Lin Juan, who died suddenly while working overtime, became the personal successor of the No. 1 Juan King in the world.
The eldest brother practiced swordplay for hundreds of days without sleep, and the second brother meditated in Hantan and froze into an ice sculpture. The entire sect was filled with the spirit of "if you don't practice, you will die".
Lin Juan, who holds the "No. 1 In the World" training system, looked at his "Mission Failed: Erase" panel, then looked at the group of terrifying classmates around him, and fell into deep thought.
Tired and unable to roll anymore, destroy it.
But just when he was gradually showing off, why did everyone look at him differently!
Heart-throb, heart-throb! Be careful!
Reader comments
Thank you to the author for your hard work, the writing is really good! The whole book reads smoothly and smoothly, and you can enjoy reading it in one sitting. One small detail I like is that Bai Yichen will give Shen Qihan candies made of the most exquisite and best-looking materials. It feels a bit sweet. I really can't stand it (//∇//) There is also a place where Shen Qihan touches that finger when he is drunk. Look at the end of Bai Yichen's eyes (♡>𖥦<)/♥ Oh my God, it feels a little bit subtle, I feel like I'm covering my face... I actually want to know later whether he remembered what he did when he was drunk^ ̳ට ̫ ට ̳^And there was Ye Liuhuo, who touched the sweat on Bai Yichen's collarbone with his finger and licked it lustfully ˃̶͈ ꇴ ˂̶͈ Oh my God, and then the protagonist even blushed ૮₍♡♡₎აMy mom, oh, really, really, really, I am ˃̶͈ ꇴ ˂̶͈ I really feel that I am teasing the protagonist, an innocent boy, like this! Finally, thank you to the author ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧ I feel like I recommend this article to my enemies, and they will ask me, where did you find such a fairy wife? I almost forgot, looking forward to the author's follow-up ^ω^
The author should learn to appropriately delete some things, such as the cultivation process. You can omit part of the book to make it appear more profound. Readers are usually too lazy to read it. Moreover, this book is mainly for women. The emotional pull is well written, and the author has great potential.
Hug Lin Juan [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Come on come on
It looks good ˶ꔷ × ꔷ˶, and the emotional line is also good =ᗜࡇᗜ=, but judging from the current situation, there is a high probability that she will be with the second senior brother in the end [thinking] [laughing]
After reading it completely, I think the author's description of the pull between them was okay, and the battle scenes he described were also okay. And I'm really looking forward to it. Well, the protagonist veterinarian should end up with the second senior brother. Very good looking, very good looking, very good looking
It looks good, but can other senior brothers have more roles?
Looks good, the main character is great
The writing and settings are okay, but the plot feels a bit unsmooth.
But it's still interesting to watch. Come on, come on.
The emotional line is really super good, like a slow stream, it feels very natural, not too fast, not too slow, which is just right for me. The characters are also well created, and it looks very comfortable.
Thank you to the author for your hard work, the writing is really good! The whole book reads smoothly and smoothly, and you can enjoy reading it in one sitting. One small detail I like is that Bai Yichen will give Shen Qihan candies made of the most exquisite and best-looking materials. It feels a bit sweet. I really can't stand it (//∇//) There is also a place where Shen Qihan touches that finger when he is drunk. Look at the end of Bai Yichen's eyes (♡>𖥦<)/♥ Oh my God, it feels a little bit subtle, I feel like I'm covering my face... I actually want to know later whether he remembered what he did when he was drunk^ ̳ට ̫ ට ̳^And there was Ye Liuhuo, who touched the sweat on Bai Yichen's collarbone with his finger and licked it lustfully ˃̶͈ ꇴ ˂̶͈ Oh my God, and then the protagonist even blushed ૮₍♡♡₎აMy mom, oh, really, really, really, I am ˃̶͈ ꇴ ˂̶͈ I really feel that I am teasing the protagonist, an innocent boy, like this! Finally, thank you to the author ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧ I feel like I recommend this article to my enemies, and they will ask me, where did you find such a fairy wife? I almost forgot, looking forward to the author's follow-up ^ω^
The author should learn to appropriately delete some things, such as the cultivation process. You can omit part of the book to make it appear more profound. Readers are usually too lazy to read it. Moreover, this book is mainly for women. The emotional pull is well written, and the author has great potential.
Hug Lin Juan [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Come on come on
It looks good ˶ꔷ × ꔷ˶, and the emotional line is also good =ᗜࡇᗜ=, but judging from the current situation, there is a high probability that she will be with the second senior brother in the end [thinking] [laughing]
After reading it completely, I think the author's description of the pull between them was okay, and the battle scenes he described were also okay. And I'm really looking forward to it. Well, the protagonist veterinarian should end up with the second senior brother. Very good looking, very good looking, very good looking
It looks good, but can other senior brothers have more roles?
Looks good, the main character is great
The writing and settings are okay, but the plot feels a bit unsmooth. But it's still interesting to watch. Come on, come on.
The emotional line is really super good, like a slow stream, it feels very natural, not too fast, not too slow, which is just right for me. The characters are also well created, and it looks very comfortable.