You Already Have Children, so Why Do You Still Want to Fall in Love?

The author writes very well in all aspects Maybe it's my own reason, I just feel that I prefer to read a single female protagonist in that kind of subject matter. Multiple female protagonists are not so good-looking, or female protagonists, because writing with multiple female protagonists will feel complicated and messy, so I am not very accepting of this kind of subject matter with multiple female protagonists. I wish the author will get better and better, I will polish it first.

How can I put it this way? This is the first time I've seen a story about a daughter traveling through time in this variety comic. It's quite interesting. Overall, the casting is good, but after reading part of it, I had a very confusing feeling. Also in the opening chapter, Yukinoshita Hyou's little beetle who traveled through time carries a paternity test certificate with him? Even cooking for Yukinoshita is weird. But these are all minor problems, innocuous. The most important thing is that I can't grasp the key points. The feeling in my mind is that there are always scattered text fragments, which cannot be summarized into a logically complete and self-consistent story. I hope the author can continue to update and improve. Come on

The protagonist is not like a time traveler, but more like someone with a killer background, like a native, and the daughter comes from the future. Basically, it is no different from other comprehensive comics.

Although there are only 10 chapters at the moment, it feels good when I read it. At least the first one to register Yukinoshita's service department trademark in advance gave people a bright and fresh feeling. However, there are still too few chapters. It is not suitable to decide what to do next, so I will stock up.

A very interesting male protagonist, a rational monster like Japanese comics, and a righteous partner. Like the early combination of Emiya Kiritsugu and the male protagonist of the Gray series. Unlike most of Tomato's comprehensive comics, the focus of the portrayal is not on the male protagonist, but on the facial features. The disadvantage is that the foreshadowing is a bit messy and tiring in appearance. Nice refreshing article.

Write about your hobbies? Rather than the male protagonist being used to this kind of pathetic middle-class pretense [covering face] and being unable to live without love, then he should just marry his son.

The author should change the age and school age and try not to use Shen He, a senior high school student.

Not bad, the story of the article is very suspenseful. Like like

The protagonist's character design is very novel, and the description of the original character is also very full. It is a work that will motivate you to continue reading as long as you are interested in the characters.

It's pretty cool, but are these the only two children or are they being added later?

A righteous partner, haha, in short, very good

This is a very good comic book. The author's descriptions of the characters are very consistent with the original work. I hope it can be maintained. Blood letter begging for Hayasaka's love role [crying]

It's interesting, but why is it labeled as a single heroine even though it has multiple heroines?

Personally I think it looks pretty good

The world view, character design and story structure are all very good. Recommend