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I Have Given up Hope on High-Quality HP. Please Slap Me in the Face with a Book.
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I Dare Say HP Is a Masterpiece! ! !
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I Beg for Help in the HP Novel. the Male Protagonist Is Sirius. the Child Has Nothing to Say About Sirius.
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HP Wants the Male Protagonist to Be Sirius
Sirius was also upset
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Is It Okay If the Male Protagonists of HP Are Sirius and Regulami?
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It's so good, why are there no book reviews? I disagree! ! ! ! ! It's hard to find a heroine with Mandy's character and a first-person story in Tomato. It's the only one with this kind of first-person perspective that I don't know how to describe. Mandy gave me the feeling that she has a very real personality. I only saw it when I opened it by chance. I read it all in one go, and I felt like I still had more to learn from it (it was a bit hard to give me this feeling with other books, and I've been a little tired of reading lately). It gave me a feeling like when I first read Demian. The title of the last picture of the very profound story made me understand, what does the 3000 stairs mean (I was a little confused at first). It is the road that must be crossed to reach oneself. Mandy is looking for herself. The germination of her feelings was planted with Furla, and was guided by Lily, and Sirius made it stronger. (Well, I interpreted it based on my own point of view) The description of the story has a very immersive feeling. Compulsory education really hurt me. I don't know how to express it. Although I prefer to read a complete story, I think this kind of twists and turns would be more in line with Mandy and Sirius. As mentioned in the article, two stubborn people are destined to have twists and turns, but only in this way can they get their true ending. (Well, if there is something wrong with the interpretation, you can tell me and you can delete it. I just wrote this paragraph out of emotion. I usually write a paragraph about books that are good and I like them) Come on, the author, keep reading and reading! ! ! ! [Blowing kiss] Then after I finished writing, I immediately turned out my Demian. I think this paragraph also fits the introduction very well. Human life is a process of constant loss, but for everyone, there is only one real responsibility, to find oneself, and then stick to it in the heart for a lifetime, wholeheartedly and never stop. All other paths are incomplete, a way of escape, a cowardly return to popular ideals, a drift with the crowd, and a fear of the heart. Mandy already has the path that she must pass through in the process of becoming Abraxas (a metaphor in Demian, which refers to a real god with both good and evil sides, both God and devil. My personal understanding is that it refers to the true self, representing the duality of human beings). She must complete this journey. Three thousand steps, for this, she will shed her blood and tears, and give something she doesn't want to lose, in exchange for what she must protect. The face of the God's mansion that she sees at the end of the road must be her own face tattooed (my personal mixed views on books and Demian are really appropriate, I think (›´ω`‹))
Because this is my first time writing a novel, if there are any OOC parts, I apologize to you. I am very afraid of not being able to write well or having no inspiration later. I don't want to disappoint everyone by writing blindly because I have no inspiration. I am very grateful that you are willing to read my work. At the same time, I also pay attention to everyone's comments on this book. Because I am a relatively shy person, I don't even have the courage to like when I see the comments. I feel that everyone's comments are so cute. I welcome everyone's opinions and point out the shortcomings. Just don't scold me too much. I will really cry secretly. Mandy Cotter is a character I came up with on a whim one afternoon. I named it "Mandy" out of some selfishness on my part, because I personally like Mandy in "Shameless" and I didn't think too much about it at the time. Because I was just writing for fun at school and I couldn't think of any other English names. I only showed them to my good friends. Later, because my good friends loved watching Shameless as much as I did, they complained to me several times and said that the name Mandy was too representative. Can I change it? I also hesitated. It wasn't until later that I discovered that Mandy's name meant she was worthy of being loved, so I didn't change it. I originally expressed to my good friends that I didn't like this character setting because I personally still like the cheerful and enthusiastic Little Sun character. I also considered whether to rewrite it. But then, the more I wrote, the more I found that it was starting to be different from what I originally conceived. But I remembered that the author J. K. Rowling once said that if Tom Riddle's mother survived and gave him the greatest maternal love, he might be like a normal child, and I felt that this was more reasonable. Mandy seems to have come alive in my writing The family affection that Furla brought to her, the friendship that Lily gave her, and Sirius Black, I think her heart softened a little bit unconsciously. No one could face so much sincere love and not be moved. Whether it's Mandy in "Shameless" or my own Mandy, I believe that every girl deserves to be loved. Thank you for collecting and commenting. Readers who wrote reviews for the novel. Thank you for readers who gave tips. Red Bean Paste Private Horse Thief. Special thanks to Qing Pingzhi. You are so cute. Finally, I would like to thank my first reader, a good friend who grew up with me. Thanks to author JK Rowling for providing us with a magical world
This is the first time I have such a strong impulse to write a long review for a book, not just to encourage an author. It may have some flaws, but it's absolutely "good". I opened it tonight and just took a look at it tentatively. After reading a few chapters, I found that there was no deliberately pretentious writing style, it was just a straightforward narrative. The story flowed into the reader's heart slowly and slowly like running water. At first, I just felt comfortable watching it, but as the story progressed and the plot rose and fell, the flowing water also fluctuated. There are times of urgency and slowness, but the sour and stinging emotions brought to readers have not subsided. An indescribable atmosphere that may be plain but has a strong sense of existence has been lingering. (It is a bit contradictory but I don't know how to describe that feeling. I feel that I wrote it awkwardly. I didn't want to write it so awkwardly, but it became like this after writing it.) The overall feeling is a touch of sadness. Reading the whole article gives people the feeling of reading a memoir - in just a few dozen chapters, the emotions between the characters are already full. Although it is not empathetic, the reading is indeed not hollow. The emotional levels and colors are quite distinct, including the friendship with Lily Severus, Sirius's "hateful love for the sea" (possibly? Anyway, I really feel it is quite relevant), and that The complex emotions shown in the plot of being a Death Eater and a former classmate are indescribable. The whole thing gave me a sad and refreshing feeling. The more I read, the more excited I became. Most of the HP novels I read on Tomato before were light-hearted and pleasant. Although they were good-looking, they did not give me a particularly strong emotional experience. This book really satisfied me perfectly. I can only say one word, it's so cool. As for the author's "flaws", I can only say they are minimal. Anyway, they didn't impress me much. Some people may think Sirius is OOC (I don't think so, just read it as a heart-wrenching story. Anyway, it was quite enjoyable for me. Let's put aside some of the bad ones for the time being. Don't miss out on a good book). But I think there is a certain threshold for whether the writing is consistent with other people's characters. Originally, the original work depicts Sirius during his marriage period. There is not much to say, as long as it is not too gloomy or too sunny, it feels okay. I have my own personal opinion. Sirius is also a very contradictory person in the original work. Some people may think that his approach to love should not be like this, but I think it is actually reasonable, because the author mentioned in detail in the article that Sirius had a reference model for his pursuit of the heroine at the beginning, which was James to Lily. Sirius has not felt much love since he was a child. James taught him what friendship is, so he can "feed back" to James, giving people a sense of loyalty that he does not care about his brother's life and death. In fact, this is also a projection of James' love for Sirius. I'm wrong. Regarding love, he initially learned and imitated it. In the process of getting along with the heroine, the heroine gave him some good emotional feedback. At the same time, I feel that he is also crazy in nature, so he is so unhesitating. All in all, I love this book so much. Great support for the author. I must give it a five-star rating.
Excellent writing style, a bit sweet but also a bit be-y [almost crying] I hope the two of them will have sex in the end. It's so painful [crying] He also handled the predator's mistakes very well and rationally. I want to update to the end [sending my heart]
The writing of this book is smooth and fluent, with delicate emotions. The characters are not OOC and are very three-dimensional. The protagonist's character is also very fresh. The main body has a bit of a micro-be atmosphere, but it should be he, right? ⊹꙳ ˶˙ᵕ˙˶ ⊹꙳
Needless to say, it's really beautiful. I must give our Mandy a good ending [crying]
With the current proliferation of AI articles, it is rare to see satisfactory ones. I have finished reading all the old articles, and the new ones are either AI, clichés, or the writing is too poor. Although I watched it while jumping, it was still a good watch overall! So update quickly [I'm about to cry]
I hope the author will not abandon the article. It is very well written.
Please update, please keep updating, but I want to see a good ending, wow, they are so miserable.
Help, it's so beautiful, I feel like I don't belong on a tomato, it's the best torture, and it's very real. Every time Sirius's article is so short, I really cry to death.
Damn it, boss [laughs] The sweet story has a bit of a be tone to it [I'm about to cry] Maybe the only drawback is that the updates are discontinued.
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It's really good to read, but can the author please stop updating? It's really because of the teacher that I got Sirius [crying][crying][crying][crying]
It's very well written. [Like] [Like] It's a bit sadistic. Maybe it's because I have a low tear point. I almost cried like a dog afterwards [cry] [cry]