Band: Toyokawa Shoko's Toyoda Cousin

After reading Chapter 30, there is no evil point, the plot development is reasonable, and the writing style is acceptable, which is very suitable for my taste. I look forward to Teacher Daxiang turning into a soft and waxy Xiaoxiang [shy][shy][shy]

It's been a long time since I've watched it, so I'd like to give you a review. I don't know why. I haven't seen the turtle mentioned in other book reviews. It would be great if someone could explain it to me. As for Genshin Itasha, I have no idea. I can only say that it is an otaku stereotype. On a daily basis, I think the writing is quite good. It handles Daxiang's problems directly without being too inconsistent, because the foreshadowing takes a long time. Unlike other books, Daxiang is not relieved of his obsession and wakes up in a few sentences, and then apologizes to everyone and finally returns to the Maybach. The identity of the relative is very clever, and I feel that he will indeed be the type that the original Xiangzi can accept. The few points that cause discomfort should be the vegetarian diet. Although the original version of the vegetarian version is like this, it feels more CS from the perspective of the novel. It also leads to the trend that Xiangzi may be the heroine, but she may have to speculate in the stock market. In short, I think this is a MyGO article that at least does not have OC, which is very valuable.

See Chapter 43. Yes, although there is no very impressive memory point, the protagonist's sense of living dead and identity still bring a different kind of interesting experience. 4 Stars because I'm a little annoyed by Xiangzi's character and want to see the protagonist use his guardian to do personality-correcting punches and physical beatings to make him soft and soft. (Not a suggestion, just a personal idea. I want to see a more bloody plot)

It's too cruel. I kept the original outline nodes and made some reasonable additions. The male protagonist is also well portrayed, with strong ability to smooth things over, but at the same time he also has the rawness of a young man. The writing on Xiangzi's redemption is pretty good, keep watching.

This is a novel that is not like a novel. It has a strong sense of substitution. It looks very stomach-ache. It is full of reality and daily life. It feels like things happening around you.

The protagonist is the same as the Genshin Impact that the author inserted into the article. He is a pure Genshin Impact protagonist with a pure camera. If he can eat it, he can probably watch it ten times. [Facepalm] [OK]

I said it felt weird. After reading the comment section, I realized that it turned out to be the protagonist of Genshin Impact's special camera that I had abandoned for several years. I gave it 4 points because I want to see the plot development of the interesting characters next.

This issue is amazing. This book really gave me a big surprise. In fact, I was not very optimistic about this book at first. The Three Kingdoms stories in it attracted me to read it a few times. I found it to be really good. The text is clear and not cluttered. The characters are just right in length. Generally speaking, it is considered good among Bang fanfics.

It's boring, not very long, just average, one star more than necessary. In the comment section, I saw a Genshin Impact car, and my head was spinning with stress. Live so long

The writing is actually okay. The reason for the low rating should be that it is too watery and is always inexplicable. However, this kind of writing method is nothing and does not affect the reading experience. The author has his own whims. Generally speaking, this book is of a slow-burning nature. Readers who like to read cool stories can give up reading after seeing this comment. Finally, I would like to give the author some advice. I suggest that Xiangzi have a single female protagonist to speed up the relationship between the male and female protagonists.

The author writes very well, I would like to ask if there is a female protagonist?

The details of the character's personality are captured well, and it is relatively successful in restoring the character among the fans. However, the writing power is still a little above the baseline of domestic online novels, and it is still far from the Japanese light flavor of the original work. After reviewing one hundred chapters, the original character creation is poor. The character design of Toyokawa Rina (the male protagonist's mother) can basically be applied to similar characters in assembly-line urban novels. The male protagonist's design is relatively thin to cater to the plot. There are many "service-oriented" plot dialogues, which are a bit poisonous.

Looks good, makes me spin at high speed (Quietly asking if there are any books with Hachiban Hairei as the heroine. Wow, the cook has so little food.)

Although the score is relatively high, can there be less stuff about political establishment? There are almost no girl bands behind, and there is a lot of testimonial content [face covering]

What's going on? The book is gone when you look at it?

How can I put it this way? This is the first book I have read that combines my second favorite Yakuza and my fourth favorite girl band. I will still read it, but I feel that the male protagonist is really useless, not even as good as the barrel.

This book is within the scope of reading. I've only watched half of it because the part where Xiangzi plays games really doesn't appeal to me [facepalm]. It's currently four stars. I'll update the rating when I finish it.

I think it's okay, maybe because I've read too many other books. I feel like the pace of this book is slower. By the way, does this book have a CP? Also, I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. I feel like the male protagonist's role becomes less and less as time goes on. I don't know why. And I didn't feel that the male protagonist had any growth or personality charm. I haven't watched the original anime that much. But I feel like the male protagonist didn't play a big role. And they all read Japanese comics and fan fiction online. I want to read about falling in love and eating sweets. Accepted

A novel about becoming a man of God. Where is God? God is behind the original Just treat the characters as having their own lives, nothing boring to watch

It's extremely delicious. You must try it. If you come, please send it to Yunchang as soon as possible.

Good guy, another new element😋😋😋, really interesting, this one is also good-looking, I finished reading it in one sitting

When will you go to Xiangzi?

It's pretty good. The protagonist doesn't appear as a main character and doesn't participate in the band. He mainly acts as a mediator in the middle.

In a group of gods, it is really a lot of fun to see it from the perspective of a normal person like the protagonist. It's very interesting, and the subsequent plot becomes very interesting. When it fits the character, Xiangzi turns into a witness gamer and now turns into a black-hearted capitalist and squeezes his old teammates. This kind of plot is so fun. The main thing is that the protagonist, a stable person, uses the three views of normal people to radiate and change other people with Xiangzi as the center. It is very fun to match the behavior of normal people with the original personality setting. I guess I have found my writing comfort zone, so hurry up.

A perfect work of art, the dark underworld thread of Jiutong Laodeng and the bright thread of redemption for Xiao Xiang, a perfect combination!

Does this have a female protagonist? I've read Chapter 20

As an outsider, this is my first time reading Henka's article. It's eye-catching, super pretty🤓👍

It's really beautiful. I don't understand why the rating is so low.

It looks okay so far, and the variety comics are good for daily reading, but the main character feels a little less present.

Is there something wrong with the author or has he stopped updating?