Juezuzero: Deaf and Blind, You Ask Me to Beat You to Death

This is a very good book. It does not blindly pursue the main plot like other similar JuZuZero novels. Instead, it describes the little factors that make up human beings, such as joy, anger, sorrow, and joy. There is no speechlessness shocked by the grand scene;

It's very good, but it's hard for me to say which one is better. I'll just tell you what I think. The overall rhythm control is quite good, and there are occasional small jokes. The Bangbu section is quite good. For me personally the corpse is warm. And it also allowed me to quickly grasp who the protagonist is [laughing evilly]

A good JuZuZero fanfic that gives readers plenty of room for fantasy. The various descriptions are also very good and do not give people the feeling of AI. Finally, there's the age-old question of fan fiction: no heroine, single heroine, or multiple heroines? And who is Zhe's CP? @

It's a very good book, and I can look forward to the future. The pictures are very satisfying, and the description of the scenes is also refreshing. As long as it can maintain this quality, it will definitely be a very good Juzu Zero fanfic. With the current reading time, I can't give any good suggestions. I can only encourage the author. What can I say? The daily life is very warm and great. The scenes are also very easy to imagine. I rarely comment or review unless it is a novel that really makes me think it is good or a novel that is extremely bad. In short, it is just a sentence. After reading so many comments, how can you know if it is suitable for your taste if you don't check it out for yourself? Anyway, it won't make you feel sick.

The writing style of this work is delicate and moving, with a strong visual sense. The emotions and scenes are vividly described in just a few words. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, with flesh and blood, the plot is relaxed and relaxed, and the emotions progress layer by layer, making it easy for people to become involved. The story is gentle, healing and full of power. It will be unforgettable for a long time after reading it. It is a masterpiece worth savoring. Come on, author, give me ten updates a day, or else you, Old Feng, will be whipped out

"Brother" Brother, you caught me and you caught yourself. The girl's words vaguely rang in Qiming's ears. The story is very well written. I recommend reading A Little Knife. The pace is slow but very comfortable to watch [Like][Like][Like][Love] Brother, I was wrong. Don't stab me. It makes me uncomfortable [crying][crying]

The author's writing style is excellent. There is no gorgeous or exaggerated rhetoric, but he can use the simplest and plain language to outline a scene with a strong sense of picture. Whether it is the streets shrouded in mist in the early morning or the delicate thoughts of the characters under the lights late at night, they are all described so vividly that it feels like you are immersed in the scene. You can clearly feel the temperature of the wind, the outline of the light, and the emotions surging in the hearts of the characters. This kind of writing skills allows the story to break away from the limitations of paper and turn into vivid images, which are deeply imprinted in the hearts of readers.

To put it bluntly, all opinions are from a subjective perspective without any objective will. It is essentially a direct expression of one's feelings. Everyone has their own love for radish and green vegetables. I would like to express my gratitude to you as much as a rose. I wish you a happy life. Oh my god, I'm greedy for this one. It's so beautiful. I should save it for the Spring Festival to see it. The author's writing style is really good, as beautiful as poetry. The protagonist and other characters are well created. The protagonist's personality is very unique. I have rarely seen such a protagonist. This kind of personality is really attractive, and it seems that the author will definitely add some unknown secrets to the former protagonist. After all, there are still many pitfalls. And there are no OOC characters in the game (I feel like it's well written) The self-created story intersects with the main plot. This way will not make people feel that it is just a slight change based on the plot, which is boring, nor will it make people feel that this story is just a void that relies on the worldview structure of Zero Zone. The story of Lin Xiaoyu and Lin Qiming is very well written, and what I see in his language and the whole story is a kind of tenderness. Well, the poet is wrong, it is Wendy, who plays such a melodious but extremely vital song with the harp in the wind. Poetry, the slow pace is really not popular in tomatoes, but if possible, to be honest, I really hope it can be slower. The extra time should be more or less, just enough time for a cup of tea. To be honest, this story is very unique. It is also very creative. It is not uncommon for humans and machines to have feelings for each other. It seems that it is very common for machines to awaken their own feelings when they get along. This kind of story is generally bad, but this story is really very clever. The author is like a chef, kneading the inner spiritual stuffing into the dumpling wrapper of language. Then this love becomes the key attraction between men and women. In this context of people's desire, the author is not some groove author who only thinks about love in style. He thinks about love every day. The author focuses more on family and friendship. As for the heroine, to be honest, I don't like multiple heroines, but that's okay, because my dislike of multiple heroines is more about the kind of protagonist who is a succubus and attracts all kinds of women to him with just the smallest things. As long as the author tells me that the story is well arranged and the premise is reasonable enough, it doesn't matter if there are one or two more female protagonists. Of course, not too many, please. Okay, I have fully expressed my opinions. This is really a great work that I have seen. Of course, everyone has different appreciation and focus of the work. All opinions here are subjective factors. Just take a look and have fun. Goodbye₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎ ༘♡

After reading it, let me tell you what I think (there are some minor spoilers, I will try my best to ensure that readers who read this comment will enjoy the next reading) In terms of plot, the arrangement is well-organized and the priorities are orderly. Different from the Zetsu Zone Zero fanfics that I have read recently, the Far Vision Incident, as the main plot of Zetsu, is not given too much emphasis. Instead, it focuses on telling the story of [Hyacinth] (it should be the author's own design, I don't remember that there is this in Zetsu). There is no rush to push the main plot in the follow-up. It connects another story of [Heart] and [Heart]. The author has obviously thought about the arrangement of the plot and has his own way. I don't like the arrangement of just following the main line of the original game (this will make me feel like I have watched the plot replay again). So, bonus points. In terms of writing style, it is relaxed and relaxed, neither slow nor fast. The emotions are described very delicately, and the descriptions of big scenes really made me feel excited. The author's writing style is very gentle, focusing on emotional portrayal, but there is no feeling of "excessive force" (some of the emotional descriptions in some books I have read before have caused me to feel physical discomfort directly), which is very good, plus points. In terms of characters, they are vivid, bright and penetrating. At present, the taxon looks like? (I don't know if this is a group portrait) We know the game characters we are familiar with very well. The author obviously knows this, and no matter how he portrays them, he can't escape the game and the player's frame. Therefore, the author chose to step out of this box and let me write [NPC]. Except for the two original characters of Yidingnibu and Yama, Guixiang, Grandpa, Lin Qiming, and Lin Xiaoyu should be the author's original characters. I generally can't remember the character names, but I remember these people. I thought about it, what is the reason for this... Maybe it is because of [obsession], the author captured the [obsession] of people in the empty doomsday, possession and loss, despair and hope, and the portrayal of each person is very nuanced. When I think of stories, I think of people, and when I think of people, I think of stories. Stories are made alive by people, and people are enriched by stories. I like it, extra points. The protagonist, the reason why I talk about this separately from the character is because I want to talk about him separately. The protagonist is deaf, blind, and crippled by nature, but he has a compassionate heart, hates evil as much as hatred, is free and unrestrained, and has an open-minded nature. I feel that he is like a saint, and the author's description also tells me that I really like this kind of protagonist. He is like the clouds in the sky, gentle, and what he does is like the wind between heaven and earth, gentle, but it can blow away the dust and return people to clarity and ease. Selfishly, I would like to add one more point to this protagonist. Okay, next, let me mention something that I think has a little problem. In the plot of the Lin brothers and sisters, the arrangement of the empty explosion is a bit deliberate. This thing cannot explode casually, let alone erupt directly in the city. I know this is to serve the subsequent plot, but some reasonableness should be considered. Taking a step back, a hollow explosion will involve many people, but I feel that this outbreak only affected the Lin family brothers and sisters. If I could write about the reaction of the Public Security Bureau and the public in the middle, it would alleviate a lot of the sense of disobedience. It's even the reaction of the municipal government, the military, and the top forces. Of course, writing it in full will seem bloated. If there is a similar plot in the future, I hope the author can adopt it as appropriate. In summary, the shortcomings do not hide the good points, it is a good book. The word count is only about 100,000 words now, but I am very satisfied with the content and look forward to the subsequent development of this book. As long as the quality is maintained in the future, I don't know about others, but I will be a loyal reader of this book, and I will continue to review it as the plot develops. Please excuse me for reading my long review. However, I very much hope that someone will click in and read this book because of this comment. This book has a long way to go, I hope you will come and appreciate it. Thank you very much. (Okay, this is just a compliment now. The following are all personal opinions. I hope you will not be affected. In fact, selfishly, I give this book full marks. After all, it has been a long time since I have seen a book that suits my taste. If you don't mind, don't read it.) A good book, a ray of warm sunshine, a trickling spring, smooth writing, very comfortable About 100,000 words, I wrote several short stories, including Yitinib, Guixiang, and Lin Xiaoyu. I won't list some trivial events here. The ones that impressed me the most are these three things. The thing about a dinginib gave me a rough image of the protagonist. Many authors will write about this. After all, this gadget is so cute, and being bullied is really an unforgivable sin. No one can resist this little guy's invitation to touch his head (making violent comments) The return of fragrance makes the protagonist's image more complete (in fact, there were many small incidents before it), the fragrance of hyacinth blows from the hollow to the outside of the cavity, hope flows, endless, and those who survive continue to move forward with the fragrance of flowers. There is a protagonist in the first two events, he is the main experiencer Lin Xiaoyu, this matter... It does not have the direct participation of the protagonist. Lin Qiming, Lin Xiaoyu, and [Lin Xiaoyu], they are the protagonists. To be honest, I am not very interested in stand-in literature. I accept that this person who was created due to obsession has experienced some things and then accepted himself as another person. This is how most authors handle this kind of plot. I thought it would be a dumpling ending (laughing), but [Lin Xiaoyu] died. The chip went out after my brother put it down. I was shocked. The ending of making dumplings that I thought did not appear. However, this story left a deeper impression on me than the previous stories. I like this story very much. The author handled it well. Lin Qiming welcomes tomorrow. There is no difference between core] and [heart], love will always exist in the heart. In this incident, the protagonist exists as the promoter, the protagonist becomes the [supporting role], and the [supporting role] is the protagonist. This is not an indifference of priorities, on the contrary, it is a clear distinction of priorities. Only such a book is full of vitality. A show involving one person and a group of puppets is nothing interesting. Only a group of flesh-and-blood people can compose a good story. I'm used to watching dramas where the protagonist always shows off his power. Now, I want to see the story of [little people] under the apocalypse. Words are the carrier of emotion. If it can make people feel the emotion, it is very successful. This novel is very good and I will keep reading it.

This book is one of the best in my opinion among all Zetsu Zero fanfics. The author's writing style is very good, and the beginning is not bad. It takes off from the first dingnibu, and it is the same as the hyacinth and "core" and "heart" in the back. It made me cry [crying]. I also want to watch Yi Xuan and Xiaoguang's Shura Field Kouga.

There are not many good books among fans, and the author releases updates from time to time. The logic is reasonable and smooth, the plot advances at a moderate speed (Piece: Personally, there is no malice), the plot is not boring, there are foreshadowings, and the meaning of the book is positive but not dark (including the original plot in the book).

This is a very good book. It does not blindly pursue the main plot like other similar JuZuZero novels. Instead, it describes the little factors that make up human beings, such as joy, anger, sorrow, and joy. There is no speechlessness shocked by the grand scene;

A very good quality book with good text and even better content. In an anchored world view, the author greatly presents us with a wonderful plot and well grasps the attitude of the novel. It is not just one person but a type of people. Everyone has human nature and multi-faceted personality. The flesh-and-blood appearance makes people feel heartbeat. In each familiar plot, I seek new insights. The emotions are no longer just floating on the surface but more penetrating under each word. The author is also full of enthusiasm and has a better sense of responsibility. He will never stop updating easily and is more secure in following up. The author also said that he will update every day. If he is in a good mood, he will add more updates, otherwise he will become a cat lady, so it is not a loss to join the trap. Meow~

The author's writing style is excellent, and the characterization of the characters' emotions is very profound. There are no clichés or flashy words. He uses the most plain tone to tell us the story of a man named Nan Zhiyi. The protagonist is not some dragon king, and this is not some Long Aotian cool novel. The protagonist is like a passerby. A traveler who quietly witnesses the deeds and growth of others, and lends a helping hand when necessary. The protagonist is not the kind of shabby Madonna who pretends to be great and upright, but a true cultivator who is both free from the world and cannibalizing the fireworks of the world. In short, this book is really worth reading [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

See Chapter 107. This is a very well-written novel that is very in line with my personal preferences. It is a relatively everyday article, like finding the Star of Africa in the delta. The big guarantee is yes. The protagonist is deaf and blind, has mental illness, and only has the memory of the past three years. He can tell fortunes, but we usually call him enlightened. Able to challenge the butcher This character seems to have saved Hoshimiya's mother and Yi Xuan's sister during a major explosion 10 years ago. The explosion went too far, and I lost my vision, hearing and memory. I have now regained my sense of smell. The parts he lost were refined by the Praise Society into some physical clones, which are a little stronger than the currently weakened protagonist, and can almost be said to be the strongest under the Void Hunter. Now the current plot has developed to the point where the protagonist has initially come into contact with the plan against him, which is to ask the person in charge of the vision industry, who is similar to Bang Bu. That thing was caught, asked him what he was doing, and then revealed the plan.

It's quite interesting, and the author's subplots are well written, and he's very good at portraying the characters. I personally like this kind of plot that explores people, and the author's chapters can really touch people, and he also has his own ideas and writing methods. It's very similar to a book I've read before (referring to the depth of the character's portrayal) (ps: I don't mean to disrespect the author. I apologize if I am offended and will change the review). In short, I like this book very much. I hope the author will read more, but he must also pay attention to his health.

Nice! ! ! ! Although I personally don't like slow pace, this book creates full characters and arcs of supporting characters, which is deeply inspiring, and the writing of this book is also very good.

A masterpiece! I started reading about twenty pictures. The author is particularly good at using a short length to establish the characters. Although the rhetoric is too gorgeous for me, it affects the perception, but it is definitely a masterpiece.

Yes, very well, very well, very good-looking [smile] [smile] [smile] Author, update soon, I'm almost exhausted: ₘₙⁿ ▏n █▏､⺍ █▏ ⺰ʷʷｨ █◣▄██◣ ◥██████▋ ◥████ █▎ ███▉ █▎ ◢████◣⌠ₘ℩ ██◥█◣\≫ ██◥█◣ █▉█▊ █▊█▊ █▊█▋  █▏ █▙  █

It's quite interesting. The protagonist has the power to avoid eating beef. From the chapters written so far, it can be seen that the author's writing skills are very good, the emotions are rendered well, and there are relatively few exciting parts of the battle, but the future is promising. I look forward to the interaction with Master Yixuan in the future. However, this kind of direct insertion of one's own background in the big world feels like it is easy to be backstabbed in the subsequent plot, but it doesn't matter, nine out of ten fans will be backstabbed ()

The writing is delicate, the rhythm is well controlled, the story is warm and touching, and it fits the core of Zero Zone Zero that is still smiling and facing tomorrow after the disaster. It feels like a story that really happened in New Elido.

It's very interesting. The stories and some of the daily stories written by the author are also very thoughtful and touching. First, it's about little Bang Buyi Tinny earning dinnies for his cat friend. Later, he awakens his own courage and strength because of the copper coins given by the guardian protagonist. Then, the old man who cultivates Fenghuayu and his Fenghuayu son who disappeared in the hole, and then the story of Lin Qiming and his created sister Lin Xiaoyu. Every story is very touching [almost crying]. I feel that the author's writing skills can be used to apply for MiHoYo.

Why didn't the screenwriter of JuZZero include you? It's really well written and very detailed. Whether it's a big character or a small character, they are all well portrayed. Some of them I even think are comparable to or even better than the original work.

Come on, the author writes very well, Tomato Boyfriend's masterpiece, I dropped my pearls after reading it. The only shortcoming is can there be a happy ending? I don't want a knife, it's well written but it made me feel even more uncomfortable when I read it. Come on, author, you are so popular. I have seen more than 1,500 reminders for updates before. The writing is very good. I just hope there will be no regrets. I still want a happy reunion @ [crying][please update][sending heartfelt messages]

It's good-looking, except for the small number of words.

The original plot is quite well written, but the plot between Xiaoguang and Yixuan and the male protagonist makes me feel a bit OOC (overlapping armor, personal feelings). Overall, it is a good fan work.

It's so good. In fact, I think it's good for the author to write some content other than the main plot. It's not that Tomato doesn't like slow writing, it's just that if it is slower, it will look watery. If it gets a little stuck, just write some transitions. Oh, Nei Gai, let's write about zero for the rest of our lives [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This is the first time I am so passionate about a fanfic, especially the interaction with Yidingnibu. It doesn't have the clutter and unreality of most books on the market. The protagonist's mentality is also very good and unique. I really envy people who have this kind of mentality.

Really, this book is really profound, but it's a pity that I can't find a good sentence to modify it. Anyway, I highly recommend you to read it. The descriptions in it are really delicate, and every time I read it, it seems to be happening around me. I can be immersed in it every time I read it. I can't describe this feeling at all.

It's so beautiful. It ranks in the top five of all the ones I've read. The author may not know the plot of ZetsuZero the best, but he is definitely the creator of ZetsuZero 2 with the best writing skills. This writing style can definitely be called a great writer.