, Xie Yuchen is a childhood sweetheart, Zhang Qiling is a little behind but not much, and the emotional pull should be later. Expect.

It's delicious. Although the introduction and beginning scared me away for a while, it won't be a surprise when I read it. Let me share this with my friends who were almost scared away like me: ① The woman disguises herself as a man. This will not make people feel that she is deliberately weakening the identity of the heroine, and at most it will only create some misunderstandings in the relationship line, but she will not really want to sell her. (If Cengfu is really the first one to complain) ②Will the name change card in the introduction destroy the combat power and cause OOC? None at the moment. These all appear and then disappear. Apart from adding some jokes and plot twists, they won't change much to the original plot.

Very nice, I got it from another software The setting of a woman disguising herself as a man is very well written and is the most unflattering character design I have ever seen in this setting. The Shuang Wu line is also very touching. Of course, the other lines are also very interesting. I look forward to the plots behind the other lines. (Since it is an all-story novel, can you make a wish for the Zhang family and Qi Yu? Haike, Haixia, and Hailou are really at the level of Bai Yueguang. Also, I feel that Qi Yu has appeared in the article, and he is the brother of the heroine's other vest. There should be emotional lines. I'm really looking forward to it.)

I like it very much. The author is very good at controlling the emotions of the characters. The characters are very smart and real. The plot is very smooth. It looks good and there are no delays or big surprises. The writing of the emotional line is not awkward at all. It is very comfortable to get along with the male guests who have appeared. It is quite refreshing. In fact, if the setting of a woman pretending to be a man is integrated with the character's personality, it is easy to be too greasy or too coquettish. But this book still has good control. The character of the protagonist is very interesting. Come on, author.

Emmm Actually, I like Wu Xiaowu's thread more. I also like the others, but Wu Xiaowu's thread is really exciting. [Blow kiss] I really love Wu Xiaowu's entanglement and secret feelings. It has a unique feeling of a young man. Of course, I love Blind Blind very much, he deserves the best [full]

Delicious, delicious! [Love] The author's writing style is very good and the content is smooth. I can't stop following it. The wording is great, I love you, author! The protagonist who is proactive (here mainly refers to the way of doing things) shines like a star. Even if he loses his memory, he will never indulge in confusion, and he will not hesitate to establish new bonds on the way to find the past. Knowing that he will not be limited to one-on-one relationships, he will tell the truth openly (good Wu Chen, generous and generous!). On the contrary, it reflects the respect that the minister has for Wu Xie. When you meet such a minister Wu Xie, you will be married to him! I am very much looking forward to the subsequent unfolding of Wu Chen's emotional line and past line. Author, I will follow you fiercely [blowing kiss]

This wave of greed suddenly tied up, so empty. . Both the plot line and the emotional line are impeccable. Who are you, Eryu? I am fascinated by you. . Especially the emotional line, I kept laughing under the covers. . Every character is very vivid and three-dimensional. Every time I feel that the plot is a bit heavy, I feel that the emotional line comes alive again. How can it be so beautiful? This is my favorite book I have seen on Tomato. . I have seen it on the homepage many times before, but was persuaded to leave it by women dressing up as men. I really couldn't find anything good these days, so I gave it a try, and it directly cured my problem of not liking women dressing up as men [crying][crying][crying] Everyone took out their smartphones to update my comments on Goddess. I don't allow such a good novel to have such poor data. I will keep pestering you until Goddess is finished [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

Yesterday I clicked on this article. The setting was very attractive to me, and the writing was so good that I couldn't bear to read it all. It's delicious. It's painful. It's delicious. It's painful. It's delicious. It's painful. It's delicious. It's painful. It's painful. It's delicious. It's painful. It's delicious. It's painful. It's delicious. It's painful. It's delicious. It's painful. No, why does it look so good? Please post more updates! ! ! ! ! ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ

Tied. . . Why do I feel that there are so few people reading this book and the ratings are not very high? Are you controlling the ratings? Any idea? The writing by the boss is really beautiful and natural, with delicate emotions and logical logic. There are a lot of Tomb Raider fandoms, but it's actually hard to watch them because they deliberately pursue and always emphasize the beauty, strength, and misery of the protagonist. . . But all the protagonists actually follow this routine. Wu Chen is very good. You know she is miserable, but usually because of her enthusiastic young character, it seems relaxed and happy overall. The plot of going to the tomb is also very well written, awesome! !

Overall, the writing is good and there are no major flaws (the most important thing is that the plot is not very childish and the characters are basically non-ooc), and after being reminded, the author's subsequent writing is basically not insulting to the nv, and the praise is good վ'ᴗ' ի The heroine's force value is strong (not that the dimensionality reduction blow is as strong as the brother's force value), but the golden finger is very small (basically it can recover quickly after being injured). She is more protective of the protagonist group, although she is not a nanny, but she often protects them in times of crisis, which makes the heroine injured. The protagonist controller looks a little uncomfortable😣 (Sisters who don't like the protagonist who is often injured should be careful!! There are basically no special supermodel dimensionality reduction blows in the plot. The heroine is injured a lot, and the protagonist controller looks very distressed (óò｡) ) The plot is more detailed according to the timeline of the original work. The life experience of the heroine feels like a combination of Wu Xie and the little brother in the original work, which is a bit miserable (both a gift from heaven and a pawn in a conspiracy) The emotional line is very fragrant and the heroine is in a dominant position. When alone with the CPs, she is very affectionate. However, once there are multiple CPs present and need to carry water, the heroine feels a little guilty and feels weak. ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ... I hope that the heroine can have a more natural attitude in the future. You can feel free to join the male prostitute party. The author said in the comment area that Quan Jie has feelings. Finally, I want to ask the author, will Zhang Qishan be one of the CPs (I kinda want to see it). Do Laojiumen and Erdai really have no chance of immortality and the heroine? Many old lovers in the main plot line have passed away, so heartbroken_(´□`‖ ∠)_Now when I look back at the first chapter, it seems that I deleted the part about not being able to rejuvenate my youth (I don't know if I remembered the wrong book😂), but it means that he can live forever in the future|•'-'•)و @ EryuL

I feel like the most comfortable and interesting part, but it's a bit too little. I finished it in a short amount of time, and it doesn't feel out of place for a woman to dress up as a man. The author must update it as soon as possible! [Shy][Shy][Shy][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Very nice! It's the kind of fanfic that has its own logic. It follows the original work but doesn't have the powerless feeling of being controlled by the plot. Who can understand? Many fanfics force one person into it and nothing changes. Do you feel like you want to slap me? Although I don't know how to write, I love to read it. Woohoo, the plot is very reasonable. The heroine baby is like an aborigine. There is a reasonable and development line. Don't interrupt. It's so rare to have a fanfic with your own thoughts.

Good luck to those who like the combination of meat and vegetables. The vegetarian version in the early stage will have more meat in the later stage. It is super delicious. The author even made an appointment to write a manuscript. Woohoo, this dish is so fragrant, and the plot twists are also silky smooth. Good luck to those who like to eat.

Look! ! This is one of the most complete novels of the same type that I have ever read. The heroine is not confused, and the men pretending to be women are not greasy. The emotional lines of each male protagonist are carefully laid out. Xiong Jing's writing is delicate and not perfunctory. It is not an assembly line style where everyone falls in love with the heroine. Even if you haven't read the original work, you can still understand it smoothly. The amnesia-related plot is full of tension and becomes more interesting as you go on. It's rare to see such a three-dimensional heroine in the background text of Tomb Raider Notes. It can be seen that the author really loves this story, and you can feel the care in every detail. The writing is relatively clean and comfortable, and it is very enjoyable to watch. It is a typical mid-range story with a high-speed start. The early foreshadowing is a bit bland, but the plot and emotional lines become more and more exciting as it goes on. The emotional lines are delicate and real, and some little language quirks are easy to substitute. I'm sorry for everyone. My wife must update steadily and follow up.

It's so good, it's invincible. The blind guy wrote this book extremely well, especially the blind guy. It really makes people feel that they are people who have lived for a long time and have a wide range of experience. The protagonist is also very cute and cute, with strong combat power and a cute character. The plot does not abuse the protagonist and is added to the plot in a reasonable way. It is really great! !

Marks: Good-looking, the heroine has a very good character and personality. At first, I really hated the system because it deducted the memory of the heroine and she had to do tasks. Even though I got even, I still hated the system. There are all characters in the first chapter, but those people in the plot don't seem to like the heroine at all. It's like they have no memory of the heroine. The plot is very difficult to guess, and the emotional line is also very interesting. The relationship between Simei and Simei is progressing very well. There are so many threads buried in the front of the novel, it feels like it can be written in hundreds of chapters. And I found that when the heroine curses people, she doesn't mean it, and when other people curse, they don't mean it.

It's nice to watch. It's a bit sketchy at the front but it's also very touching. It's not the kind of mindless one that you fall in love with at first glance. It's logical. I like it. The main character is also very individual and doesn't fall apart. What he does is in line with his character. It's very nice to watch. Except for the ending, it's pretty good. [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

I saw this book a few days ago and kept reading until I finally got around to writing a review ❤️‍🔥 Shockingly delicious! The corners of my mouth have been crying... It's really amazing that the teacher can combine the characters and the plot so well! I can feel that the author has a precise character understanding and enthusiasm for the original work❤️At the same time, the teacher's writing style is also very smooth. He can accurately express the message he wants to convey, and is also very humorous and relaxed with the original flavor. When the relationship develops, it is very contagious, especially Xiao Xie's confession when he was just attracted. It is really powerful and I am so excited that I eat it! Wu Chen's personal portrayal is really great. She is a strong, self-aware, mature, and cherished female character. She is really, really awesome! (Lack of language to save life) It is worth mentioning that Xiaochen has a strong sense of identity as a woman. I can feel that the author paid special attention to some expressions when writing about Xiaochen's emotional state. I am really touched! Xiaochen is a person who can affirm himself, so he doesn't have that awkward feeling, so he is very "smooth"? I cherish the people around me and respect my own decisions and feelings. Being able to guide my actions with my will is really charming! Many times, I can feel that Xiao Chen is the one who exerts influence on others rather than being changed by others. The conversation with Xiao Xie in the snow really exudes a strong charm ❤️ The plot line is also very well combined with the original text, and it is very realistic and has a sense of life in the original work! Xiaochen's participation in the plot is natural. You can feel that there is no obvious difference in texture between Xiaochen and the world view. It is not the kind of strange OC who completely piles up values ​​​​and a group of OOC paper people acting as a model. Because the teacher's grasp of the plot and characters of the original work is so accurate, the current plot involving Xiao Chen and Xiao Chen's interaction with each character are particularly delicious! The shaping of the little brother and the changes at each stage are difficult to write about, but the teacher's little brother is really good and really awesome! Confession teacher❤️‍🔥 The emotional lines with each male guest have irreplaceable different flavors. The sandwich with Hei Xiazi and Zhang Qiling in the early stage is really delicious, and the brother-sister relationship with Wu Xie is also really delicious... I will always look forward to the uncles who will appear later... Teacher, I will always follow you!

High school students don't have time to read them all, but the teacher's writing is really excellent. I don't understand why the popularity is so low. I personally think that the logic and storytelling of this novel are the best among novels of the same type. The teacher's setting is also very interesting. The setting of a woman dressing up as a man is just right, and there is no feeling of overexertion at all. I have followed the old Ford all the way. This article is really delicious 😋 I don't understand why the traffic is so low.

Shockingly delicious! A very good-looking fanfic with a reasonable plot, smooth writing, non-OOC characters, and a very good portrayal of the heroine! While maintaining the smoothness of the plot, it also satisfies the satisfaction that the female protagonist wants. This is not a nanny story! This is the most beautiful fictitious fanfic I have ever seen so far. I hope you will update it more often [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Super natural and very comfortable to read. The most important thing is that the female characters who have a crush on the heroine in this book are very natural, and there is no sense of treating a girl's liking as a fashion item (because I feel that many novels want to portray the heroine as a heartthrob, but every time they write about other female characters having a crush on the heroine, it is very awkward. There is a type that does not really want girls to like itself, but just treats the girl's liking for itself as a fashion item, something that can be shown off, and a prop to highlight the charm of the heroine) The heroine gets along very naturally with everyone, and the emotional portrayal is very delicate and vivid. As I read, I naturally fell in love with the protagonist.

This article is really good. The heroine seems to have come to life. She is no longer an outsider who has traveled through time, and is not someone who needs to cater to the characters in the book to sacrifice for them to survive. She has her own light. He has his own life and his own story. The charm he displays has long been connected with the characters in this book. I am also very grateful to the author for letting me see clearly what type of text I like. I find that I still can't seem to adapt to All (it's not that the homework is too bad, but it's so good that it makes people feel even more uncomfortable.) It is precisely because everyone he describes is so vivid, but the emotions are strong, so I can't accept them being inferior to others. They are willing to accept the consequences of loving others as they do. . . When I read Wu Xie's confession to the heroine, I was really sad and embarrassed because I felt that Wu Xie was so helpless and confused. How could the person he loved fall in love with someone else? Is it because I'm not good enough? Is it because I haven't done enough? Why can you say so frankly that you would still choose someone else? This gave me visions of many unfaithful people. I'm still sorry, I feel like it's boring to say this in this article. . . Anyway, these articles are really good and emotionally true. . . Make everyone so alive. Marvelous. . But it seems our fate can only end here. Goodbye.

It's great. I'm a person with rather special tastes. It's not easy to find a Tomb Raider fanfic that I like to read. I'm almost halfway through it. I want to ask the author when a woman disguises herself as a man and when is she exposed [shy][shy][shy]

It's very beautiful, the writing is good, the characters are good, the protagonist occupies an absolutely dominant position. I think part of the reason for the low traffic is the cover (?) I don't know if the boss would mind saying this. I have passed this book many times because I thought it was a bi-masculine book when I looked at the cover. People who read bi-masculine books won't read it if they click on it, and people who don't read bi-masculine books won't click in. In addition, women dressing up as men often think that there are many stereotypes and so on. I feel that the boss can also add female orientation in the copywriting. Many words look very comfortable and the writing is really good🥺

It's beautiful, teacher, please don't break it [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart]

The good-looking [shy][shy] author will update a lot [shy][shy]

It's beautiful. Why is the score so low? I've seen stolen pens. All the articles are very natural and beautiful.