For the Age of Soul Travel article, please read my first three chapters. It's not well written, so you throw mud at me, thank you.
This book respects the original work "The Ordinary World", but also regrets some of its regrets.
I try to keep as close to the style of the original work as I can to write down some of the regrets I want to make up for.
There are no plug-ins or systems in this book. I even wanted to write the main character without a wife, but I thought it would be too cruel. Who do you think would be a good wife? How about Tian Runye? Or Tian Xiaoxia? Hao Hongmei? I'm also undecided, or is it someone else? .
Everyone regrets why Lu Yao wrote Tian Xiaoxia to death when she wrote "Ordinary World".
Why was the poignant love between Jin Bo and the Tibetan girl brushed aside, leaving Jin Bo with a lifetime of regrets?
If Hao Hongmei hadn't reached out to steal the handkerchief, what would have happened next?
What changes will happen to the story of the two brothers Sun Shaoping and Sun Shaoan under the butterfly effect of the protagonist?
What about everyone else? …
I hope everyone can see my performance. I try my best to write well.
Reader comments
Updated to chapter 99, give it a score of 9.7. ✅The writing style is very good and the emotions are very delicate. I like the author's layout the most. It is very comfortable to read.
✅Although the background of the novel is very poor and difficult, the addition of the male protagonist brings a little hope based on the hardship of the original work.
There is no golden finger in the system. The male protagonist traveled back to the 1970s and became Sun Shaoping's classmate with tuition funded by his uncle.
He was elected class president with his excellent knowledge and was admired by students from well-off families. Eating Bingcai calmly dispels Shaoping and Hongmei's inferiority complex. Take the lead in helping classmates fight against the contradictions of planting trees, and twist the classmates into a rope.
The male protagonist will not educate others from the commanding heights because he has experienced the prosperity of later generations. Instead, he will respect the current life background and change the fate of others subtly or silently. Help Shaoping work-study, give advice to Shaoping's brother-in-law who wants to make money, rescue Runye who is in trouble...
❌Why didn't you save your third uncle [I almost cried]
In the early stage, the male protagonist focused on studying, working hard, changing family difficulties, and enlightening his classmates. It was really good to watch.
But today the trap was abandoned. The male protagonist pursued Run Ye and became a couple. But at the same time, the relationship with Hongmei was too entangled, and she was always kidnapped by morality, and she started a harem and had a relationship...
I feel it is the best one besides Wang Manyin's book.
The front part is pretty good, but the back part seems to have been written by someone else, and the harem was abandoned.
Author, hurry up and update quickly. Three chapters a day is not enough [angry]
The previous article was pretty good, but the latest update is no longer good. There were still many female protagonists in business in the 1970s. Goodbye.
Not bad, cheers for the author
To be honest, it is very well written. I keep updating it and will not delete it from my bookshelf. I keep following it.
I have a question after seeing the latest chapter: How much older is Tian Runye than Li Xiangyang?
I can't make it, I started raising it in chapter 99, and it's still involved in love in chapter 27, and I have to continue raising it [awkward laugh] Mainly in the ordinary world, love is not so worth talking about, it is crushed by the weight of life [face covering] Hey, I think this is really unreasonable, let's change it to 3⭐, it's for the subject matter.
It's pretty good, the writing is very delicate, but the plot is a bit bland and there's nothing that grabs people's attention. Let's see how it unfolds later.
Super nice, new perspective
Good, good, good, good
Absurd world, absurd time, crazy people
Very good, delicate writing, good book
Five-star praise, really well written
It's very well written, why didn't you rate it?
Yes, I hope the author can stick to it. Very well written, looking forward to it
It's good to read, I love reading it, cheers for the author!
Oh, yes, I have a question. Jin Junwu is from Shuangshui Village, right? The main characters in the story are basically from Shuangshui Village. Did I write it wrongly and write Jar Village?
Updated to chapter 99, give it a score of 9.7. ✅The writing style is very good and the emotions are very delicate. I like the author's layout the most. It is very comfortable to read. ✅Although the background of the novel is very poor and difficult, the addition of the male protagonist brings a little hope based on the hardship of the original work. There is no golden finger in the system. The male protagonist traveled back to the 1970s and became Sun Shaoping's classmate with tuition funded by his uncle. He was elected class president with his excellent knowledge and was admired by students from well-off families. Eating Bingcai calmly dispels Shaoping and Hongmei's inferiority complex. Take the lead in helping classmates fight against the contradictions of planting trees, and twist the classmates into a rope. The male protagonist will not educate others from the commanding heights because he has experienced the prosperity of later generations. Instead, he will respect the current life background and change the fate of others subtly or silently. Help Shaoping work-study, give advice to Shaoping's brother-in-law who wants to make money, rescue Runye who is in trouble... ❌Why didn't you save your third uncle [I almost cried] In the early stage, the male protagonist focused on studying, working hard, changing family difficulties, and enlightening his classmates. It was really good to watch. But today the trap was abandoned. The male protagonist pursued Run Ye and became a couple. But at the same time, the relationship with Hongmei was too entangled, and she was always kidnapped by morality, and she started a harem and had a relationship...
I feel it is the best one besides Wang Manyin's book. The front part is pretty good, but the back part seems to have been written by someone else, and the harem was abandoned.
Author, hurry up and update quickly. Three chapters a day is not enough [angry] The previous article was pretty good, but the latest update is no longer good. There were still many female protagonists in business in the 1970s. Goodbye.
Not bad, cheers for the author
To be honest, it is very well written. I keep updating it and will not delete it from my bookshelf. I keep following it. I have a question after seeing the latest chapter: How much older is Tian Runye than Li Xiangyang? I can't make it, I started raising it in chapter 99, and it's still involved in love in chapter 27, and I have to continue raising it [awkward laugh] Mainly in the ordinary world, love is not so worth talking about, it is crushed by the weight of life [face covering] Hey, I think this is really unreasonable, let's change it to 3⭐, it's for the subject matter.
It's pretty good, the writing is very delicate, but the plot is a bit bland and there's nothing that grabs people's attention. Let's see how it unfolds later.
Super nice, new perspective
Good, good, good, good
Absurd world, absurd time, crazy people
Very good, delicate writing, good book
Five-star praise, really well written
It's very well written, why didn't you rate it?
Yes, I hope the author can stick to it. Very well written, looking forward to it
It's good to read, I love reading it, cheers for the author! Oh, yes, I have a question. Jin Junwu is from Shuangshui Village, right? The main characters in the story are basically from Shuangshui Village. Did I write it wrongly and write Jar Village?